Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap daha net ve akıcı olmalı. Geçmişten bahsederken düzgün zaman kullanımı ve daha fazla ayrıntı ekleyin. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (umm, actually) azaltın. Örneğin: kimden öğrendiğinizi, hangi davranışları gözlemlediğinizi ve bunun nasıl etki ettiğini belirtin.

Example: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother. She reminded me every day to say “please” and “thank you,” and she always modelled respectful behaviour when talking to neighbours. Because of her example, I developed habits like apologising if I bumped into someone and using polite language at home.

Suggestion: Cevabı doğrudan ve mantıklı gerekçelerle desteklemişsiniz, bu iyi. Ancak gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu ifadelerini azaltın, kelime seçimini düzeltin (ör. "colleagues"), ve bir bağlaçla fikri daha akıcı bağlayın. Ayrıca örneği daha spesifik hâle getirin (hangi durum veya sonuç).

Example: Yes, I do. Being polite helps people cooperate and creates a positive atmosphere at work. For example, when I thank my colleagues for their help, they are more willing to assist me later, which makes team projects run more smoothly.

Suggestion: Cevabınız mantıklı ama bazı kelime hataları ("stations" yerine "situations", "politics" yerine "politeness") ve cümle yapısı bozuklukları var. Fikirleri bağlamak için bağlaçlar kullanın ve örneği daha düzenli verin (nerede, hangi ifadeleri kullandığınız).

Example: We should be polite in formal situations, such as job interviews and meetings, and also when meeting strangers or using public services. For instance, on public transport I usually say “excuse me” if I need to pass someone and “thank you” when someone lets me sit.

Suggestion: Cevap çok kısa ve belirsiz; geçmiş eylemleri açıkça belirtin. Basit geçmiş zaman kullanarak belirli örnekler verin (ne yaptınız, kimle, hangi sözleri/alışkanlıkları). Dolgu kelimelerini çıkarın ve maksimum 5 cümleyi aşmayın.

Example: As a child, I would greet my parents and relatives politely and always say “please” and “thank you.” I also helped around the house without being asked, which my parents praised as polite behaviour.

× 'Actually I'm so not remember but my mom has everyday saves me.'

✓ 'Actually I don't really remember, but my mom used to remind me every day.'

'The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and tense. "I'm so not remember" is ungrammatical; the correct negative present is "I don't remember" or past habitual "I don't really remember". "my mom has everyday saves me" mixes present perfect "has" with simple present "saves" and wrong verb "save" for reminding. Use "used to remind me" or "reminded me every day" depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: decide on present or past: "I don't really remember, but my mom used to remind me every day.' Errors: incorrect verb form, wrong auxiliary, tense mismatch. Fix by using correct negative auxiliary "do" + base verb and proper past habitual "used to'."

× 'For example, I always try to say thank you at work because it makes me colleges more willing to help me.'

✓ 'For example, I always try to say thank you at work because it makes my colleagues more willing to help me.'

'The sentence has a wrong word "colleges" (a noun meaning educational institutions) instead of "colleagues" (coworkers). Also possessive "my" is needed: "my colleagues." The verb "makes" correctly agrees with singular subject "it." Suggestion: use the correct noun spelling and include the possessive determiner: "my colleagues."'

× 'I always say thank you and excuse me and public transport.'

✓ 'For example, I always say thank you and excuse me on public transport.'

'The phrase "and public transport" lacks a preposition. Use "on public transport" to indicate the location where the phrases are used. Also add a leading phrase such as "For example" if needed for clarity. Suggestion: place the preposition before the location: "on public transport.'"

× 'Well, I think we should be polite in formal stations like job interviews and meetings, and also when we meet strangers and other people because politics shows respect and helps avoid misunderstandings.'

✓ 'Well, I think we should be polite in formal situations like job interviews and meetings, and also when we meet strangers and other people because politeness shows respect and helps avoid misunderstandings.'

'The sentence contains the wrong noun "stations" instead of "situations" and misspells "politics" instead of "politeness." These are vocabulary/word choice errors affecting sentence structure and meaning. Suggest using the correct words: "situations" for contexts and "politeness" for the quality of being polite. The rest of the sentence is grammatically fine.'

× 'I polite told with my parents and I really I think I'm so polite.'

✓ 'I spoke politely with my parents, and I really think I was very polite.'

'The original sentence uses incorrect word order and forms: "I polite told with my parents" is ungrammatical because "polite" is an adjective and should be the adverb "politely," and the verb "told" needs an object if used that way. Better phrasing is "I spoke politely with my parents." The second clause "I really I think I'm so polite" repeats pronoun and mixes tenses; if referring to childhood, use past: "I really think I was very polite." Suggest using the correct adverb form and consistent tense.'