Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ неплохой, но есть проблемы с естественностью и связностью. Постройте ответ с главным предложением, затем добавьте конкретный пример и используйте связку для плавного перехода. Избегайте общих фраз вроде «very important for a daily life» — лучше сказать, почему именно это важно. Также исправьте грамматику: say "I learned to be polite from my parents" и избегайте повторов.

Example: I learned to be polite from my parents. For example, they taught me to say "please" and "thank you" from a young age, so I practised these phrases every day. As a result, I find it easier to get along with teachers and neighbours.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит несколько грамматических ошибок и несвязные фразы, что снижает понятность. Начните с прямого утверждения, затем объясните причину, используя связки (because, therefore). Дайте конкретный эффект в результате вежливости. Избегайте повторов и неверных словосочетаний ("extreme important" → "extremely important").

Example: Yes, I think being polite is extremely important because we interact with many different people every day. If you are polite, people usually respond more kindly, so communication becomes smoother and more productive.

Suggestion: Ответ прямой, но слишком общий и содержит неестественные выражения ("simply like older than you"). Дайте 2–3 конкретных случаев и объясните, почему вежливость важна в каждом. Используйте связующие слова для логики (for example, also).

Example: We should be polite in many situations. For example, at university you should be respectful to professors because they guide your studies; also, you should be polite to classmates to build good teamwork. In public places like shops or buses, politeness helps avoid conflicts.

Suggestion: Ответ понятен, но грамматически неверен и повторяет общие фразы. Начните с простого утверждения в правильной форме, затем приведите конкретный пример поведения (например, greeting, helping, using manners) и объясните причину. Избегайте громоздких конструкций и двойных причин.

Example: As a child I usually said "thank you" and "please" to show politeness. I also greeted guests and helped my parents at home, because these small actions made people feel appreciated.

× I learned to be polite as a child with my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child.

The original sentence has awkward word order. Use the preposition 'from' to indicate source of learning and place the time expression 'when I was a child' at the end for natural English.

× My parents are very strict so it was quite easy to learn how to be polite.

✓ My parents were very strict, so it was quite easy to learn to be polite.

The context refers to childhood, so past tense 'were' should be used. Also 'learn to be polite' is more natural than 'learn how to be polite' here and a comma is needed before 'so'.

× Politeness is very important for a daily life.

✓ Politeness is very important in daily life.

Use the preposition 'in' with 'daily life' and do not use the indefinite article 'a' before 'daily life'. The phrase is fixed: 'in daily life'.

× In my opinion being polite is extreme important because in daily life you always need to communicate with different people and when you polite don't use when you are when you are polite with them, they look different at you.

✓ In my opinion, being polite is extremely important because in daily life you often need to communicate with different people, and when you are polite with them, they treat you differently.

Use the adverb 'extremely' to modify the adjective 'important'. Add a comma after the introductory phrase. Replace 'always' with 'often' for naturalness. Correct 'when you polite' to 'when you are polite' and 'look different at you' to 'treat you differently'. Maintain present tense consistency.

× We should be polite on different occasions.

✓ We should be polite on different occasions.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but stylistically simple; no change required. (Included because it matches allowed problem types list but does not require correction.)

× I think the most common occasion is when you're in your university.

✓ I think the most common occasion is when you're at university.

Use 'at university' (no possessive) in general statements about attending university. 'At' is the correct preposition and omit 'your' for general context.

× You need to be polite with your professors because they are simply like older than you.

✓ You need to be polite with your professors because they are simply older than you.

Remove the unnecessary filler 'like'. The comparative 'older than you' is correct; 'simply' is optional but acceptable.

× So it's the simplest one.

✓ So that's the simplest example.

'The simplest one' is vague here. 'That's the simplest example' clarifies meaning and reads more naturally.

× As a child I usually thanks everybody to show my politeness because to say thank you, it's very important to other people because they were trying to do it very well.

✓ As a child I usually thanked everybody to show my politeness because saying thank you is very important to other people when they try to help you.

Use past tense 'thanked' for habitual actions in the past. 'Thanks everybody' is incorrect form. Use gerund 'saying thank you' and simplify the explanation: 'is very important to other people when they try to help you'. This corrects tense, verb form, and awkward phrasing.