Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答有直接提到父母和老师，但语法和词汇错误较多，例如“polyte”应为“polite”，“told me need to”应改为“told me that I needed to”，“being the privilege”表达不自然。建议使用清晰的结构：先说明学习对象，再解释他们教你的具体行为，最后说明礼貌的作用。注意使用过去时，因为问题问的是童年经历。

Example: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. They taught me to greet people, say “please” and “thank you,” and listen when others were speaking. As a result, I understood that politeness helps create a good first impression.

Suggestion: 观点明确，但“being spolized”不是正确表达，应使用“being polite”；“important our child's lives”缺少介词和所有格，且“a new teachers”存在单复数错误。建议先直接回答“非常重要”，然后给出一个具体原因和场景，例如礼貌能帮助我们与新老师或同学建立良好关系。

Example: Absolutely. Being polite is very important because it helps us build positive relationships with other people. For example, greeting a new teacher or classmate can make them feel respected and more comfortable.

Suggestion: 回答试图举例，但句子结构不清晰，且“safe halls”“say we Good morning”等表达无法准确传达意思。建议列举一到两个具体场合，例如进入别人家、见到老师或在公共场所，并说明应该使用的礼貌表达。使用“when”引导时间或场合，并保持句子完整。

Example: We should be polite whenever we meet other people, especially when visiting someone’s home or speaking to teachers. For instance, we should greet the host by saying “Good morning” and thank them for inviting us.

Suggestion: 回答内容直接，也提供了“hello”和“thank you”两个例子，但问题使用过去时，所以“I will”应改为“I would”或“I used to”。“simple greetings”和“to soak my pollight”表达不自然，建议使用“greet people politely”和“show my politeness”。可以补充一个具体对象或场景，使答案更完整。

Example: As a child, I used to greet people politely by saying hello and smiling at them. I also said “please” when asking for something and “thank you” when someone helped me. These were simple ways to show respect.

× I learned polyte from my teachers and parents who told me need to say hello when greeting others besides being the privilege is important to bring good impressions to others.

✓ I learned to be polite from my teachers and parents, who told me to say hello when greeting others. They also taught me that being polite is important for making a good impression on others.

原句中“who told me need to say”结构不完整，应该使用“tell someone to do something”；“besides being the privilege is important”结构混乱，无法构成正确句子。可以把复杂内容拆成两个句子，并使用“being polite is important for...”来表达“有礼貌很重要”。

× I learned polyte from my teachers and parents who told me need to say hello when greeting others besides being the privilege is important to bring good impressions to others.

✓ I learned to be polite from my teachers and parents, who told me to say hello when greeting others. They also taught me that being polite is important for making a good impression on others.

表达“对别人留下好印象”时，通常使用“make a good impression on someone”，而不是“bring good impressions to others”。表达“对于做某事很重要”时，可以使用“important for doing something”。

× Absolutely, being spolized is vitally important our child's lives which develops a good impression to others no matter a new teachers or classmates.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is vitally important in children's lives because it helps them make a good impression on new teachers and classmates.

“important”后面需要介词“in”来表示“在……中很重要”，所以应说“important in children's lives”。另外，“make a good impression on...”是正确的搭配。

× Absolutely, being spolized is vitally important our child's lives which develops a good impression to others no matter a new teachers or classmates.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is vitally important in children's lives because it helps them make a good impression on new teachers and classmates.

“children's lives”表示“孩子们的生活”，这里的“children”是复数，因此应使用复数所有格“children's”。“teachers and classmates”表示多个老师和同学，也应使用复数形式。

× Absolutely, being spolized is vitally important our child's lives which develops a good impression to others no matter a new teachers or classmates.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is vitally important in children's lives because it helps them make a good impression on new teachers and classmates.

“teachers and classmates”是复数名词，前面不能使用不定冠词“a”。因此应删除“a”，改为“new teachers and classmates”。

× Absolutely, being spolized is vitally important our child's lives which develops a good impression to others no matter a new teachers or classmates.

✓ Absolutely, being polite is vitally important in children's lives because it helps them make a good impression on new teachers and classmates.

原句使用“which”连接后面的内容，但这里需要表达因果关系，因此使用连词“because”更合适。“because it helps them...”说明有礼貌为什么重要。

× When we go into people's homes which is safe halls and having a greetings we should say we Good morning that is bringing polite or first impressions

✓ When we go into people's homes, we should greet people by saying “Good morning” and be polite to make a good first impression.

原句包含多个不完整或混乱的结构，例如“which is safe halls”“having a greetings”和“say we Good morning”。可以重新组织为“When..., we should...”结构，并使用“greet people by saying...”清楚表达问候方式。

× When we go into people's homes which is safe halls and having a greetings we should say we Good morning that is bringing polite or first impressions

✓ When we go into people's homes, we should greet people by saying “Good morning” and be polite to make a good first impression.

表达“通过说某句话来问候”时，应使用“by saying”。表达“为了留下好印象”时，应使用“to make a good impression”，而不是“bringing polite or first impressions”。

× When we go into people's homes which is safe halls and having a greetings we should say we Good morning that is bringing polite or first impressions

✓ When we go into people's homes, we should greet people by saying “Good morning” and be polite to make a good first impression.

“first impression”是可数名词单数，前面需要不定冠词“a”，所以应说“a good first impression”。“greetings”在这里也不需要使用不定冠词，改写为动词“greet”后句子更自然。

× I will have a simple greetings to others to soak my pollight. I will say hello and thank you to others.

✓ I gave a simple greeting to others to show my politeness. I said hello and thank you to them.

问题使用过去时“What did you do...”，回答也应使用一般过去时。因此，“will have”和“will say”应分别改为“gave”和“said”。回答过去发生的经历时，要保持时态一致。

× I will have a simple greetings to others to soak my pollight. I will say hello and thank you to others.

✓ I gave a simple greeting to others to show my politeness. I said hello and thank you to them.

“a”后面必须接单数可数名词，因此不能说“a simple greetings”，应改为“a simple greeting”。如果使用复数“greetings”，就不能在前面使用“a”。