Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答基本切题，也给出了具体例子，但“also”使用不自然，且“when we meet”应使用过去时来保持时态一致。建议先直接说明父母是如何教你的，再补充具体行为，并避免重复表达“greet and say hello”，因为二者意思相近。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite by setting a good example. For instance, whenever we visited relatives, they reminded me to greet them warmly and ask how they were.

Suggestion: 回答表达了肯定观点，但“plague”是“瘟疫”，这里应使用“politeness”。“show my perspective to someone”不符合语境，应该说明礼貌能表达尊重、建立良好关系或避免冲突。建议使用清晰的主题句，并补充一个具体结果。

Example: Yes, I think politeness is extremely important because it shows respect for other people. It also helps us build positive relationships and avoid unnecessary misunderstandings.

Suggestion: 回答提供了两个场合，内容方向正确，但“places”应改为“occasions”，“elder people”更自然的表达是“older people”或“elderly people”，“weight”应为“wait”。句子过长，建议用“for example”或“also”连接，并清楚说明在长辈面前应先等他们开始用餐。

Example: We should be polite in many situations, especially when we are with older people. For example, at a family meal, we should wait for them to start eating first. We should also greet our relatives when we meet them.

Suggestion: 回答给出了两个具体行为，但开头“If my memories may write”不符合英语表达，可以改为“As far as I remember”。由于问题询问过去的行为，应统一使用过去时，如“said”和“passed”。“Additionally”使用正确，但可以用更自然的“Also”连接第二个例子。

Example: As far as I remember, I showed politeness by greeting my relatives whenever I saw them. I also said “thank you” whenever someone gave me something. These were simple habits, but my parents taught me to use them every day.

× There are several places we need to be polite, especially when we eat with elder people, we need weight, the older people eat 1st and when we meet some relatives we need to say hello to them.

✓ There are several situations in which we need to be polite. For example, when we eat with older people, we need to wait for the older people to eat first. When we meet some relatives, we need to say hello to them.

原句包含多个完整分句，却主要使用逗号连接，造成句子结构混乱和逗号拼接错误。应使用句号拆分句子，并使用“for example”等连接词使逻辑更清楚。

× If my memories may write when I was a kid, I always say hello to relatives.

✓ If I remember correctly, when I was a kid, I always said hello to my relatives.

“when I was a kid”表示过去时间，因此主句中的“say”应改为过去式“said”。另外，“If my memories may write”不是正确的英语表达；可以使用“If I remember correctly”表示“如果我没记错的话”。

× Additionally, when someone pass me something, I always say thank you.

✓ Additionally, when someone passed me something, I always said thank you.

这句话描述的是童年时期的习惯，应该使用一般过去时。“pass”改为“passed”，“say”改为“said”。当叙述过去的习惯时，相关动词通常要保持过去时一致。

× Additionally, when someone pass me something, I always say thank you.

✓ Additionally, when someone passes me something, I always say thank you.

“someone”是不定代词，在一般现在时中属于第三人称单数，因此动词“pass”要加“-es”，改为“passes”。不过，由于上下文是在讲童年经历，更合适的完整表达是“When someone passed me something, I always said thank you.”