Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, since) to connect ideas and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often feel tired, mainly because I don't sleep well and I have a busy schedule. For example, I usually stay up late studying and then wake up early for work, so I feel exhausted most days.

Suggestion: Give a clear time frame and one concrete reason. Use linking words to show contrast or cause (for instance, although, because). Keep sentences natural and avoid repeating identical phrases.

Example: I usually feel tired as soon as I wake up, whether it's in the morning or after a nap, because my sleep is often fragmented. Although I sleep for several hours, I still wake up feeling unrefreshed, which suggests I might not be reaching deep sleep.

Suggestion: Provide one or two specific actions you take and evaluate their effectiveness. Use linking words (for example, however, so) and avoid repeating words. Limit response to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: When I'm tired, I usually rest by lying in bed and trying to relax; however, this often only helps a little. Sometimes I go for a short walk or drink tea to boost my energy, but these measures are only partially effective.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give a brief, specific reason and an example of what you do instead. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid repetitive phrases like 'for myself.' Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: No, I usually cancel plans when I'm tired because I need to rest and recover. For instance, instead of going out, I stay home and read or listen to music so I can recharge for the next day.

× Yes, I often feel tired and I don't really know why this happens.

✓ Yes, I often feel tired and I don't really know why this happens.

No grammatical change needed; sentence correctly uses present tense to describe a general state and a habitual problem.

× I'm trying.

✓ I'm trying to find out why.

Original fragment 'I'm trying.' is grammatically a sentence but incomplete in context. Expanding to 'I'm trying to find out why.' completes the thought and clarifies the action. Use a verb phrase that indicates the intended activity.

× I'm still trying to figure out where exactly is the problem that or that I am finding.

✓ I'm still trying to figure out exactly where the problem is.

The original contains redundant words and incorrect word order for an indirect question. In indirect questions, the subject comes before the verb ('where the problem is'), not the inverted order of direct questions. Remove extra fragments like 'that or that I am finding.'

× Why do I feel tired most of the time?

✓ Why do I feel tired most of the time?

This sentence is correct as a direct question in the present simple asking about a habitual state; no change needed.

× I start feeling tired whenever I wake up from sleep.

✓ I start feeling tired whenever I wake up from sleep.

This sentence correctly uses present simple to describe a habitual action; no correction required.

× Let it be at night or at morning, doesn't matter.

✓ Let it be at night or in the morning; it doesn't matter.

Use 'in the morning' (not 'at morning') for the time of day. Also add 'it' before 'doesn't matter' to form a complete clause and use a semicolon or comma to connect the clauses.

× Whenever I wake up from sleeping I instantly feel.

✓ Whenever I wake up from sleeping, I instantly feel tired.

The original ends abruptly without the complement 'tired.' Add the adjective to complete the predicate. Also insert a comma after the introductory clause.

× I instantly start feeling tired and I am trying to find out a solution.

✓ I instantly start feeling tired and I'm trying to find a solution.

Reduce redundancy: 'find out a solution' is unidiomatic; use 'find a solution.' Contractions are acceptable in speech. Tenses are consistent present continuous for ongoing effort.

× Whenever I'm feeling tired, it seems that I'm doing nothing and lying around lying around on the bed.

✓ Whenever I'm feeling tired, it seems that I'm doing nothing and just lying around on the bed.

Remove the duplicated phrase 'lying around' and add 'just' for natural spoken emphasis. The gerund '-ing' forms after 'doing' and 'lying' are correct.

× Sometimes I try to do some activities that would help me get rid of feeling of feeling this tiredness, but it really doesn't help.

✓ Sometimes I try to do activities that would help me get rid of this tiredness, but it really doesn't help.

Remove repeated 'feeling' and replace 'feeling of feeling this tiredness' with the noun phrase 'this tiredness' for clarity and correctness. Pronoun 'it' in 'it really doesn't help' correctly refers to the activities.

× No, in most of the cases that has been seen, whenever I am tired, I try to cancel all my plans because I need to give some me time.

✓ No, in most cases, whenever I am tired, I try to cancel all my plans because I need to give myself some time.

Use 'in most cases' (no 'the') and replace the incorrect 'give some me time' with the reflexive construction 'give myself some time.' This fixes article and reflexive pronoun errors.

× I need to have some time for myself and to be, to feel for myself, to be there for myself.

✓ I need to have some time for myself, to be, to reflect, and to be there for myself.

The phrase 'to feel for myself' is unclear and unidiomatic. Use 'to reflect' or 'to rest' depending on intended meaning. Also add commas to separate items in the list. Preposition 'for myself' is correct in 'time for myself' and 'be there for myself' is acceptable.