Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with the present simple: “Yes, I often feel tired after lectures.” Use “attending lectures,” not “went to lecture cars,” and replace “those information” with the uncountable noun “that information.” Avoid repeating “really” and connect the reason more naturally with “because” or “especially when.”

Example: Yes, I often feel tired after attending lectures, especially when they last for two hours. They contain a lot of information, so I need to concentrate for a long time and feel mentally exhausted afterward.

Suggestion: Give a complete answer instead of beginning with the fragment “Except for processed lecture information.” Use “I feel tired when I am doing assignments” or “after I finish assignments,” and explain the reason clearly. The final phrase is unclear, so replace it with a specific result, such as needing to rest or going to bed early.

Example: I usually feel tired after long lectures and when I am working on assignments. Some assignments contain a lot of reading and several steps, so they require a great deal of concentration. As a result, I often need to take a break afterward.

Suggestion: State your usual action with “I usually take a short nap” rather than repeating “I will have.” “Premium sleep” is not natural here; use “a short nap” or “some rest.” Correct the grammar in “let my brain rests” to “let my brain rest,” and explain that sleep helps you recover rather than “permanently forget the tired things.”

Example: When I feel tired, I usually take a short nap or rest for a while. This helps my brain and body recover, and I feel more focused afterward. If I cannot sleep, I drink some water and take a short break from studying.

Suggestion: Answer consistently in the present tense: “No, I usually don’t go out when I feel tired.” Use “friends” and “them” when speaking generally, and replace “it raised a lot of energy” with “it takes a lot of energy.” The idea about being shy is relevant, but express it clearly and avoid repeated words such as “also.”

Example: No, I usually stay at home when I feel tired because I do not have enough energy to chat or socialize. I am also a little shy, so spending time with friends can be tiring when I am already exhausted. I prefer to rest and meet them when I feel better.

× Definitely I often feel tired after I went to lecture cars because the lecture cast Pemeros is really long, it's around two hours and it has a lot of information so I'm really tired to process those information in my mind.

✓ Definitely, I often feel tired after I go to lectures because the lecture is really long. It lasts around two hours and contains a lot of information, so I am often tired afterward.

The question asks about a regular experience, so use the present tense go instead of the past tense went. Use present-tense verbs such as lasts and contains to describe a usual situation.

× Definitely I often feel tired after I went to lecture cars because the lecture cast Pemeros is really long, it's around two hours and it has a lot of information so I'm really tired to process those information in my mind.

✓ Definitely, I often feel tired after I go to lectures because the lecture is really long. It lasts around two hours and contains a lot of information, so I am too tired to process all that information properly.

Use too tired to describe being unable or unwilling to do something because of tiredness. The phrase tired to process is not grammatically appropriate in this context.

× Definitely I often feel tired after I went to lecture cars because the lecture cast Pemeros is really long, it's around two hours and it has a lot of information so I'm really tired to process those information in my mind.

✓ Definitely, I often feel tired after I go to lectures because the lecture is really long. It lasts around two hours and contains a lot of information, so I am too tired to process all that information properly.

Information is an uncountable noun, so do not use those information. Use all that information or a lot of information instead.

× Except for processed lecture information.

✓ Apart from processing lecture information, I also always feel tired after doing my assignments.

The original sentence is incomplete because it does not contain a complete subject-verb structure. Adding I also always feel tired makes it a complete sentence.

× Also I always feel tired when after I doing the assignments because the assignments have a lot of words and a lot of steps I need to follow.

✓ I also always feel tired after doing my assignments because they contain a lot of words and many steps that I need to follow.

After a preposition such as after, use the -ing form of the verb: after doing. Do not use the incomplete form I doing.

× Also I always feel tired when after I doing the assignments because the assignments have a lot of words and a lot of steps I need to follow.

✓ I also always feel tired after I do my assignments because they contain a lot of words and many steps that I need to follow.

This describes a repeated habit, so use the present tense do rather than an incomplete verb form. The subject I takes the base form do.

× I will have I will have some small premium sleep because I think sleep can let my brain rests and my whole body rests.

✓ I usually take a short nap because I think sleep allows my brain and my whole body to rest.

Use the natural countable noun phrase a short nap instead of some small premium sleep. A singular countable noun such as nap needs the article a.

× I will have I will have some small premium sleep because I think sleep can let my brain rests and my whole body rests and I can permanently forget forget the tired things.

✓ I usually take a short nap because I think sleep allows my brain and my whole body to rest, and I can temporarily forget how tired I feel.

The question asks what you usually do when you feel tired, so the present tense usually take is more suitable than the future form will have. Use the present tense for regular actions.

× I will have I will have some small premium sleep because I think sleep can let my brain rests and my whole body rests and I can permanently forget forget the tired things.

✓ I usually take a short nap because I think sleep allows my brain and my whole body to rest, and I can temporarily forget how tired I feel.

After let or allow, the following verb must have the correct form. In this correction, allows is followed by to rest, and the sentence consistently describes a general situation in the present tense.

× No, I will not go out with my friend when I was tired because yes I feel tired so I don't have enough energy to chat to play with him also also I was eye people so shy people if I need to chat with my friend it raised a lot of energy.

✓ No, I do not go out with my friends when I feel tired because I do not have enough energy to chat or play with them. I am also a shy person, so chatting with my friends requires a lot of energy.

When referring to more than one friend in general, use the plural form friends. The plural form is also more consistent with the question about going out with friends.

× No, I will not go out with my friend when I was tired because yes I feel tired so I don't have enough energy to chat to play with him also also I was eye people so shy people if I need to chat with my friend it raised a lot of energy.

✓ No, I do not go out with my friends when I feel tired because I do not have enough energy to chat or play with them. I am also a shy person, so chatting with my friends requires a lot of energy.

This answer describes a usual response, so use the present tense do not go and feel instead of the future form will not go and the past form was.

× No, I will not go out with my friend when I was tired because yes I feel tired so I don't have enough energy to chat to play with him.

✓ No, I do not go out with my friends when I feel tired because I do not have enough energy to chat or play with them.

Them is the correct object pronoun for several friends. Him refers to one male person, but the sentence refers to friends in general.

× No, I will not go out with my friend when I was tired because yes I feel tired so I don't have enough energy to chat to play with him.

✓ No, I do not go out with my friends when I feel tired because I do not have enough energy to chat or play with them.

Use the conjunction or when presenting alternatives such as chatting or playing. The original phrase chat to play incorrectly joins the two verbs.

× Also I was eye people so shy people if I need to chat with my friend it raised a lot of energy.

✓ I am also a shy person, so chatting with my friends requires a lot of energy.

Person is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a in a shy person. The phrase shy people does not correctly describe one speaker.

× Also I was eye people so shy people if I need to chat with my friend it raised a lot of energy.

✓ I am also a shy person, so chatting with my friends requires a lot of energy.

When an activity is used as the subject of a sentence, use the -ing form: chatting. This form functions as a noun and correctly introduces the activity that requires energy.