Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 语音和语法需要改进，同时回答应更简洁有条理。建议：1) 先用一句话直接回答（主题句），例如“I learned politeness from my parents.” 2) 用两到三句具体举例支持，并使用连接词（for example, also）。3) 修正常见语法错误（时态、代词、动词形式），不要重复或犹豫词（umm）。具体练习：把句子拆成短句，反复练习几遍。

Example: I learned to be polite from my parents. For example, they taught me to greet people I know and to say "thank you" when someone holds the door. They also encouraged me to use polite words like "please" so people would feel respected.

Suggestion: 回答总体方向正确，但需注意语法一致性和用词准确。建议：1) 开头直接回答并用原因支持（use linking words such as because, therefore）。2) 修正主谓一致（"shows" vs "make"应一致）。3) 删除填充词（umm）并用更自然的连接词（therefore, as a result）。

Example: Yes, being polite is very important because it shows respect and makes people treat you kindly. Therefore, politeness helps you build positive relationships and makes it easier to make friends.

Suggestion: 内容表达混乱，用词错误（把 polite 误说为 blind）且句子冗长不连贯。建议：1) 开门见山回答（"We should be polite on all occasions."）。2) 给出具体场景（daily life, work, school）并用连接词衔接。3) 注意词汇选择，避免把关键词说错，练习短句表达并连贯衔接。

Example: We should be polite on all occasions. For example, in daily life, at work, and at school. Politeness should be a habit, not just something we show at formal meetings.

Suggestion: 回答内容正确但表达混乱且重复，语法和词汇需改进。建议：1) 用一两句主题句说明主要行为（"I did small things to be polite"）。2) 提供具体例子并用连接词（for example, also）。3) 修正语法（greeting → greet, I was thank you → I would say "thank you"）。练习完整简短句子避免重复。

Example: I did small things to show politeness as a child. For example, I would greet people I knew, say "thank you" when someone held the door for me, and use "please" when asking for help.

× When was her child? My parents always told me that to be polite to the other person.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always told me to be polite to other people.

原句“When was her child?” 结构混乱，时态与人称错误，应该使用“When I was a child” 表示“当我还是个孩子时”。第二句中不需要“that”引导不定式短语，且“the other person” 用法不自然，改为“other people”。建议：按英语习惯把时间状语放在句首或句中，用正确的人称和简洁的不定式结构。

× For example they say when I meet someone I know, I know I need to written at them and when someone hold the door to me for me I need to say thank you and always to say please and something that made the person feel pleasant.

✓ For example, they said that when I meet someone I know, I should greet them, and when someone holds the door for me I should say thank you and always say please and do things that make the person feel pleasant.

原句动词形式错误：1) “they say” 与上下文应该用过去时“they said”；2) “I need to written at them” 中“written”是不定式/过去分词，不正确，应该使用“greet”或“say hello”；3) “when someone hold” 主谓不一致，应为“holds”；4) “to say please” 不需不定式“to”。建议：注意时态一致与动词原形/第三人称单数形式的正确使用。

× So that's umm, promote a habit from my child.

✓ So that promoted a habit in my childhood.

原句结构不通：“promote a habit from my child” 语序和介词错误。应表达“这促成了我童年的一个习惯”，用过去式“promoted” 与之前叙述一致，并用“in my childhood” 表示在童年时期。建议：用正确的介词短语表达时间范围，并保持时态一致。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and make people umm treat you back with kindly UMM.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and makes people treat you kindly in return.

原句主谓不一致：“it shows”和后面“make people”应一致为单数第三人称，改为“makes people”。另外短语“treat you back with kindly” 词序和词类错误，应为“treat you kindly in return”。建议：注意主语为单数时谓语动词加-s，副词用法和固定搭配（in return / treat someone kindly）。

× As a result, being polite helps you to build a positive relationship with others and make it easier to make friends.

✓ As a result, being polite helps you build positive relationships with others and makes it easier to make friends.

动词形式不一致：主语“being polite” 为单数，谓语“helps” 正确，但并列的另一个动词应为第三人称单数“makes”，而不是原句的“make”。另外“help you to build” 中的“to”可省，且“a positive relationship” 改为复数“positive relationships” 更符合泛指。建议：保持并列动词的一致形式，注意复数/单数的习惯用法。

× I think in all the occasions we need to be blind.

✓ I think on all occasions we need to be polite.

原句把“polite” 错写为“blind”，语义错误。介词短语也更常用“on all occasions” 而非“in all the occasions”。建议：谨慎选择单词并记住固定搭配（on occasions/on all occasions）。

× Blind is an important things that throughout your from your daily life, your work, your study.

✓ Politeness is an important thing throughout your daily life, work, and studies.

原句继续使用错误词“Blind”且单复数不当：“an important things” 应为“an important thing”或改为复数“important things”。“throughout your from your daily life” 语序与多余介词错误，改为“throughout your daily life”。建议：注意名词单复数一致，使用正确的介词和词序。

× So all the occasions is very important, but it's not just that in some important meeting or something you, you become polite.

✓ So all occasions are important, but it's not just that you become polite only in important meetings or similar situations.

主谓不一致：“all the occasions is” 应为“all occasions are”。后半句语序混乱，应表达“不是只有在重要会议等场合才礼貌”，用“only in important meetings” 更清晰。建议：注意主语为复数时谓语用复数，简化并理顺语序。

× I think some small things so it's show my blindness like I always greeting the person I met and I knew and also when someone held the door for me, I was thank you for them and always say please when I ask someone for help.

✓ I used to do small things that showed my politeness, like always greeting people I met and knew. Also when someone held the door for me, I thanked them and always said please when I asked someone for help.

时态与动词形式错误：原句混用现在时和过去时，应统一用过去时描述童年经历（used to / showed / greeted / thanked / said / asked）。“I was thank you for them” 完全错误，应为“I thanked them”。“greeting the person I met and I knew” 应简化为“greeting people I met and knew”。建议：叙述过去习惯用过去时或“used to”，确保动词形式正确。

× What are the things there's some small. Throughout my daily life.

✓ Those were some small things throughout my daily life.

原句结构碎片化且语序不当，应整合为完整句子“Those were some small things throughout my daily life.” 使用过去式“were” 与前文一致。建议：避免句子碎片，合并短句成完整句，保持时态一致。