Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答与问题相关，也提到了老师的影响，但语法错误较多，影响自然度和清晰度。例如，“learned how to be polite for my teacher”应改为“learned how to be polite from my teacher”，“will teach”应使用过去时“taught”，“she would told”应改为“she told me”。“pretend in a polite way”表达不准确，可以直接说“behave politely”或“use polite language”。建议采用清晰结构：先说明来源，再举出老师教你的具体行为，最后说明结果。

Example: I learned to be polite mainly from my primary school teacher. She taught me to greet people, listen carefully, and use expressions such as “please” and “thank you.” As a result, I gradually developed good manners and became more considerate of others.

Suggestion: 观点明确，并使用了工作场景作为例子，内容较有效。不过存在主谓一致、代词重复和搭配问题：“my workmate show”应为“my coworkers speak/show”，“I will feel be respected”应为“I feel respected”。“if somebody didn't”与一般情况不一致，应改为“if someone doesn’t”。建议加入一个总结句，说明礼貌如何改善工作关系，并避免重复使用“actually”。

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important, especially in the workplace. As a manager, I feel respected when my coworkers speak to me courteously, even when they disagree with me. In contrast, rude behavior can create tension and make teamwork more difficult.

Suggestion: 回答抓住了“交流时要礼貌”这一核心，但没有具体回答“哪些场合”，而且句子结构和语法问题较多。“ocean”应为“occasion”，“communication need”应为“communication needs”，“in a polite ways”应为“in a polite way”。建议列出两到三个具体场合，例如工作场合、与陌生人交谈或发生分歧时，并使用“especially”“for example”等连接词组织答案。

Example: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal situations. For example, we need to use respectful language at work, when speaking to strangers, or when dealing with older people. Being polite is particularly important during disagreements because it helps us communicate without creating unnecessary conflict.

Suggestion: 回答直接说明了小时候保持安静的做法，并解释了原因，基本符合题意。但“tried to be keep quiet”应改为“tried to keep quiet”，“I'm not sure”应使用过去时“I wasn't sure”，“a polite people”应为“a polite person”。此外，保持安静并不总是最自然的礼貌表现，可以补充打招呼、认真听别人说话或使用“please”和“thank you”等更具体的例子。

Example: When I was a child, I tried to show politeness by listening quietly when adults were speaking. I was not always sure what to say, so I avoided interrupting them. I also tried to say “please” and “thank you” when asking for something or receiving help.

× Actually, when I was a child, I learned how to be polite for my teacher.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I learned how to be polite from my teacher.

表示“从某人那里学习”时，应使用介词 from，而不是 for。from my teacher 表示“从我的老师那里”。

× My teacher will teach me how to to pretend uh in a polite way.

✓ My teacher taught me how to behave politely.

问题描述的是童年时期发生的事情，所以应使用过去时 taught，而不是将来时 will teach。另外，how to 后面应接动词原形，且不能重复使用 to。这里用 behave politely 表达“举止礼貌”更准确。

× And she would told me how to do anything in a polite ways.

✓ And she would tell me how to do things politely.

would 后面必须接动词原形，因此应使用 tell，而不能使用过去式 told。

× And she would told me how to do anything in a polite ways.

✓ And she would tell me how to do things in a polite way.

a 后面只能接单数可数名词，所以应说 a polite way，不能说 a polite ways。也可以直接使用副词 politely。

× to actually with the help of her, I know how to be polite in many ways.

✓ With her help, I learned how to be polite in many ways.

原句的句子结构不完整，to actually 和 with the help of her 的位置也不正确。With her help 可以放在句首作介词短语，主句使用过去时 learned，与童年经历保持一致。

× When my my workmate show me or talk to me in a polite way, I will feel be respected.

✓ When my workmate shows respect to me or talks to me politely, I feel respected.

主语 my workmate 是第三人称单数，所以一般现在时的动词应加 -s，使用 shows 和 talks。

× When my my workmate show me or talk to me in a polite way, I will feel be respected.

✓ When my workmate shows respect to me or talks to me politely, I feel respected.

feel 后面不能直接接 be respected。表达“感到被尊重”时，应使用 feel respected。这里描述一般情况，因此主句使用一般现在时 I feel。

× But if somebody didn't do that, I will feel disappointed about that.

✓ But if somebody doesn't do that, I feel disappointed.

这句话描述一般情况下的感受，应使用一般现在时。主语 somebody 是第三人称单数，所以使用 doesn't，而不是过去式 didn't。

× I think communication need to be in a polite ways.

✓ I think communication needs to be polite.

communication 是不可数名词，视为第三人称单数，因此动词应使用 needs。be 后面用形容词 polite 即可，不需要使用 in a polite ways。

× I think communication need to be in a polite ways.

✓ I think communication needs to be polite.

a 后面不能接复数名词 ways。应使用 a polite way，或者像修改句中一样直接使用形容词 polite。

× With the help of polite communication will works in appropriate.

✓ With polite communication, things will work appropriately.

will 后面必须使用动词原形，所以应使用 work，不能使用 works。

× With the help of polite communication will works in appropriate.

✓ With polite communication, things will work appropriately.

work 是动词，需要用副词 appropriately 修饰，不能使用形容词 appropriate。原句还缺少主语，因此补充 things 使句子结构完整。

× With the help of polite communication will works in appropriate and also we can understand each other in a good way.

✓ With polite communication, things will work appropriately, and we can understand each other well.

原句中 With the help of polite communication 后面直接接 will，缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。补充主语 things 后，句子结构才完整。

× When I was a child, I tried to be keep quiet to show I'm polite because at the time I'm not sure what kind of sentence or words is perfect for a child to speak.

✓ When I was a child, I tried to keep quiet to show that I was polite because at the time I was not sure what kinds of sentences or words were appropriate for a child to use.

这段话描述的是过去的童年经历，所以应使用过去时 was，而不是现在时 am。try 后面应使用 to keep，不能使用 to be keep。

× what kind of sentence or words is perfect for a child to speak.

✓ what kinds of sentences or words were appropriate for a child to use.

主语包含复数名词 sentences 和 words，所以谓语应使用复数形式 were，不能使用单数形式 is。

× what kind of sentence or words is perfect for a child to speak.

✓ what kinds of sentences or words were appropriate for a child to use.

句中同时谈论多种句子和词语，因此 kind、sentence 应根据复数概念改为 kinds、sentences。

× So I will choose to be quiet so that everybody won't feel I'm not a polite people.

✓ So I chose to be quiet so that nobody would think I was an impolite person.

这是对过去行为的描述，应使用过去时 chose。主句使用过去时后，so that 从句中的 will 通常相应改为 would，am 也应改为 was。

× everybody won't feel I'm not a polite people.

✓ nobody would think I was an impolite person.

a 后面需要接单数可数名词，因此不能说 a polite people。应使用 a polite person。这里使用 nobody 和 an impolite person 也使表达更自然、结构更清楚。