Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 질문에 직접적으로 답하고 있으나 문법적 오류와 표현의 부정확성 때문에 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 구체적으로는 시제와 어휘 선택(예: "miss someone who I should be polite at"), 전치사 사용, 문장 간 연결이 어색합니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 주제문을 명확히 하라: "I learned politeness from my parents and school." 2) 구체적 예시를 한두 문장으로 간결하게 설명하라: 언제, 어떻게 가르쳤는지(예: 부모가 방문 전 인사 연습을 시켰다). 3) 연결어를 사용해 흐름을 자연스럽게 만들라(For example, Then, As a result 등). 4) 문법을 단순하고 정확하게 유지하라(과거 시제와 목적어·전치사 사용에 주의).

Example: I learned to be polite from both my parents and my school. For example, before meeting guests my parents would role-play greetings with me so I knew how to address people politely. As a result, I felt more confident speaking to adults and strangers.

Suggestion: 의견을 제시하려 했지만 문법적 오류(중복된 단어, 어색한 표현), 어휘 선택 오류("light" 등 부적절한 단어)와 논리적 근거 부족으로 설득력이 떨어집니다. 개선 포인트: 1) 주제문에서 명확한 주장 사용: "Yes, I think politeness is important." 2) 이유를 구체적이고 논리적으로 제시하라(예: 사람들과의 관계 형성, 기회 확대). 3) 연결어로 이유와 결과를 명확히 연결하라(Because, Therefore, As a result 등). 4) 불필요한 단어를 제거하고 문장을 간결하게 유지하라.

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important. Because polite behavior helps build good relationships, people are more willing to cooperate with you. Therefore, being polite can lead to more opportunities at work or in social situations.

× I learned how to be polite at school and from my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite at school and from my parents.

'Learned how to' is not incorrect but 'learned to be' is more natural and concise in this context. Use 'learned to' + verb to express acquiring a habit or ability.

× For example, if I miss someone who I should be polite at before meeting, my parents showed me how to do in front of them.

✓ For example, if I met someone to whom I should be polite before meeting them, my parents showed me how to behave in front of them.

Errors: 'miss' should be past tense 'met' to match context; 'who I should be polite at' is incorrect preposition and relative clause — use 'to whom I should be polite'; 'showed me how to do' is unidiomatic — use 'showed me how to behave'; 'them' needed for the person reference. Suggestion: use correct tense, proper relative pronoun with preposition placement, and the verb 'behave' for polite actions.

× That makes me happy to be polite.

✓ That made me happy to be polite.

Context refers to a past learning experience, so past tense 'made' should be used instead of present 'makes'. Maintain consistent past tense throughout the sentence describing past events.

× Yes I I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Duplicate 'I' is a typo. Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation. No third-person singular verb error beyond the typo; correction addresses the redundancy.

× Polite is very important to living because sometimes the light makes you opportunity to try something new.

✓ Being polite is very important in life because sometimes it gives you the opportunity to try something new.

'Polite' is an adjective; use 'Being polite' or 'Politeness' as noun phrase. 'Important to living' is unidiomatic — use 'important in life'. 'the light makes you opportunity' is incorrect vocabulary and structure; likely meant 'it gives you the opportunity'. Use 'gives you the opportunity' or 'creates opportunities'.

× If you being polite and make good good image to others, the others can help you for somewhere.

✓ If you are polite and make a good impression on others, they can help you in many situations.

'If you being polite' is ungrammatical; use conditional 'If you are polite'. 'make good good image' has repetition and wrong noun — use 'make a good impression'. Prepositions: 'impression on others' is correct, not 'to others'; 'help you for somewhere' is incorrect — use 'help you in many situations' or 'help you get somewhere'. Use consistent subject 'they' instead of 'the others'.