Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify and correct basic grammar and vocabulary, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid questions within the answer. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "for example", "also").

Example: My mother taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, she always told me to say "sorry" if I hurt someone and to say "thank you" when someone gave me something, which helped me show respect to others.

Suggestion: Make a concise topic sentence stating your opinion, then give one or two specific reasons linked logically with connectors (e.g., "because", "so"). Improve grammar (word order, article use) and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "respected", "important" instead of "a lot essential").

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it makes people feel respected and helps build good relationships. Therefore, politeness can also support career development by creating positive impressions at work.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence naming specific occasions, then add a brief explanation using linking words (e.g., "for instance", "especially"). Use correct plural/singular forms and smoother phrasing.

Example: We should be polite in most everyday situations, for instance when meeting people, at work, and during formal events. Being polite in these occasions shows respect and helps maintain good relationships.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and then one or two specific examples of actions you took as a child. Correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., "show politeness", "I used to say"). Keep it concise and coherent using linking words like "for example".

Example: As a child, I showed politeness by apologizing when I hurt someone and by saying 'thank you' when people helped me. For example, if I accidentally stepped on a friend's foot, I would say sorry and try to help them feel better.

× When I was a kid, my mum usually told me to say sorry when I do something wrong and say tank tanks when people give me something, does it useful for me? And does when I got this?

✓ When I was a kid, my mum usually told me to say sorry when I did something wrong and to say thank you when people gave me something. Was that useful for me? And when did I learn this?

Multiple grammar issues: incorrect verb tense (present instead of past) and incorrect quantifier/word choice 'tank tanks' should be 'thank you'. The sentence also contains awkward question forms. Use past tense to match 'When I was a kid' (change 'do' to 'did', 'give' to 'gave'), use the infinitive 'to say thank you', and form clear questions: 'Was that useful for me?' and 'When did I learn this?'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent, use correct fixed phrases (thank you), and split into clear questions.

× Yes I do, I think when we are being polite it will make people feel more the respected and in this society I think it's a lot essential for building a career.

✓ Yes, I do. I think when we are polite it makes people feel more respected, and in this society I think it is very important for building a career.

Errors include incorrect use of the article 'the respected' and awkward adverb phrase 'a lot essential'. Use the adjective 'respected' without 'the', and replace 'a lot essential' with 'very important' or 'essential'. Also prefer simple present 'it makes' for general truths. Suggestions: remove unnecessary articles before adjectives and choose appropriate modifiers (very, highly, essential).

× I think most of the occasion that when daily life or something does much more professional, we need to be polite to so that we appreciate and respect.

✓ I think on most occasions, whether in daily life or in more professional situations, we need to be polite so that we show appreciation and respect.

Original has singular 'occasion' instead of plural 'occasions' and several structural problems. Use 'on most occasions' (plural) and correct phrasing 'in daily life or in more professional situations'. 'We need to be polite so that we show appreciation and respect' is clearer. Suggestions: use plural for general statements and choose clearer noun phrases ('situations' instead of vague 'something').

× There's a lot of way to sell my politics as a try I remember when I was a child I used saying sorry to the people that I hurt or maybe do some do harmful to them.

✓ There are a lot of ways to show my politeness. For example, I remember when I was a child I used to say sorry to people I hurt or who I may have harmed.

Multiple errors: 'There's' is singular while the noun phrase 'a lot of ways' is plural, so use 'There are'. 'Way' should be plural 'ways'. 'Sell my politics' is incorrect word choice; intended meaning is 'show my politeness'. 'I used saying' should be 'I used to say'. Also refine relative clauses: 'people I hurt' or 'people I may have harmed'. Suggestions: match 'there is/are' to the noun number, use correct collocations (show politeness), and use 'used to' for past habitual actions.