Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答能传达主要意思，但有语法错误、重复和表达不够自然。建议：1) 开头用主题句直接回答问题；2) 删除重复词汇并用正确语法（过去时）；3) 补充一两条具体做法（例如父母通过榜样示范或口头提醒）。这样可以更清晰、更自然且符合评分标准。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite when I was young. They often reminded me to say "please" and "thank you" and showed polite behaviour themselves, for example by greeting neighbours and being respectful at the table.

Suggestion: 回答有明确立场但语句混乱且含义不清。建议：1) 用一句话直接给出观点；2) 用一到两句具体原因支撑观点，避免重复和不连贯；3) 使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来保证逻辑。这样能提高清晰度和连贯性。

Example: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people get along and creates a positive atmosphere. For example, saying "thank you" can make daily interactions smoother and prevent misunderstandings.

Suggestion: 你的意思是礼貌在许多场合都应体现，但表达混乱、词汇错误。建议：1) 用主题句列出几个典型场合；2) 使用连接词（for example, such as, and）使句子连贯；3) 具体说明每个场合应如何表现礼貌（例如在餐桌上使用餐具、上课时不打扰）。这样内容更具体且逻辑清晰。

Example: We should be polite in many situations, for example at home, in class, and at meals. At home we should speak respectfully to family members, in class we should not interrupt the teacher, and at meals we should use good table manners.

Suggestion: 回答有具体例子但句子不通顺且用词错误。建议：1) 用过去时并简洁描述具体行为；2) 避免含糊表达，说明行为的目的或效果；3) 使用连词连接例子以保持句子在最大五句内。这样可以使回答更自然、具体且符合评分标准。

Example: As a child, I showed politeness by greeting elderly neighbours and saying "thank you" and "I'm happy" to my parents when they helped me. These small actions were my way of showing respect and appreciation.

× When I was a child my parents often told me I should be polite polite people and that is must be polite to others.

✓ When I was a child, my parents often told me I should be polite to other people and that I must be polite to others.

句子结构混乱，重复词语且从句连接不当。需要加逗号分隔时间状语、移除重复的“polite”、调整词序并用正确的从属连词和情态动词。建议在“polite to other people”中补充介词短语，第二部分改为“that I must be polite to others”。

× Yes, I do. Because being polite is a very important thing in my daily life. If we don't tell if we don't be implied, the word will be terrible.

✓ Yes, I do, because being polite is very important in my daily life. If we don't behave politely, the world will be terrible.

原句由多个碎句和错误词语组成，且逻辑不清。“Because”不应独立成句。将句子合并并用正确的动词短语“behave politely”替换“be implied”，并把“world”替换为正确的单词，确保句子完整有动词。建议把因果句合并并使用恰当动词短语表达礼貌行为。

× such as eating or when we have a meeting or we in the class and home home oil which should be ployed everywhere.

✓ For example, when we are eating, in meetings, in class, or at home — politeness should be shown everywhere.

原句缺少首字母大写与完整句子结构，介词使用错误且有重复和拼写错误（如“home home oil”“ployed”）。需补全介词短语（in meetings, in class, at home），并用清晰的主谓结构表达“politeness should be shown”。建议使用“in/at”来表地点并避免重复和拼写错误。

× When I was a child, I could say hello to the old man and said and said'm sadder happy to my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I could say hello to old people and say 'I'm sad' or 'I'm happy' to my parents.

原句动词形式和时态混乱，含有重复且使用了错误的缩写“said'm sadder”。将过去能力表达“could”与动词原形“say”搭配，复数“old people”比“old man”更通用，情感表达用正确的短语“I'm sad”或“I'm happy”。建议使用‘could + 动词原形’表示过去能做的事，并注意缩写与拼写。