Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子时态和词汇使用不准确，句子结构有语法错误且表达不够清楚。建议用过去时描述童年经历，修正词汇（apply → behave/apply? 应为 behave 或 be polite），並把想法分成主句+补充细节，避免冗长重复。可以用一到两句：先说是谁教的，再说具体怎么教或举例。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, they always reminded me to say "please" and "thank you" and showed polite behaviour themselves, so I learned by copying them.

Suggestion: 表达有逻辑但语法和连贯性问题（如省略主语、重复单词、结尾不完整）。建议使用清晰的因果连接词并用完整句子支持观点，避免重复。可以用一句观点句+一句具体例子。

Example: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps build mutual respect. For example, if you always say "thank you" and show respect, others are more likely to respond politely in return.

Suggestion: 内容相关且有理由支持，但语法和词汇需改进（occasion→occasions，showing→shows/indicates）。建议先直接回答（general rule），然后给一两个具体场景并用连接词衔接，使表达更自然且句子更紧凑。

Example: I think we should be polite on most occasions because politeness helps maintain good relationships. For example, it's especially important to be respectful when speaking to elders or colleagues, as this shows consideration and fosters cooperation.

Suggestion: 表达含义能理解但语法混乱、逻辑不清（"it's must"、"say this food a lot"不合适）。建议用过去时描述具体行为，给出具体例子并说明效果，句子不超过五句，避免模糊短语。

Example: As a child, I always said "please" and "thank you" because my parents taught me those manners. For instance, when I thanked shopkeepers or helped my classmates, they often treated me kindly in return.

× My parents will teach me how to be apply and how to do a good behavior when I go out, and most of the time my parents will be my role model and I will learn from them.

✓ My parents taught me how to be polite and how to behave well when I went out, and most of the time my parents were my role models and I learned from them.

句子中使用了不合适的将来时“will teach / will be / will learn”，但说的是过去作为儿童时发生的事情，应使用过去时态。另外原句中“apply”用错，正确应为“polite”；“a good behavior”搭配不当，应为“behave well”或“good behavior”；“role model”单数/复数与上下文应一致。建议将动词全部改为过去时，并修正词汇搭配。

× Of course, because if you being polite to other people so that other people will be polite to you.

✓ Of course, because if you are polite to other people, they will be polite to you.

原句中“if you being polite”使用了现在分词“being”而不是正确的现在时态结构，应使用“if you are polite”。另外句子中“so that”用法多余，且代词重复，改为更自然的条件句。建议使用条件句结构：if + 主语 + 动词。

× For example, if if you always say thank you to other people, people will always say thank you to you, so everyone will be.

✓ For example, if you always say "thank you" to other people, they will always be polite to you, so everyone will get along better.

句子有重复“if if”，句尾“so everyone will be.”不完整，缺少谓语和具体内容。需要补全句意并改进用词，避免重复。建议删除重复词并把结尾改为完整表达，例如“so everyone will get along better”。

× In my opinion, we should be polite on most occasion because polite behavior helps maintain good relationship.

✓ In my opinion, we should be polite on most occasions because polite behavior helps maintain good relationships.

“on most occasion”中的名词应为复数“occasions”；“maintain good relationship”应为可数复数“relationships”或使用不可数形式时需改为“a good relationship”。建议注意介词短语和名词单复数一致。

× For example, it's especially important to be respectful when speaking to other people as this showing consideration.

✓ For example, it's especially important to be respectful when speaking to other people, as this shows consideration.

原句“this showing consideration”中“showing”为现在分词，造成从句缺少谓语。应使用第三人称单数现在时“shows”。建议在主语为第三人称单数时，谓语使用-s形式。

× I always said thank you and please when I was a child because my parents told me I should do that.

✓ I always said "thank you" and "please" when I was a child because my parents told me I should do that.

此句时态总体为过去时，结构正确。只是引号和标点可使表达更清晰。原句无重大语法错误，因此保持过去时。建议保持过去时态和清晰的标点。

× But I think it's must, everyone should do and if you say this food a lot, people will be kind to you and it's a good way to.

✓ But I think it's a must; everyone should do it. If you say this a lot, people will be kind to you, and it's a good way to behave.

原句“it's must”缺少不定冠词，应为“it's a must”或用“it must be”。“everyone should do”缺少宾语，应为“do it”。“if you say this food a lot”词序和搭配错误，意思不清，应为“if you say this a lot”。句尾“a good way to”不完整，应补为“a good way to behave”。建议注意情态动词和固定短语的搭配，并补全省略的宾语或不定式。