Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、英語に戻すとより自然で効果的になります。2〜3文程度で理由を明確に述べ、冗長な表現は避けてください。また、具体的な頻度の表現（e.g. “often”, “sometimes”）を使うと良いです。発音や文法を改善するために、短くはっきりした文を練習しましょう。

Example: I often feel tired, especially after long study sessions because I concentrate for hours without breaks. For example, I usually feel exhausted in the evening when I have been reading or writing for three to four hours.

Suggestion: 回答が断片的で文法や語彙の誤りが目立ちます。まずは一文目で状況を明確に述べ、二文目で理由と具体例を付けてください（接続詞や副詞でつなぐ）。あいまいな表現は避け、正しい時制や前置詞を使いましょう。発音で不明瞭だった部分は、ネイティブが使う自然なフレーズに置き換えて練習してください。

Example: I usually feel tired during tests and group projects because I get stressed in those situations. For example, in group work I find it hard to focus when others talk at the same time, so I become mentally exhausted.

Suggestion: 内容は分かりますが、文法と語順、語彙の使い方を改善すると自然になります。まず主語＋動詞の基本形で答え、次に理由と具体例を1文で加えてください。例えば “I go to a café” や “I treat myself to a sweet” といった自然な表現を使い、不要な語の重複を避けましょう。

Example: When I feel tired, I usually go to a café and treat myself to a chocolate cake because I have a sweet tooth. This helps me relax and boosts my energy for a while.

× Good job!

✓ I often feel tired.

The student replied with an irrelevant phrase instead of answering the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure/content error: there is no connection between the question and the response. Suggestion: answer the question directly with a complete sentence such as 'I often feel tired' and add reasons if required.

× When I took the test and group work

✓ When I take tests or do group work

The original uses past tense 'took' incorrectly for a habitual or general situation. Replace with simple present 'take' and the plural 'tests' to indicate general experience. Also use 'do group work' for idiomatic collocation. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions.

× I usually type hearing so bad

✓ I usually have trouble hearing well

The phrase 'type hearing so bad' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use a present participle or stative verb construction: 'have trouble hearing' plus adverb 'well'. This corrects collocation and word choice. Suggestion: say 'I usually have trouble hearing well' or 'I often find it hard to hear clearly.'

× I prefer studying by around

✓ I prefer studying alone

'By around' is incorrect preposition usage and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'alone' or 'by myself.' Replace with 'alone' or 'by myself' to convey preference. Suggestion: use 'I prefer studying alone.'

× I I

✓ I

The repeated pronoun 'I I' is an error caused by accidental duplication. Remove the duplicate to form a single subject. Suggestion: proofread to avoid repeated words.

× When I feel tired I always go to the coffee because I have a sweet tooth and I usually order the cake especially like chocolate cake.

✓ When I feel tired, I always go to a coffee shop because I have a sweet tooth, and I usually order cake, especially chocolate cake.

Several article and word order issues: 'go to the coffee' is wrong; use 'go to a coffee shop' or 'go to the cafe.' 'Order the cake' is too specific; use 'order cake' or 'order a cake' depending on context. 'Especially like chocolate cake' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'especially chocolate cake.' Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: 'When I feel tired, I always go to a coffee shop because I have a sweet tooth, and I usually order cake, especially chocolate cake.'

× So to eating this my feeling is better.

✓ Eating this makes me feel better.

The original uses an infinitive/gerund phrase incorrectly. Use the verb 'make' plus object 'me' and adjective 'better' to express cause and effect: 'Eating this makes me feel better.' Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object order for result clauses (e.g., 'That/It makes me feel better').