Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give concise specific details and use linking words. Avoid incorrect words (e.g., "cheat" is wrong here) and grammar errors: use correct verb forms, articles, and word order. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 short sentences. For example, say where you learned politeness, mention at least one concrete example (greeting teachers, saying "please/thank you"), and finish with a brief reason.

Example: I learned to be polite mainly at school. For example, my teachers encouraged us to greet them every morning and to say "please" and "thank you." Also, my parents reinforced good manners at home by reminding me to share and apologize when I made mistakes. As a result, politeness became a regular habit for me.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then support with clear, coherent reasons and specific examples. Fix vocabulary errors (e.g., "cheat each other's bikes" is unclear; perhaps you meant "cheat or take advantage of each other"). Use linking words like "because", "for example", or "therefore" to connect ideas. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along. For example, polite behaviour at work makes teamwork smoother and reduces conflicts. Therefore, people are more likely to trust and cooperate with someone who treats others respectfully.

× People learn politeness in a child I think it's in the school.

✓ People learn politeness as children; I think they learn it at school.

The original sentence has sentence structure and article errors. 'in a child' is incorrect; use 'as children' to indicate when people learn politeness. 'in the school' should be 'at school' (preposition) or 'in school'. Also replace 'I think it's' with 'I think they learn it' to clarify the subject. Suggestion: break into two clauses or use a semicolon to improve clarity.

× In a school teacher we need to cheat teachers polite and nice just like greeting every morning.

✓ In school, teachers need to teach students to be polite and nice, for example by greeting each other every morning.

Multiple errors: 'In a school teacher we need to cheat teachers' is ungrammatical. 'Cheat' is wrong word; should be 'teach'. Article use: 'In a school' can be 'In school' or 'At a school'. Pronoun/reference errors: clarify subjects ('teachers need to teach students'). 'Each other' or 'students' depending on meaning. 'Every morning' is fine but 'greeting each other every morning' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct verb 'teach', correct article/preposition, and correct pronouns.

× So I think school is the right place to learn.

✓ So I think school is the right place to learn politeness.

This sentence is mostly correct but lacks an object to specify what is being learned. Adding 'politeness' makes the meaning clear and maintains present-tense general statement. No tense change needed.

× Absolutely because even though in school or in working place people nice and polite is the basic requirement and people prefer cheat each other's bikes.

✓ Absolutely. Even in school or at the workplace, being nice and polite is a basic requirement, and people prefer not to cheat each other.

This original sentence contains multiple structure and word choice errors. 'in working place' should be 'at the workplace' or 'in the workplace' (preposition and article). 'people nice and polite is the basic requirement' has subject-verb and word order problems; use 'being nice and polite is a basic requirement' (uses gerund). 'people prefer cheat each other's bikes' is incorrect: 'prefer not to cheat each other' or 'prefer not to steal each other's bikes' depending on intent. The phrase 'each other's bikes' seems out of context; likely intended 'cheat each other'. Suggestion: use gerund for states ('being...'), correct prepositions/articles, and avoid incorrect verbs like 'cheat' when meaning 'teach' earlier; clarify intended meaning about stealing if necessary.