Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 発音と語彙の誤用（“pride mana / bright manner / impride”など）を直し、簡潔で論理的な構造に整えましょう。具体的には：1) 主題文で明確に答える（例：My parents taught me to be polite.）。2) 支持する詳細は時系列や具体的なエピソードで示す（例：具体的に何を言われたか、どう直したか）。3) 文は最大5文に抑え、接続詞（so, then, because）を使って流れをつくる。発音練習では “polite”, “manner”, “pride” の区別（ここでは“proud”が適語な場合もある）に注意する。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite when I was young. For example, once I used rude words and they explained why my words were hurtful, so I learned to choose kinder expressions. Since then, I practiced saying “please” and “thank you” in daily life. As a result, my relationships with friends and family improved.

Suggestion: 意味があいまいな語（“pride”は不適切）を正しい語に置き換え、理由と具体例を加えて論理的に述べましょう。具体的には：1) 直接の答え（Yes, I do.）で始める。2) 理由を because や so を使って説明する（例：being polite builds respect and trust）。3) 具体例や結果を一つ示す（例えば職場や友人関係での効果）。語彙は“polite”, “respect”, “good relationship”などの正しい単語を使う練習を。

Example: Yes, I do. Being polite is important because it helps build respect and trust between people. For instance, when I speak politely at work, colleagues respond more cooperatively, so tasks run more smoothly. Therefore, politeness often improves both personal and professional relationships.

× When I was a child, I couldn't understand what is a pride mana.

✓ When I was a child, I couldn't understand what 'pride' meant.

The error is word choice and verb form: 'what is a pride mana' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'what ... meant' to report past understanding (reported speech / past tense). Also 'mana' is not correct; likely intended 'manner' or 'pride' as a noun. Suggest using a clearer noun and past-tense reporting: 'I couldn't understand what 'pride' meant.'

× So I said something impride to someone.

✓ So I said something impolite to someone.

The word 'impride' is not an English word. The intended meaning is 'impolite.' Use the adjective 'impolite' to describe behavior: 'I said something impolite.' Also keep simple past tense 'said' to match the time frame.

× And then my parents told me what is a bright manner.

✓ And then my parents taught me good manners.

Several issues: 'what is a bright manner' is ungrammatical and uses incorrect vocabulary. Use 'taught me' for parents instructing the child (simple past). 'Good manners' is the natural collocation. So: 'And then my parents taught me good manners.'

× To keep a good relationship with someone, we have to be pride as much as possible.

✓ To maintain good relationships with people, we have to be polite as much as possible.

Multiple problems: 'be pride' is incorrect — 'pride' is a noun, not the adjective needed. The intended adjective is 'polite.' 'Keep a good relationship with someone' is better expressed as 'maintain good relationships with people.' Use plural 'relationships' and 'people' for general statements. Verb tense/modal usage (have to) is acceptable; keep it. Suggest: 'To maintain good relationships with people, we have to be polite as much as possible.'