Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 内容清楚但句子结构与连贯性有待加强。回答应更直接地用主题句开头，避免句子断裂和语法错误，使用连接词使细节更有条理，并提供更具体的例子。建议把回答控制在3-4句内，修正时态和名词复数，改进发音停顿处的衔接。

Example: My parents taught me basic manners when I was young. For example, they asked me to keep my room clean and always wash my hands before meals. As a result, I learned to value hygiene and polite behaviour at an early age.

Suggestion: 观点明确但表达重复且有断句问题。应先用一句简洁的主题句表明立场，然后用一到两个具体原因支持，使用连接词（such as, because, therefore）使逻辑更清晰，避免重复“good image”。

Example: Yes, I think politeness is very important. Being polite sets a good example for children and helps build a professional image at work, which can affect how managers perceive us.

Suggestion: 回答过于笼统且有语法错误与句子不完整。建议先给出总体观点，然后举2个具体场景并说明原因。注意主谓一致（basic manners are），避免中断句子并用连词如 for example, such as, and to illustrate。

Example: I believe we should be polite in most public situations. For example, in cinemas we should keep quiet so others can enjoy the film, and at meals we should eat calmly and avoid making loud noises to leave a good impression.

Suggestion: 回答内容具体但表述零散且有语法与标点问题。建议先用一句主题句说明常做的礼貌行为，再给出飞机上具体例子，使用连词（for example, so）连接句子，避免不必要的重复，并修正碎片句。

Example: As a child I tried to be quiet in public to respect others. For example, on airplanes I would read or eat snacks quietly and avoid talking loudly so as not to disturb other passengers.

× When I was a child my parents taught me basic manners and they said I should have a good image and I think basic hygiene is a good manner for us so I always swept the floor and. Clean my desks.

✓ When I was a child my parents taught me basic manners and they said I should have a good image and I think basic hygiene is a good manner for us so I always swept the floor and cleaned my desk.

原句中“Clean my desks.”是一個不完整且動詞形式不正確的片段，應與前面的動詞“swept”保持時態一致並使用過去式“cleaned”。另外“desks”複數在語境中不一定正確，改為單數“desk”更自然。如果想表達經常性的動作，也可改為現在完成或過去習慣的表述，但在此句中保持過去式一致即可。

× Yes, of course, because we should set a good example for children and it's very important for us to have a good image because our managers may. Judge us.

✓ Yes, of course, because we should set a good example for children and it's very important for us to have a good image because our managers may judge us.

原句中“may. Judge”被錯誤地斷開並且“Judge”不應大寫。情態動詞“may”後接動詞原形“judge”，因此正確形式為“may judge”。解釋：情態動詞後面要接動詞原形且不應中斷句子。

× In my opinion, all the situations should we be polite because basic manners is very important in our lives.

✓ In my opinion, we should be polite in all situations because basic manners are very important in our lives.

原句中語序錯誤（“should we be polite”應為陳述語序“we should be polite”），且“all the situations”應為“all situations”更自然。另“basic manners”為複數，謂語應用複數動詞“are”。因此需要調整語序與主謂一致。

× For example, if a people want to leave a good impression on others, they should. Keep silent in cinemas and they should eat very gently when they.

✓ For example, if people want to leave a good impression on others, they should keep silent in cinemas and they should eat very gently when they are in restaurants.

原句中“a people”用法錯誤，應直接用“people”或“a person”。“they should. Keep silent”被錯斷且大寫錯誤；另外句尾“when they.”不完整，缺少情境（例如在餐廳）。修正包含：使用正確代詞、取消不必要的冠詞、連接句子並補全情境。

× I remember that when I was a child, my parents taught me that I should keep quiet in the public space. So when I took a plane, I kept silent and I just ate. Snacks without any sentence, so I thought my behavior was very good.

✓ I remember that when I was a child, my parents taught me that I should keep quiet in public spaces. So when I took a plane, I kept silent and I just ate snacks without speaking, so I thought my behavior was very good.

原句有多處問題：1) “in the public space”應改為更自然的複數形式“in public spaces”或簡單“in public”。2) “I just ate. Snacks”被錯誤分割並且大寫，應合為“ate snacks”。3) “without any sentence”表達不當，應使用“without speaking”或“without saying anything”。整體保留過去時態，但修正片段斷裂與詞語搭配錯誤。