Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích cụ thể ai đã dạy bạn và ví dụ cụ thể về hành động lịch sự (ví dụ: nói 'thank you', chào hỏi, giữ im lặng khi người lớn nói). Giảm tiếng ấp úng (uh) và giới hạn trong tối đa 5 câu.

Example: When I was a child, my parents taught me basic manners. For example, they always reminded me to say “thank you” when someone helped me and to stay quiet when adults were speaking. They also encouraged me to greet people politely and to offer help when appropriate.

Suggestion: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và dùng linking words để liên kết ý. Sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., “politeness is essential”, “saying thank you can create a good impression”). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể ngắn gọn để minh họa lợi ích của sự lịch sự.

Example: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it shows respect and helps build relationships. For example, saying “thank you” after a colleague helps you leave a positive impression, which may make them more willing to support you later. Overall, polite behaviour creates a nicer environment.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần cụ thể hơn về các hoàn cảnh khác nhau (ví dụ: cuộc gặp gỡ, công việc, bữa ăn gia đình). Tránh cấu trúc rườm rà và lỗi chia động từ. Sử dụng linking words như “for example” hoặc “such as” để liệt kê và minh hoạ. Giữ trong tối đa 5 câu.

Example: We should be polite in many situations, such as at work, during family meals, and at social events. For example, at a party with colleagues you should thank people who helped organise it. Being polite at work also helps maintain good teamwork and professional relationships.

Suggestion: Cần sửa nghĩa không rõ (từ “grasshopper” và “Adoros” là sai/ngẫu nhiên). Hãy trả lời trực tiếp: nêu hành động cụ thể bạn từng làm (ví dụ: nói cảm ơn, giúp đỡ người khác, chào hỏi người lớn). Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng câu ngắn, rõ ràng. Nếu muốn, cung cấp một ví dụ kèm thời gian/hoàn cảnh cụ thể.

Example: As a child, I usually said “thank you” to teachers and classmates when they helped me. I also offered to help tidy up after class and always greeted adults politely. For instance, after a sports event I thanked the coach and teammates for their support.

× Yes, when I was a child, my uh, parents taught me to uh, keep silent when adores, uh, cone with the others or need to show gratitude by saying thank you with the others when they are help us and uh, give, give us some, uh, some good things and uh, happy things.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my parents taught me to keep quiet when adults were with others, and to show gratitude by saying thank you when they helped us or gave us gifts or pleasant things.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect words (adores, cone), incorrect verb forms (are help us), awkward coordination and repetition. Suggestions: replace incorrect words with 'adults' and 'were with', use past tense 'helped' and simple past 'gave', remove filler words and redundant phrases, and break into clearer clauses. Use parallel structure for 'helped us or gave us gifts'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, absolutely. I think the politeness is a very essential in everyday life because it helps you to show gratitude to the others. By saying thank you can make a good impressions with many people so you can gain support from them in other days and under circumstances.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think politeness is very important in everyday life because it helps you show gratitude to others. Saying thank you can create a good impression on many people so you can gain support from them in the future or in different circumstances.

Errors include unnecessary definite articles ('the politeness', 'the others'), incorrect adjective use ('a very essential'), and incorrect noun pluralization ('impressions'). Suggestions: omit 'the' before uncountable noun 'politeness', use 'important' instead of 'essential' with 'very', remove 'the' before 'others', use gerund 'Saying' and singular 'impression', and clarify time reference 'in the future or in different circumstances'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Well, I think so, when we are joined a party with lots of our colleagues and many people, you need to show gratitude by saying thank you to some people who are supports you a lot to gain achievements and to be successful at present.

✓ Well, I think when we join a party with many colleagues and other people, you need to show gratitude by saying thank you to the people who support you a lot in helping you achieve success now.

Problems: incorrect passive/participial form 'are joined' should be active 'join'; subject-verb agreement 'are supports' is wrong. Suggestions: use simple present 'join' for general occasions, 'support' as base form to agree with plural 'people', and simplify phrase 'gain achievements and to be successful at present' to 'helping you achieve success now' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:9

× Well, when I was a grasshopper, I showed my gratitude by saying thank you to Adoros because they could help me and support me in the gaining achievements and could gain some prizes when playing sport.

✓ Well, when I was young, I showed my gratitude by saying thank you to adults because they helped and supported me in achieving successes and winning prizes when playing sports.

Errors: 'grasshopper' and 'Adoros' are incorrect words; 'could help me and support me in the gaining achievements' is awkward and uses incorrect quantifiers and verb forms. Suggestions: replace 'grasshopper' with 'young' or 'a child', 'Adoros' with 'adults', use past tense 'helped' and 'supported', use 'achieving successes' or 'winning prizes', and plural 'sports'. Grammar problem type ID:14