Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较直接，但存在语法与用词错误，表达不够简洁自然。请注意时态一致（过去经历用过去时），避免重复短语，改正词汇错误（如 “grade” 应为 “greet”），并增加一两个具体细节使回答更丰富。例如说明具体情景或举例说明他们如何教你（如通过示范或故事）。回答控制在3-4句以内，并使用连接词使语义连贯。

Example: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother and grandmother when I was young. They taught me by example, always greeting neighbors cheerfully and saying please and thank you. Because they showed me these habits every day, I copied them and now try to be polite in social situations.

Suggestion: 回答观点明确但语法及表达需改进。注意主谓一致（如 “it shows”），使用更自然的词组（如 “good manners” 而非 “good manner”），并补充具体原因或一个简单例子以增加说服力。可用连接词（because, so, therefore）使句子更流畅。控制在2-3句内。

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows good manners and helps you make a positive impression. For example, greeting colleagues politely can create a friendly atmosphere at work.

× From my memory, the first lesson I learned about being polite is from my mom and grandma.

✓ From my memory, the first lesson I learned about being polite was from my mom and grandma.

句中时态不一致。前半句用过去时“learned”，后半句用现在时“is”会造成时态冲突，应改为过去时“was”。建议保持时态一致：当描述过去发生的事时，句中动词应都用过去时。

× They teach me how to how to grade enthusiastically to people around to say hello.

✓ They taught me how to greet people around me enthusiastically and say hello.

原句有多处结构问题：重复“how to how to”；动词错误“grade”应为“greet”；不定式和介词短语顺序混乱（“to people around to say hello”）。并且前句是过去经历，应使用过去时“taught”。建议重组为“taught me how to greet people around me enthusiastically and say hello”。

× Yes being polite is important because it show your good manner and usually leave a good impression to others about yourself.

✓ Yes, being polite is important because it shows good manners and usually leaves a good impression on others.

句中主语是第三人称单数“being polite”，谓语需用第三人称单数形式“shows/leaves”，原句使用“show”和“leave”错误（与语法问题类型2和27相关，但按指定列表选择最相关的是“Present tense issue”）。另外，“good manner”应为复数“good manners”；介词搭配“impression on others”更自然；“about yourself”多余并不地道，故省略。建议复习主语为第三人称单数时动词变化及常见固定搭配。