Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答基本直接，也提到了父母和老师两个来源，但后半句存在明显用词和表达问题。“the real and the right minor”无法表达清楚，可能想说“正确的礼仪（proper manners）”。另外，“the people that I met on the street”可以简化为“people I met”。建议使用“First... Also...”连接两个细节，并补充一个具体的礼貌行为。

Example: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. My parents taught me to greet people and say “please” and “thank you,” while my teachers reminded me to listen carefully and respect others. These habits became part of my daily life.

Suggestion: 回答有明确观点和原因，但重复使用“I think”，并且“the most important minor”“poisoners”以及“show your parents' personality”都不准确。可以用“an important quality”“reflect your personality”和“show how you were brought up”来表达。建议说明礼貌如何帮助人际交往，而不要夸张地说它是“最重要的事情”。

Example: Yes, definitely. Being polite is an important quality because it shows respect and helps people communicate comfortably. It can also reflect a person’s personality and the way they were brought up.

Suggestion: 你表达了“几乎所有场合都要礼貌”的核心观点，但句子重复且后半部分意思不清。“in almost every occasion”应改为“on almost every occasion”，“if someone being implied to you firstly”可能想表达“如果别人先对你无礼”，可说“if someone is rude to you first”。同时要清楚区分：即使对方无礼，也可以保持基本礼貌，但应坚定地保护自己。

Example: We should be polite on almost every occasion, especially at school, at work, and when meeting older people. However, if someone is rude to us first, we do not have to be overly friendly. We can remain calm and polite while standing up for ourselves.

Suggestion: 回答包含多个具体行为，如打招呼、友善待人和不插话，内容较充分。但语法和结构问题较多：“I usually say”应为过去时“I usually said”，“as I got aside”意思不清，可能应删除；“when I was in school and friendly”应改为“at school, I was friendly”。建议拆分成长短适中的句子，并使用“Also”和“Finally”连接细节。

Example: As a child, I usually said hello to people I met in my neighborhood. At school, I was friendly to my classmates and teachers, and I tried not to interrupt anyone while they were speaking. I also used polite words such as “please” and “thank you.”

× When I was a child, my parents always told me to say hello to the people that I met on the street and my primary school teachers also told me how to do the real and the right minor.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always told me to say hello to the people I met on the street, and my primary school teachers also taught me how to behave properly.

“how to do the real and the right minor”中的动词和宾语搭配不正确，句子结构不完整。表达“如何表现得有礼貌”时，应使用“how to behave properly”。

× Yes, I think I think being polite is the most important minor for the people because it can show your poisoners and show your parents' personality.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is the most important quality for people because it can show your politeness and reflect your parents' personality.

“people”表示泛指人们时，通常不使用定冠词“the”。因此，“for the people”应改为“for people”。

× Honestly speaking, I think I think we should be polite in almost every occasion, but if someone being implied to you firstly, I think you don't need to be still polite to learn.

✓ Honestly speaking, I think we should be polite on almost every occasion, but if someone is impolite to you first, I think you don't need to remain polite to them.

表示“在某个场合”时，固定搭配是“on an occasion”，不能使用“in an occasion”。另外，“remain polite to them”中的“to”表示礼貌的对象。

× Honestly speaking, I think I think we should be polite in almost every occasion, but if someone being implied to you firstly, I think you don't need to be still polite to learn.

✓ Honestly speaking, I think we should be polite on almost every occasion, but if someone is impolite to you first, I think you don't need to remain polite to them.

“if someone being implied to you firstly”没有完整的谓语动词。“if”引导的条件从句需要使用“主语 + be动词 + 表语”，所以应改为“if someone is impolite to you first”。

× Honestly speaking, I think I think we should be polite in almost every occasion, but if someone being implied to you firstly, I think you don't need to be still polite to learn.

✓ Honestly speaking, I think we should be polite on almost every occasion, but if someone is impolite to you first, I think you still don't need to remain polite to them.

“still”通常放在情态动词或助动词之后、主要动词之前，例如“still don't need”。同时，“be still polite”容易被理解为“保持静止地有礼貌”，不符合这里的意思。

× When I was a child, as I got aside, I usually say hello to the people that I met in the street and when I was in school and friendly to my classmates and teachers and I didn't cut in anyone's talks.

✓ When I was a child, as I got older, I usually said hello to the people I met in the street, and when I was in school, I was friendly to my classmates and teachers and didn't cut in on anyone's conversations.

整段描述的是童年时期的习惯和行为，因此应使用一般过去时。“say”应改为过去式“said”。

× When I was a child, as I got aside, I usually say hello to the people that I met in the street and when I was in school and friendly to my classmates and teachers and I didn't cut in anyone's talks.

✓ When I was a child, as I got older, I usually said hello to the people I met in the street, and when I was in school, I was friendly to my classmates and teachers and didn't cut in on anyone's conversations.

“when I was in school and friendly...”中，“friendly”是形容词，前面缺少系动词“was”。应改为“when I was in school, I was friendly...”。

× When I was a child, as I got aside, I usually say hello to the people that I met in the street and when I was in school and friendly to my classmates and teachers and I didn't cut in anyone's talks.

✓ When I was a child, as I got older, I usually said hello to the people I met in the street, and when I was in school, I was friendly to my classmates and teachers and didn't cut in on anyone's conversations.

短语“cut in”表示“插话、打断别人说话”时，通常与介词“on”连用，构成“cut in on someone’s conversation”。因此不能说“cut in anyone’s talks”。