Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答思路基本清楚，也提供了父母教育的具体方式，但有几处明显的词汇和搭配错误：应说“be polite”，而不是“be piety”；“manners mattered”比“minors mattered”更符合语境；“say please and thank you”比“stay please and thank you”正确。建议先直接说明父母教会了你礼貌，再用具体例子补充，并避免过长、复杂的句子。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite when I was very young. They often reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” even when I was asking a family member for a small favor. As a result, these expressions became natural habits for me.

Suggestion: 观点明确，理由也比较充分，但“Plusoners”明显不是正确表达，可能想说“politeness”；“the very first time you met”应改为“when you meet someone for the first time”；结尾重复了前面的观点。建议使用“Moreover, politeness can...”进行衔接，并用一个自然的具体场景支持观点，最后不要重复总结。

Example: Yes, being polite is important in almost every part of life because it shows respect for others. It also helps us make a good first impression, especially in situations such as a job interview. Even a simple greeting or a polite request can make communication more comfortable.

Suggestion: 回答直接，并涵盖了正式场合和日常生活，内容较完整。不过第一句过长，包含多个观点，建议拆成两到三句；“when speaking to old people”可以换成更自然、更尊重的“when speaking to elderly people”。还可以加入一个更具体的日常例子，例如在商店、公共交通工具上保持礼貌。

Example: We should be polite in almost every situation, but it is especially important in formal settings such as interviews and meetings. We should also show good manners when speaking to elderly people or strangers. For example, saying “excuse me” and “thank you” in a shop can make a simple interaction much smoother.

Suggestion: 回答结构清晰，使用了多个具体例子，也说明了这些行为对现在的影响，整体表现较好。“polyseners”应改为“politeness”或直接说“showed that I was polite”；第一句中的多个动作可以用逗号或并列结构更自然地连接。建议保留“waiting my turn”和“not interrupting others”等具体细节。

Example: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “thank you,” greeting adults, and waiting my turn instead of interrupting people. My parents taught me that these small habits showed respect and helped others feel comfortable. Over time, they became natural parts of my everyday communication.

× Well, I was mainly taught by my parents to be piety when I was still a young child long before I even understood why minors mattered.

✓ Well, I was mainly taught by my parents to be polite when I was still a young child, long before I even understood why manners mattered.

“piety”是名词，表示“虔诚”，不能放在“be”后面作表语。这里需要使用形容词“polite”，表示“有礼貌的”。另外，“minors”通常表示“未成年人”，此处根据语境应为“manners”（礼貌、礼仪）。

× They always reminded me to stay please and thank you in everyday conversations even for the smallest favor from family members.

✓ They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” in everyday conversations, even for the smallest favor from family members.

“please”和“thank you”是需要说出的礼貌用语，因此应使用动词“say”，不能使用“stay”。“say please and thank you”是正确搭配。

× Plusoners also makes a good impression, especially the very first time you met someone new like during a job interview.

✓ Politeness also makes a good impression, especially the very first time you meet someone new, such as during a job interview.

主语“Politeness”是第三人称单数，所以动词应使用“makes”。此外，在描述通常情况时，应使用一般现在时“meet”，而不是过去时“met”。“such as”比“like”更适合用于正式举例。

× Plusoners also makes a good impression, especially the very first time you met someone new like during a job interview.

✓ Politeness also makes a good impression, especially the very first time you meet someone new, such as during a job interview.

这句话描述的是一般情况和普遍事实，因此应使用一般现在时。“the first time you meet someone”表示“你第一次遇到某人时”；“met”是过去时，不符合这里的语境。

× Well, I think we should be polite in almost every situation, especially in formal situations like interviews, meetings or when speaking to old people, showing respect through our words and behavior can make communication smoother and help us leave a good impression.

✓ Well, I think we should be polite in almost every situation, especially in formal situations such as interviews and meetings, or when speaking to older people. Showing respect through our words and behavior can make communication smoother and help us leave a good impression.

原句包含两个完整句子，却只用逗号连接，形成逗号拼接错误。应在“people”后使用句号，分成两个句子。这样句子结构更清晰，也更容易理解。

× When I was a child I showed polyseners by saying thank you, greeting adults and waiting my turn instead of interrupting others.

✓ When I was a child, I showed politeness by saying thank you, greeting adults, and waiting my turn instead of interrupting others.

“polyseners”不是正确的英语单词。此处需要使用名词“politeness”，表示“礼貌”。另外，在句首时间状语从句后应加逗号；并列动词使用逗号可以使结构更清楚。