Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly in the present tense: say that you often feel tired, then give one clear reason. Avoid repeating “tired” and remove fillers such as “uh” and “umm.” The phrase “I feel tired in my body” is unnatural; use “I feel physically tired.” Also, “most of the work becomes your tiredness” is unclear, so replace it with a specific explanation about your daily workload.

Example: Yes, I often feel tired after working all day, especially when I have a lot of physical tasks to complete. By the evening, I usually feel physically exhausted and need some time to relax.

Suggestion: Use a clear time or condition in the answer, such as “I feel tired when I work for several hours without a break.” Keep the tense consistent in the present because the question asks about a usual situation. Use natural expressions such as “do physical work,” “feel exhausted,” and “take a rest.” Add one specific result to make the answer more developed.

Example: I usually feel tired when I do physical work for several hours without taking a break. For example, after cleaning or carrying heavy things, I feel exhausted, so I sit down and rest for a while.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer and use natural verb patterns: “I take a rest” and “I watch my favorite films.” The phrase “this film me very comfortable” is incorrect; say “watching them helps me relax.” Avoid fillers and explain the result clearly, using a linking word such as “After that.”

Example: When I feel tired, I usually take a short rest and watch my favorite shows on TV or my phone. This helps me relax, and after that, I normally feel refreshed and ready to continue my day.

Suggestion: Answer the yes-or-no question immediately and then explain your choice. Your main idea is understandable, but “I love a lot all of them” and “it’s not the reason I also going” are unnatural. Use “I still go out if I have enough energy,” and add a contrast to show that you sometimes stay home when you are extremely tired.

Example: Yes, I sometimes still go out with my friends because spending time with them helps me relax. However, if I am completely exhausted, I prefer to stay home and get some sleep instead.

× I often feel tired when I was working the whole day and I got tired so much.

✓ I often feel tired when I work all day and get very tired.

The answer describes a habitual situation, so the present tense is needed instead of the past forms was working and got. Use the present tense when explaining what usually happens.

× That is why I feel tired in my body.

✓ That is why I feel physically tired.

Physically is the appropriate adverb to describe tiredness in the body. The expression tired in my body is not natural English.

× Most of the work becomes your tiredness.

✓ Most of the work makes me tired.

The pronoun your refers to the listener, but the speaker is describing their own experience. Use me, and use the causative structure makes me tired to express that the work causes tiredness.

× I do a lot of work such as most of physical work.

✓ I do a lot of work, such as a lot of physical work.

Most of physical work is not an appropriate quantifier phrase in this context. Use a lot of physical work or mainly physical work to describe a large amount of work.

× I do a lot of work such as most of physical work and other works a long time.

✓ I do a lot of work, such as physical work and other types of work, for a long time.

Work is usually an uncountable noun when it means activity or labor, so other works is incorrect here. Use other types of work or other tasks instead.

× I do other works a long time.

✓ I do other types of work for a long time.

Use the preposition for before a duration such as a long time. The phrase a long time cannot directly follow the verb without a preposition in this sentence.

× Then I was exhausted and I feel very tired in my body.

✓ Then I become exhausted and feel very tired physically.

This answer describes what usually happens, so become should be used instead of the past-tense form was. Feel remains in the present tense because it is part of the same habitual description.

× That is why I resting.

✓ That is why I rest.

The clause I resting is missing an auxiliary verb. Because the speaker is describing a usual action, the simple present form I rest is the most suitable correction.

× I have to do most of rest.

✓ I have to get plenty of rest.

Rest is an uncountable noun, and most of rest is not the correct expression here. Use plenty of rest or a lot of rest to mean sufficient rest.

× I have to do most of rest and watching my favorite things on TV or mobile.

✓ I have to rest and watch my favorite programs on TV or on my mobile.

The two actions should use parallel verb forms: rest and watch. The original sentence incorrectly combines do with rest and the -ing form watching.

× This film me very comfortable and enjoyable.

✓ These films make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

The original sentence is missing the verb make. Also, films is plural, so it takes make, not makes. The structure make me feel is used to show that something causes a feeling.

× I love a lot all of them.

✓ I love them all very much.

The adverbial phrase very much should come after the object. The pronoun them should also come before all in the natural expression love them all very much.

× If I am tired, it is not the reason I also going.

✓ If I am tired, that is not a reason for me not to go.

The phrase I also going is missing the auxiliary verb am and has an incomplete structure. The corrected sentence clearly expresses that being tired does not stop the speaker from going out.