Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答基本切题，也给出了父母教育这一具体原因，但开头“I when I was young”语法错误，且“our our”重复。建议使用清晰的主题句，例如“My parents taught me to be polite when I was young.” 然后补充具体行为和结果；注意时态一致，将“it helps”改为“it helped”，并避免重复表达“politely”。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite when I was young. They encouraged me to greet people properly and use words like “please” and “thank you.” As a result, I found it easier to get along with other children, and politeness became an important family value.

Suggestion: 回答直接明确，但“being polite”重复两次，影响自然度；“bring the harmonic to the society”搭配和词性错误，应改为“create harmony in society”或“make society more harmonious”。建议加入一个具体场景或结果，例如礼貌能够减少冲突、建立信任，从而使答案更有内容。

Example: Yes, definitely. Politeness is important because it helps people communicate smoothly and build mutual respect. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make everyday interactions more pleasant and reduce unnecessary conflicts.

Suggestion: 回答提供了首次见面这一合适场合，并提到第一印象，结构基本清楚。但“being played for the first time”应为“being polite when meeting someone for the first time”；“get along well with each other”在此处略显重复。建议再列举一两个场合，如面试、正式会议或与长辈交流，并减少“uh”等口语填充词。

Example: We should be polite whenever we meet someone for the first time, especially in formal situations such as a job interview or a business meeting. First impressions matter, so a polite greeting and respectful language can help us make a good impression. We should also be polite when speaking to elderly people or teachers.

Suggestion: 回答提到了问候他人以及说“please”和“thank you”，内容切题，但时态不一致：过去经历应使用“greeted”和“said”。“greet someone to”搭配错误，应改为“greet someone politely”；“others and teachers”表达不自然，可以说“other people, especially my teachers”。建议用两个完整句子清楚描述行为，并减少停顿词。

Example: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting people warmly and using respectful language. I always said “please” when I asked for something and “thank you” when someone helped me. I also made sure to greet my teachers whenever I saw them.

× I when I was young, I learned to be polite because my parents told me to greet people politely and it helps me get along well with other children.

✓ When I was young, I learned to be polite because my parents told me to greet people politely, and it helped me get along well with other children.

“I when I was young”把主语和时间状语的顺序混在了一起，句子结构不完整。应将“When I was young”放在句首，后面再接主句。

× I when I was young, I learned to be polite because my parents told me to greet people politely and it helps me get along well with other children.

✓ When I was young, I learned to be polite because my parents told me to greet people politely, and it helped me get along well with other children.

整句话讲的是童年时期发生的事情，因此“helps”应改为过去式“helped”，与“When I was young”和“learned”保持时态一致。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important. Being polite helps people get along well with each other and being polite can bring the harmonic to the society.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important. Being polite helps people get along well with each other, and being polite can bring harmony to society.

“harmonic”通常是形容词，不能在这里作“和谐”这个名词使用。应使用名词“harmony”。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important. Being polite helps people get along well with each other and being polite can bring the harmonic to the society.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important. Being polite helps people get along well with each other, and being polite can bring harmony to society.

这里的“society”表示社会这一泛指概念，不需要使用定冠词“the”。因此应说“to society”，而不是“to the society”。

× Of course, I believe that first impressions matter a lot and, uh, being played for the first time can help people get along well with each other.

✓ Of course, I believe that first impressions matter a lot, and being polite when meeting someone for the first time can help people get along well with each other.

“being played”表示“被玩弄或被演奏”，不符合语境。这里要表达“保持礼貌”，应使用“being polite”。同时，加入“when meeting someone”可以使句意更清楚。

× When I was young, my parents always told me to, uh, greet people politely. So I always greet uh, someone to and say please and thank you to others and uh, teachers.

✓ When I was young, my parents always told me to greet people politely. So I always greeted people and said “please” and “thank you” to others and my teachers.

“When I was young”描述过去的经历，因此“greet”和“say”应分别改为过去式“greeted”和“said”。

× When I was young, my parents always told me to, uh, greet people politely. So I always greet uh, someone to and say please and thank you to others and uh, teachers.

✓ When I was young, my parents always told me to greet people politely. So I always greeted people and said “please” and “thank you” to others and my teachers.

“greet someone to”中的“to”使用错误。动词“greet”可以直接接人，例如“greet people”，不需要在宾语前加“to”。

× When I was young, my parents always told me to, uh, greet people politely. So I always greet uh, someone to and say please and thank you to others and uh, teachers.

✓ When I was young, my parents always told me to greet people politely. So I always greeted people and said “please” and “thank you” to others and my teachers.

原句中“greet someone to and say”结构不完整，两个动词的连接方式不正确。应使用并列结构“greeted people and said...”。在口语中，也应避免不必要的停顿词和重复表达。