Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 主要问题是词汇和句子结构错误。“learnt prolonged”应改为“learned politeness”或“learned how to be polite”；“taught me about how to”表达不自然，可改为“taught me how to”。建议先直接回答学习来源，再补充具体行为和结果，并使用“for example”连接细节。

Example: I learned how to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. They taught me to greet people properly and use polite expressions such as “please” and “thank you.” For example, my parents reminded me to say hello whenever I met a guest.

Suggestion: 观点明确，但“no matter in our child or adults”以及“Being polite and a child”语法错误，应改为“whether we are children or adults”和“being polite as a child”。“in adults”应改为“as an adult”。建议使用“while”进行清晰对比，并让商业机会的表达更自然，例如“build trust and create business opportunities”。

Example: Absolutely. Being polite is important whether we are children or adults. As children, politeness helps us make a good impression on teachers and classmates, while as adults, it helps us build trust and develop business relationships. For example, a polite manner can make clients more willing to work with us.

Suggestion: 回答没有清楚列出“场合”，而且有多处词汇和搭配错误。“arrive a new home to others”应改为“arrive at someone’s home”，“being the prologue”不能表达“有礼貌”，应使用“being polite”，“have a greetings”应改为“greet the host”。建议直接提到拜访别人家、参加正式活动或与陌生人见面等场合。

Example: We should be polite whenever we visit someone’s home or attend a formal event. When we arrive at someone’s house, we should greet the host and perhaps bring a small gift. We should also use polite language when meeting strangers or speaking to older people.

Suggestion: 时态和主语不一致，应使用过去时和第一人称，例如“I said”或“I was taught to say”。“receive the parents from others”意思不清，可能想表达“收到别人的礼物”，应改为“received gifts from others”；“harvest”不是问候语，应改为“hello”或“good afternoon”。建议给出两到三个具体礼貌行为，并保持过去时。

Example: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “please” and “thank you.” Whenever I received a gift from someone, I thanked them sincerely. Besides, I greeted adults by saying “Good morning” or “Hello,” because my parents taught me to respect older people.

× As a child I learnt prolonged from my parents and teachers who taught me about how to bring a good first impression by greeting people

✓ As a child, I learned about politeness from my parents and teachers, who taught me how to make a good first impression by greeting people.

“Prolonged”表示“延长的”，不能表示“礼貌”。这里应使用名词“politeness”。另外，“make a good impression”是固定搭配，比“bring a good first impression”更自然。

× Absolutely. Being polite is important no matter in our child or adults. Being polite and a child could provide a good impression to teachers and classmates while being polite in adults could bring a lot of business opportunities.

✓ Absolutely. Being polite is important whether we are children or adults. Being polite as a child can make a good impression on teachers and classmates, while being polite as an adult can create many business opportunities.

“no matter in our child or adults”不能正确连接两种情况。表示“无论是……还是……”时，应使用“whether...or...”。“being polite and a child”以及“being polite in adults”结构错误，应改为“being polite as a child/adult”。

× Absolutely. Being polite is important no matter in our child or adults. Being polite and a child could provide a good impression to teachers and classmates while being polite in adults could bring a lot of business opportunities.

✓ Absolutely. Being polite is important whether we are children or adults. Being polite as a child can make a good impression on teachers and classmates, while being polite as an adult can create many business opportunities.

“our child”中的“our”是物主代词，不能表示“我们是孩子”。这里需要使用主格代词“we”，并搭配“are”：whether we are children or adults。

× Absolutely. Being polite is important no matter in our child or adults. Being polite and a child could provide a good impression to teachers and classmates while being polite in adults could bring a lot of business opportunities.

✓ Absolutely. Being polite is important whether we are children or adults. Being polite as a child can make a good impression on teachers and classmates, while being polite as an adult can create many business opportunities.

表示身份或阶段时，应使用介词“as”，所以说“as a child”和“as an adult”。此外，固定搭配是“make a good impression on someone”，因此应使用“on”，而不是“to”。

× Absolutely. Being polite is important no matter in our child or adults. Being polite and a child could provide a good impression to teachers and classmates while being polite in adults could bring a lot of business opportunities.

✓ Absolutely. Being polite is important whether we are children or adults. Being polite as a child can make a good impression on teachers and classmates, while being polite as an adult can create many business opportunities.

“Being polite and a child”把“礼貌”和“孩子”错误地并列在一起，句子结构不完整。应使用“as a child”表示“小时候”，并用“while”连接两个对比情况。

× When we arrive a new home to others or new place, being the prologue is vitally important to have a greetings to the owner.

✓ When we arrive at someone else’s home or at a new place, being polite is vitally important, and we should greet the owner.

动词“arrive”后面表示到达某地时通常使用“at”或“in”，不能直接说“arrive a home”。这里应说“arrive at someone else’s home”。

× When we arrive a new home to others or new place, being the prologue is vitally important to have a greetings to the owner.

✓ When we arrive at someone else’s home or at a new place, being polite is vitally important, and we should greet the owner.

“a”后面必须接单数可数名词，因此不能说“a greetings”。不过这里更自然的表达是使用动词“greet the owner”，而不是“have a greeting”。

× When we arrive a new home to others or new place, being the prologue is vitally important to have a greetings to the owner.

✓ When we arrive at someone else’s home or at a new place, being polite is vitally important, and we should greet the owner.

“new place”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词，应该说“a new place”。同时，“a greetings”中的冠词和复数名词不能搭配。

× As a child, we need saying thank yous when we receive the parents from others. Besides, we should say good morning or harvest when we greet people.

✓ As a child, I said thank you when I received gifts from others. Besides, I said good morning or hello when I greeted people.

题目询问学生本人小时候做了什么，所以应使用第一人称单数“I”，而不是“we”。主语和后面的动词也应保持一致。

× As a child, we need saying thank yous when we receive the parents from others. Besides, we should say good morning or harvest when we greet people.

✓ As a child, I said thank you when I received gifts from others. Besides, I said good morning or hello when I greeted people.

问题使用过去时“did you do”，回答小时候的行为也应使用一般过去时。因此，“receive”改为“received”，“greet”改为“greeted”，并使用“said”描述过去的行为。

× As a child, we need saying thank yous when we receive the parents from others. Besides, we should say good morning or harvest when we greet people.

✓ As a child, I said thank you when I received gifts from others. Besides, I said good morning or hello when I greeted people.

“need”后面通常接“to do”形式，即“need to say”，不能说“need saying”。不过由于题目询问过去的行为，整句使用一般过去时“said”更合适。