Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答基本切题，但存在明显的语法、搭配和用词问题。应使用过去时描述童年经历，例如将“told me please”改为“told me to say ‘please’”，将“when I saw... I will”改为过去时“when I saw... I would”。“pinness”表达不清，应改为“politeness”或“good manners”。建议先直接说明是母亲教会你的，再用具体例子补充称呼陌生人和微笑，避免句子过长。

Example: My mother taught me to be polite when I was young. She encouraged me to say “please” and “thank you” whenever I asked for something. She also taught me to address older strangers as “auntie” or “uncle” and greet them with a smile.

Suggestion: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但“be polite to others”和“show you respect”重复且存在语法错误，应改为“show them respect”或“show that you respect them”。建议使用连接词组织因果关系，并加入一个具体结果，例如礼貌能够建立信任、改善人际关系。

Example: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and helps us build good relationships with others. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make people feel valued and more willing to help us.

Suggestion: 回答提到了正式场合和求职面试，方向正确，但句子没有完整结束，最后的“show our respect in”语法和表达都不完整。应先回答“在正式和日常场合都要礼貌”，再分别举例，并使用“especially”和“because”等连接词。注意不要只重复“make a good impression”和“show respect”，可以补充礼貌的具体表现，如认真倾听、使用正式语言。

Example: We should be polite in both formal and everyday situations. It is especially important during job interviews because polite language and good manners create a positive impression. We should also be respectful when speaking to elderly people or service staff.

Suggestion: 回答有具体行为，但时态不一致，应将“see”改为过去时“saw”，并将“always bow”改为“would always bow”。“smell”应为“smile”，“wave my hands”更自然的说法是“wave at them”，“is pled to do so”表达不清，可以删除或改为“because it was a friendly gesture”。建议用两三个完整句子清楚对比对长辈和同龄人的礼貌方式。

Example: When I was a child, I would always bow slightly when I saw elderly people to show my respect. I also smiled and waved at my friends and classmates when I met them. These were simple but friendly ways to be polite.

× When I was a child, my mum always told me please to anyone when I saw a stranger I will call him or her uncle or auntie and I will smile to them and show my pinness to them.

✓ When I was a child, my mum always told me to say “please” to anyone. When I saw a stranger, I would call him or her “uncle” or “auntie,” and I would smile to them and show my pinness to them.

原句把多个完整意思连接在一起，但缺少适当的句子分隔和结构安排。“told me please”后面缺少动词，应该使用“told me to say ‘please’”。建议把过长的句子拆成两个句子，并确保“tell somebody to do something”的结构完整。

× When I was a child, my mum always told me please to anyone when I saw a stranger I will call him or her uncle or auntie and I will smile to them and show my pinness to them.

✓ When I was a child, my mum always told me to say “please” to anyone. When I saw a stranger, I would call him or her “uncle” or “auntie,” and I would smile to them and show my pinness to them.

整段是在描述童年时期的习惯，因此应该使用过去时。过去叙述中的“will”应改为“would”，与“When I saw”保持时态一致。

× When I was a child, my mum always told me please to anyone when I saw a stranger I will call him or her uncle or auntie and I will smile to them and show my pinness to them.

✓ When I was a child, my mum always told me to say “please” to anyone. When I saw a stranger, I would call him or her “uncle” or “auntie,” and I would smile at them and show my pinness to them.

表示“对某人微笑”时，通常使用“smile at somebody”，而不是“smile to somebody”。建议记住固定搭配：smile at、laugh at、look at。

× Yes, sure, I think being polite is very important and if you want to be respected by others, you must be polite to others and show you respect to them.

✓ Yes, sure. I think being polite is very important. If you want to be respected by others, you must be polite to them and show them that you respect them.

原句连接了太多分句，导致结构不清楚；“show you respect”也缺少连接词。这里应使用“show somebody that...”结构，表示“向某人表明……”。建议在口语中使用短句，避免一个句子包含过多并列内容。

× I think most people should be polite in formal situations like job interviews and we should be polite to make a good impression and to show our respect in.

✓ I think most people should be polite in formal situations, such as job interviews. We should be polite to make a good impression and to show our respect for others.

原句包含两个主要分句，却只使用一个“and”连接，句子过长且结尾不完整。把它拆成两个句子后，结构更加清晰。

× I think most people should be polite in formal situations like job interviews and we should be polite to make a good impression and to show our respect in.

✓ I think most people should be polite in formal situations, such as job interviews. We should be polite to make a good impression and to show our respect for others.

“respect”表示“对某人的尊重”时，通常与介词“for”搭配，因此应说“respect for others”，不能使用“respect in”。另外，句末的“in”使句子不完整。

× When I see elderly people, I always bow to them to show my respect.

✓ When I saw elderly people, I always bowed to them to show my respect.

问题是在回答“作为孩子时你做了什么”，描述的是过去的习惯，所以“see”应改为“saw”，“bow”应改为“bowed”。建议根据问题中的时间背景选择正确时态。

× And when I see my friends or classmates, I usually wave my hands and smell to them is pled to do so.

✓ And when I saw my friends or classmates, I usually waved my hands and smiled at them. I was pleased to do so.

表示“对某人微笑”应使用“smile at somebody”。原句中的“smell to them”不符合英语中的固定搭配。注意区分“smell”（闻起来）和“smile”（微笑）。

× And when I see my friends or classmates, I usually wave my hands and smell to them is pled to do so.

✓ And when I saw my friends or classmates, I usually waved my hands and smiled at them. I was pleased to do so.

“smell to them is pled to do so”缺少正确的主语、谓语和句子结构。应改为“I was pleased to do so”，其中“I”是主语，“was”是过去式系动词，“pleased”是表语。建议每个完整句子都检查是否包含清晰的主语和谓语。