Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答基本切题，也提供了两个具体规则，但存在明显语法和搭配问题。应将“don't allow to say”改为“didn't allow me to use/say”，“show my respect”更自然地说成“show respect”，并将“swear words”正确用于语境。建议使用过去时，并用“Also”连接第二个细节。

Example: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to show respect for elderly people and always use polite language. They also told me not to interrupt others or use swear words.

Suggestion: 没有直接回答“是否重要”，而是重复了上一题的内容。开头应明确表达观点，例如“Yes, definitely.” 另外，“spear words”应为“swear words”，“this rules”应为“these rules”，“I have followed things I was a child”应改为“I have followed these rules since I was a child”。可补充礼貌带来的结果，如建立良好关系和避免冒犯他人。

Example: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it helps us build positive relationships and avoid offending other people. I have followed the manners my parents taught me, such as respecting older people and avoiding swear words, since I was a child.

Suggestion: 回答提到了社交聚会和正式晚餐，方向正确，但句子结构和词语使用不自然。“especially their older and respected people”应改为“especially when there are older or respected people”，“make good impression”前需加“a”，“use cautious”应改为“be cautious”或“use polite language”。建议明确列举场合，并说明具体行为。

Example: We should be polite at social gatherings, especially when we meet older or respected people. For example, at a formal dinner, I would wait for everyone to be served, listen carefully, and use polite language. This helps me make a good impression.

Suggestion: 回答包含让座和称呼长辈两个具体例子，但需要改正语法和搭配。“At public transportation”应为“On public transport”，“the elder people”应为“elderly people”，“don't never say”是双重否定，应改为“never called older people by their first names”。由于问题使用过去时，建议统一使用过去时，并说明这些行为体现了尊重。

Example: When I was a child, I showed politeness by giving up my seat to elderly people on public transport. I also never called older people by their first names; instead, I used respectful forms of address. These were simple ways of showing respect.

× My parents told me to show my respect for the elderly when I was a child and I also don't allow to say any swear words.

✓ My parents told me to show my respect for the elderly when I was a child, and they also didn't allow me to say any swear words.

句子描述的是童年时期的事情，所以“don't allow”应改为过去时“didn't allow”。另外，allow后面需要接人，再接不定式：allow someone to do something，因此应说“allow me to say”，不能说“allow to say”。

× My parents told me to show my respect for the elderly when I was a child and I also don't allow to say any swear words.

✓ My parents told me to show my respect for the elderly when I was a child, and they also didn't allow me to say any swear words.

“allow”后面缺少宾语。正确结构是“allow + 人 + to do”，所以应使用“allow me to say”。同时，前后主语应保持清楚，第二个分句的主语应为“they”，指代my parents。

× When I was a child, my parents told me to show my respect for the elderly, especially my older relatives and also they don't allow me to use any spear words.

✓ When I was a child, my parents told me to show my respect for the elderly, especially my older relatives, and they also didn't allow me to use any swear words.

“When I was a child”表示过去时间，因此“don't allow”应改为过去时“didn't allow”。“spear”不是这里需要的词，表示脏话应使用“swear”。

× And this rules I have followed things I was a child.

✓ I have followed these rules since I was a child.

“rules”是复数，所以前面的指示词应使用复数“these”，不能使用单数“this”。此外，“things”在这里应为表示“自从”的“since”。

× And this rules I have followed things I was a child.

✓ I have followed these rules since I was a child.

原句的词序和句子结构不正确。英语中应使用“主语 + have followed + 宾语 + since + 过去时间”的结构，即“I have followed these rules since I was a child”。

× At social gatherings, especially their older and respected people, I may show my respect and make good impression.

✓ At social gatherings, especially when there are older and respected people, I may show my respect and make a good impression.

这里需要表达“尤其是当有年长且受尊敬的人时”，应使用“There are + 复数名词”的结构。“their”没有明确的指代对象，不能直接放在“older people”前面。

× At social gatherings, especially their older and respected people, I may show my respect and make good impression.

✓ At social gatherings, especially when there are older and respected people, I may show my respect and make a good impression.

“their”是物主代词，通常需要表示所属关系，但原句中没有明确的先行词。这里应改为“when there are older and respected people”，意思是“当有年长且受尊敬的人时”。

× At social gatherings, especially their older and respected people, I may show my respect and make good impression.

✓ At social gatherings, especially when there are older and respected people, I may show my respect and make a good impression.

“impression”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。固定搭配是“make a good impression”，因此应在“good impression”前加“a”。

× For example, at formal dinners I should behave politely and use cautious.

✓ For example, at formal dinners, I should behave politely and use caution.

“cautious”是形容词，不能直接放在动词“use”后面作宾语。应使用名词“caution”，构成“use caution”；也可以说“be cautious”。

× At public transportation I usually give up my seat to the elder people and I also don't never say the first name of the elder people.

✓ On public transportation, I usually gave up my seat to elderly people, and I also never called them by their first names.

表示“在公共交通工具上”通常使用介词“on”，所以应说“on public transportation”，不能说“at public transportation”。

× At public transportation I usually give up my seat to the elder people and I also don't never say the first name of the elder people.

✓ On public transportation, I usually gave up my seat to elderly people, and I also never called them by their first names.

问题询问的是童年时的行为，因此应使用一般过去时。“give”应改为“gave”，“don't never say”应改为“never called”。同时，避免使用“don't”和“never”造成双重否定。

× At public transportation I usually give up my seat to the elder people and I also don't never say the first name of the elder people.

✓ On public transportation, I usually gave up my seat to elderly people, and I also never called them by their first names.

“elder”通常用于比较两个人的年龄，修饰一群年长的人时更自然、正确的表达是“elderly people”。“elderly”是适合这里语境的形容词。

× At public transportation I usually give up my seat to the elder people and I also don't never say the first name of the elder people.

✓ On public transportation, I usually gave up my seat to elderly people, and I also never called them by their first names.

第二次提到“elderly people”时，可以使用代词“them”避免重复；“their first names”中的“their”与复数代词“them”保持一致。