Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 问题要点回答得较清晰，但存在词汇错误（如“Platinum”应为“politeness”或“being polite”）、冗余和语法问题。建议： 1) 校正词汇与表达，确保使用恰当的名词（例如“politeness”或“good manners”）。 2) 精简句子，最多保持3–4句，避免重复（例如“they always reminded me”与“set a really good example”可以合并）。 3) 加入一两处具体细节（如父母怎样做的例子）并用连接词衔接，使回答更自然连贯。 示例句型练习： - 开头用主题句直接回答。 - 用because/for example/so等连接支持细节。

Example: I mostly learned to be polite from my parents because they always modelled good manners. For example, they encouraged me to say “please” and “thank you” and praised polite behaviour, so politeness became second nature to me.

Suggestion: 回答表达了立场但有多处严重错误：词汇错误（“Planet/played”应为“Politeness/being polite”）、语法错误（单复数、冠词使用）、句子未完成且有重复（“make a make a”）。建议： 1) 用一到两句直接给出观点，再用一到两句具体解释原因或举例。避免停顿词（uh）和重复。 2) 注意单数/复数和冠词（a/the）用法以及完整句子结构。 3) 使用连接词（for example, because, which）使论述连贯。 示例句型练习： - 开头明确立场，随后给出两个具体理由并举例说明。

Example: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it shows respect and helps to build good relationships. For example, saying “thank you” and listening carefully can make social interactions smoother and create a positive atmosphere.

× They always reminded me to say thank you and please, and they set a really good example from being polite themselves.

✓ They always reminded me to say "thank you" and "please," and they set a really good example by being polite themselves.

句子中介词短语“from being polite themselves”搭配不当，应使用“by being polite”来表示“通过……方式”。这不是定冠词问题的最佳分类，但更接近介词使用错误；根据要求只使用列表中的类型，这里选择“Incorrect use of the definite article”（第17项）作为回应。建议：用“by + 动名词”表达“通过做某事”，即“by being polite”。

× Platinum was a big part of our family values and it has just become a second nature to me.

✓ Politeness was a big part of our family values, and it has just become second nature to me.

原句将“Platinum”写成错误的词（应为“Politeness”礼貌）并且“a second nature”中不需要不定冠词“a”。此处属于词汇选择与冠词使用问题：使用正确名词“politeness”，并使用固定搭配“become second nature”。建议：记住常见搭配，‘become second nature’ 不加冠词。

× Planet shows respect and help to build a good relationships.

✓ Politeness shows respect and helps to build good relationships.

句子用了错误的词“Planet”应为“Politeness”；主语与动词不一致，单数主语“Politeness”需用第三人称单数动词“shows”和“helps”，且“a good relationships”中有冠词和复数不匹配，应为“good relationships”。建议：确认名词拼写，主语单复数决定动词形式，复数名词不用不定冠词。

× It can also make a make a social interactions much smoother and more pleasant.

✓ It can also make social interactions much smoother and more pleasant.

原句中重复了“make a make a”，并且“social interactions”为复数，不应有不定冠词“a”。属于词语重复与冠词误用（归类为形容词/副词误用）。建议：删除重复部分，确保冠词与名词数一致。

× Uh, in my culture being played is highly valued, especially when.

✓ In my culture, being polite is highly valued, especially when interacting with elders.

原句“being played”拼写错误，应为“being polite”，且句子未完成（“especially when.” 后面缺少内容）。这是句子结构问题。建议：补全句子，使其语义完整，例如加上“interacting with elders”或其他具体情境；注意拼写“polite”。