Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答切题，提到了父母的影响，但存在明显的重复、语法和用词问题。应直接说明父母如何教你礼貌，例如教你向亲友打招呼、使用“please”和“thank you”。注意使用过去时：asked、reminded；“read others”应改为“greet others”。可以用“Whenever... , my parents would...”组织细节，并避免重复表达。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite through everyday reminders. Whenever I met relatives or guests, they asked me to greet them and say “please” and “thank you.” They also reminded me to listen carefully and avoid interrupting people.

Suggestion: 观点明确，也给出了结果，但“ I think”重复过多，且“that guy”过于口语化、不够自然；“he maybe didn't have a friend”语法错误，应为“he may not have many friends”。建议用一个清晰的原因和具体结果展开，例如礼貌能让人更愿意沟通、建立良好关系。删除句末“Yeah”等无意义填充语。

Example: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it shows respect and makes people feel comfortable around us. If someone is constantly rude, others may avoid talking to them, which can make it difficult for them to build friendships.

Suggestion: 回答直接，使用了“because”和“for example”进行解释和举例，结构较好。但“both in daily life or when we are at work”搭配错误，应改为“both in daily life and at work”；“lose our guests”不自然，建议说“make our guests feel unwelcome”。可以补充正式场合和日常场合的对比，使内容更具体。

Example: We should be polite in every situation, both in daily life and at work. For instance, when we welcome guests, we should greet them warmly and offer them a seat. Otherwise, they may feel unwelcome and leave with a negative impression.

Suggestion: 回答基本切题，并举出了“greet others”这一行为，但内容较短，且时态不一致。“I may just greet”应改为过去时“I would usually greet”；“I won’t do anything else”应改为“I didn’t do much else”。不要过度否定自己，可以说明当时如何打招呼，以及父母是否提醒你使用礼貌用语。

Example: I was not an especially polite child, but I usually greeted people when I saw them. I would also say “thank you” when someone gave me something. My parents often reminded me to speak softly and wait for my turn to talk.

× Well, when I was a child, my parents taught me some manners. For example, they always ask me to greet others or their relatives when I saw them, and they would remind me.

✓ Well, when I was a child, my parents taught me some manners. For example, they always asked me to greet others or their relatives when I saw them, and they would remind me.

“When I was a child”描述的是过去的经历，因此主句中的“ask”应使用过去式“asked”，与前面的“was”和“taught”保持时态一致。

× If this guy is impolite, I think he maybe didn't have a friend.

✓ If this guy is impolite, I think he may not have any friends.

情态动词“may”后面要接动词原形，因此不能说“may be didn't have”。表达“可能没有朋友”时，应使用“may not have”。

× If this guy is impolite, I think he maybe didn't have a friend.

✓ If this guy is impolite, I think he may not have any friends.

“Friends”表示泛指多个朋友，应该使用复数形式。与“any”搭配时，通常说“any friends”，而不是“a friend”。

× I think we should be polite on every occasion because it's really important And both in daily life or when we are at work.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion because it's really important both in daily life and when we are at work.

固定搭配是“both...and...”，表示“两者都”，不能使用“both...or...”。同时，连接两个并列场合时应使用“and”。

× I think we should be polite on every occasion because it's really important And both in daily life or when we are at work.

✓ I think we should be polite on every occasion because it's really important both in daily life and when we are at work.

原句中“And both...”不能独立构成完整、清晰的结构。应将“both...and...”直接放在“it's really important”之后，使句子结构完整。

× Actually I thought I was not a very polite kid. I may just greet others when I saw them and then I won't do anything else.

✓ Actually, I thought I was not a very polite kid. I would just greet others when I saw them, and then I wouldn't do anything else.

问题询问的是童年时期的行为，应该使用过去时。描述过去经常发生的行为时，可以使用“would”；因此“greet”改为“would greet”，“won't”改为过去形式“wouldn't”。