Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No + lý do ngắn), sau đó cung cấp 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể về lý do và cách bạn định thay đổi thói quen. Tránh lặp từ, sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "late night" → "late at night", "adjust schedule", bỏ những từ thừa như "uh"). Giữ độ dài tối đa 4 câu để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Example: Yes, I often feel tired because I go to school early and study late at night. For example, I usually wake up at 6am and don't finish studying until 11pm, so I feel exhausted. I plan to improve this by adjusting my schedule to go to bed earlier and take short study breaks during the day.

Suggestion: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng lý do và dùng từ chính xác. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời thẳng câu hỏi rồi giải thích cụ thể khi nào và tại sao bạn mệt. Thay "late night" bằng "late at night" hoặc "in the evening"; sửa "memorizing people" (không rõ) sang ý định đúng như "things I need to remember". Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, dùng liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc.

Example: I usually feel tired late at night, just before I fall asleep. This is because I often replay the day's events and worry about things I need to remember for school. As a result, my mind stays active and I struggle to relax.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời hiện tại có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và ý không rõ ràng. Trả lời trực tiếp (I usually.../I like to...) và nêu một hoặc hai hoạt động cụ thể bạn làm để thư giãn, cùng với lý do ngắn gọn. Sửa thì động từ ("I always looking" → "I usually read"), tránh câu không có nghĩa và từ lặp. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "novels" và "films" hoặc "Chinese dramas".

Example: When I'm tired, I usually read novels or watch Chinese films to relax. These activities help me forget stressful thoughts and unwind after a busy day, so I can sleep more easily.

× To be honest, every day I go to school early and have to study until late night, it makes me feel very uncomfortable and tired too.

✓ To be honest, I go to school early every day and have to study until late at night, so I feel very uncomfortable and tired.

The original sentence has run-on structure and incorrect word order. Move 'every day' after the verb phrase for natural order, use 'late at night' and join clauses with 'so' to show result. Suggestion: break complex ideas into connected clauses and place adverbs (every day) close to the verb they modify.

× So if I have a chance I will change my harmful habit, like uh, adjust. Schedule or replace our My Entertain Entertainment team.

✓ If I had the chance, I would change my harmful habits, for example by adjusting my schedule or replacing my entertainment activities.

The sentence mixes tenses and contains awkward fragments and incorrect nouns. Use a conditional 'If I had the chance, I would...' for hypothetical change; use plural 'habits' and correct verbs 'adjusting' and 'replacing' with gerunds after 'by'. Replace 'entertainment team' with 'entertainment activities' for clarity.

× I often feel tired in the late night, the time before I sleep, because I always think about that day, about the memorizing people.

✓ I often feel tired late at night, before I sleep, because I always think about that day and about the people I need to remember.

Use 'late at night' and simpler 'before I sleep' for natural phrasing; 'memorizing people' is incorrect — use 'people I need to remember' or 'people I was memorizing'. Maintain present simple 'I often feel' and clarify the object of 'think about'.

× When I feel exhausted, I always looking for your novels and Chinese movies, you know, this type of entertainment are the ways that I entertainment and unwind after a long day, and I also feel lovely.

✓ When I feel exhausted, I always look for novels and Chinese movies; this type of entertainment is how I relax and unwind after a long day, and it also makes me feel better.

Use base form 'look' after 'always' (not 'always looking'), correct subject-verb agreement 'this type of entertainment is', and choose verbs 'relax' and 'unwind' instead of 'entertainment' as a verb. 'Feel lovely' is unnatural; use 'feel better'.

× When washing their love, which is my wishes.

✓ Watching them is something I enjoy and wish for.

Original fragment lacks clear subject and verb and contains unclear phrase 'washing their love'. Likely intended 'watching them' (movies/novels) and 'which is my wish'. Provide a complete sentence with subject and verb. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb and avoid unclear word choices.