Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence. Avoid filler phrases (e.g. "I mean") and correct minor grammar (use present perfect or simple present consistently). Add one brief supporting detail with a linking word.

Example: Not really. I rarely feel tired because I have done physical training and sports since childhood, so I usually have good energy levels.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific details using linking words (e.g. "for example", "because"). Avoid unclear words like "strand" or "hides" and replace with "extra" or "another".

Example: I feel tired after particularly intense training days. For example, if I do a mixed martial arts session and then another strength session at the gym the same day, I get very tired because both sessions demand a lot of energy.

Suggestion: Give a clear, natural answer and use correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrase "non wet"; if you mean "non-vegetarian" or "meat", say so. Provide a brief reason and an example of a typical meal using linking words.

Example: I usually eat a hearty meal to regain energy. For example, I prefer meat-based dishes like chicken or beef and include rice or potatoes, because they help me recover after strenuous exercise.

Suggestion: Keep the answer natural and avoid absolute statements that sound exaggerated. Use present tense and concise supporting detail, and avoid irrelevant habits (mentioning smoking may be unnecessary).

Example: Yes, I usually still go out with my friends when I'm tired. In the evenings we often meet for a cup of tea and a chat, which helps me relax before I go home.

× Well, I don't really feel tired because I mean since childhood my background is to do the physical workout and sports activities so I always feel energetic and not really.

✓ Well, I don't really feel tired because, since childhood, my routine has been to do physical workouts and sports activities, so I usually feel energetic.

The original mixes present and imperfect expressions awkwardly. 'Since childhood' requires a present perfect or a present perfect continuous structure to link past to present (grammar type 6). 'My background is to do the physical workout' is unnatural; use 'my routine has been to do physical workouts' to show ongoing habit. Also 'always' and 'not really' conflict; 'usually' is clearer. Suggestions: use present perfect for actions starting in the past and continuing now, simplify 'background' to 'routine' or 'habit', and ensure logical adverbs (always/usally) match meaning.

× I feel tired when I had a good session of mixed martial arts and on the same day I had a strand training as well in the gym.

✓ I feel tired when I have a good session of mixed martial arts and, on the same day, have a strength training session in the gym.

The sentence mixes present ('I feel tired') with past ('I had') incorrectly. Use present simple for habitual situations (grammar type 5 and 6). Also 'strand training' is likely a word choice error; use 'strength training session'. Suggestions: keep verb tenses consistent for habitual actions (use present simple), and correct word choice.

× So on those hides I feel very tired because it takes a lot of energy to do two sessions of one of strength training and other is of mixed martial arts.

✓ So on those days I feel very tired because it takes a lot of energy to do two sessions: one of strength training and the other of mixed martial arts.

There are word choice and structural issues: 'hides' should be 'days', and the clause listing two sessions is poorly ordered. This is a sentence structure error (grammar type 26). Suggestions: fix vocabulary ('days'), use a colon or clearer phrasing when listing two items, and maintain parallel structure ('one... and the other...').

× Well, when I feel tired I eat a lot. If you talk about what I eat, it's basically non wet, pork, beef.

✓ Well, when I feel tired I eat a lot. If you ask about what I eat, it's basically non-vegetarian food like pork and beef.

'Non wet' is incorrect; likely intended 'non-veg' or 'non-vegetarian'. This is misuse of adjectives (grammar type 13). Also 'If you talk about' is unnatural for this context; 'If you ask about' fits better. Suggestions: use 'non-vegetarian' or 'meat' and provide clear examples.

× These all are the things when I feel tired I eat a lot and from these all things, I get energy and we get I get again energized.

✓ These are the things I eat when I'm tired, and from them I get energy and feel energized again.

This sentence has pronoun misuse and redundant phrasing (grammar types 12 and 27). 'These all are the things when I feel tired' is awkward; use 'These are the things I eat when I'm tired.' 'From these all things' should be 'from them'. Also 'we get I get' mixes subjects; stick to 'I get'. Suggestions: simplify the sentence, use correct pronouns ('them'), and ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent subject.

× Well, absolutely, this is the only thing which I can't ever miss in my life.

✓ Absolutely, this is the one thing I can never miss in my life.

'Can't ever' is understandable but less natural than 'can never'; 'which' is acceptable but 'that' or omitting the relative pronoun is more natural. This is a present tense/habit expression issue (grammar type 6). Suggestions: use concise phrasing for emphasis: 'the one thing I can never miss.'

× I mean really each and every day I go with my friends to hang out with them in the evening and we had a cup of tea and a cigarette to smoke and afterwards we came home.

✓ I mean, really, every day I go out with my friends in the evening; we have a cup of tea and smoke a cigarette, and afterwards we go home.

The sentence mixes present habitual actions ('every day I go') with past tense ('we had', 'we came'). Use present simple for repeated habitual actions (grammar type 6). Also phrase order and repetition ('go with my friends to hang out with them') is redundant. Suggestions: use present simple for routines ('go out', 'have', 'smoke', 'go home') and simplify redundant expressions.