Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, grammatical and directly answer the question first. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and avoid repetitions. Then add one or two specific details with linking words (e.g., "because" or "so") to explain why and when you feel tired. Keep answers under five sentences.

Example: Not really. I only feel tired when I have very busy days because I combine work, errands and exercise. For example, if I go to the gym, do shopping and work late at night, I usually feel exhausted by the end of the day.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct tense and vocabulary. Say the specific days and give a brief reason with a linking word like "because" or "since." Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Aim for two or three concise sentences.

Example: I usually feel tired from Monday to Wednesday because those are my busiest days. During those days I have several appointments and long work shifts, so I get fatigued by the evening.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and then list one or two specific actions with linking words like "then" or "after that." Use correct verbs and avoid hesitations. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Example: When I feel tired, I usually rest at home and take a quick shower to relax. After that, I often prepare my things for the next day and go to bed early so I can recover.

× Not really, usually when I have a busy days like UMM on my routines, I usually go to the gym, go to shopping and then go to work at at night I feel really tired but not all the time.

✓ Not really. Usually when I have busy days in my routine, I usually go to the gym, go shopping, and then go to work at night; I feel really tired but not all the time.

The noun 'days' is plural so the determiner should be 'busy days' without 'a'. 'Routines' should be singular 'routine' or 'my routine' to match context. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; use 'go shopping'. Duplicate 'at at' should be 'at'. The sentence was also a run-on; split or use punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'a', use 'in my routine', and use parallel verbs 'go to the gym, go shopping, and go to work'.

× Uh, usually I felt hided umm, Monday through Wednesday are my busiest days in the week.

✓ Uh, usually I feel tired. Monday through Wednesday are my busiest days of the week.

The student used past tense 'felt' and incorrect past participle 'hided'. The context asks about usual/current feelings, so present tense 'feel' is required. 'Hided' is not the correct form of 'hide'; likely meant 'tired' or 'hide' is incorrect. Also 'in the week' is better expressed as 'of the week'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual states and choose correct adjectives like 'tired'.

× So because those days I do a lot of things in the day, so those ones are the.

✓ Because on those days I do a lot of things, those are my busiest days.

The original is ungrammatical and incomplete ('those ones are the' is unfinished). Remove redundant conjunctions 'So because' and unnecessary 'in the day'. Use 'on those days' and complete the clause: 'those are my busiest days.' Suggestion: avoid double conjunctions and finish sentences with a clear subject and predicate.

× Well, so I usually just take a rest in my house, uh, or was to be, or just I take a shower or also I, uh, organize everything that I have to do for my next day and then I just go to bed.

✓ Well, I usually just rest at home, or I take a shower, or I organize everything I have to do for the next day, and then I go to bed.

Use 'rest' rather than 'take a rest' or use 'have a rest' (both acceptable), but 'in my house' is better as 'at home'. 'Was to be' is ungrammatical and unclear; remove it. 'Just I take a shower' should be 'I take a shower' to maintain natural word order. 'My next day' should be 'the next day'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('rest at home', 'take a shower'), correct word order, and replace unclear fragments with clear alternatives.

× Monday through Wednesday are my busiest days in the week.

✓ Monday through Wednesday are my busiest days of the week.

The preposition 'in' is less natural here; 'of the week' is the standard collocation for describing which days are busiest. Suggestion: prefer 'of' when talking about parts of a whole time period ('days of the week').

× It's just a pain today and the pain what I have to do during the day.

✓ It's just a pain today and the tasks I have to do during the day.

The phrase 'a pain' is colloquial but 'the pain what I have to do' is ungrammatical. 'What' should be replaced with 'that' or rephrased. Likely the student meant 'tasks' or 'the work I have to do'. Also article usage with 'the' should match a specific noun: 'the tasks' or 'the work'. Suggestion: replace vague 'pain' with clearer noun and use 'that' or rephrase to 'the tasks I have to do during the day.'