Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples of how your parents taught you, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrasing.

Example: My parents taught me to be polite from a young age. For example, they always encouraged me to say 'please' and 'thank you,' and they demonstrated respectful behavior in front of me. As a result, I learned to greet others politely and to listen carefully when someone is speaking.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion sentence, then support it with a clear reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and avoid filler words and vague adjectives.

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build positive relationships. For example, when you are courteous to new people, they are more likely to trust you and respond kindly. Therefore, politeness makes daily interactions smoother and more pleasant.

× When I was a child, my parents taught me to be polite and kind by inquiring me to say please and thank you and like please can you and by moderate respectful behavior.

✓ When I was a child, my parents taught me to be polite and kind by asking me to say please and thank you, by using phrases like 'please, can you...,' and by modeling respectful behavior.

The original sentence uses 'inquiring me' which is incorrect; the correct verb is 'ask' with the preposition pattern 'ask someone to do something' (preposition error and verb choice). 'Like please can you' is awkward; use 'phrases like' for examples. 'Moderate respectful behavior' is unnatural; 'modeling respectful behavior' correctly expresses that parents demonstrated politeness. Suggestions: use 'ask' not 'inquire' for requests, use 'phrases like' to introduce examples, and use 'model' or 'modeling' to describe demonstrating behavior.

× For me, the most important value that they explanation was being human showing.

✓ For me, the most important value they taught was being a good person and showing kindness.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and has incorrect word order and word choice ('that they explanation' is invalid). This is a sentence structure error. 'Taught' fits the context (past teaching). 'Being human showing' is unclear; replace with 'being a good person and showing kindness' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: use a clear subject-verb-object structure: 'the most important value they taught was X.'

× In our life we can meet someone new and as life shows umm especially this polite and kind of people have kind heart.

✓ In life we can meet new people, and as life shows, especially polite and kind people have kind hearts.

Problems include awkward phrasing and incorrect noun forms. 'Someone new' is better as 'new people' for general statement. 'This polite and kind of people' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'polite and kind people.' 'Have kind heart' needs plural or article: 'have kind hearts' or 'have a kind heart.' The error types relate to present participle misuse and sentence structure; fix by using proper noun forms and plural agreement. Suggestion: simplify to 'In life we meet new people' and ensure noun-adjective order is correct ('kind people').

× It's so previous to have kind heart in our life.

✓ It's so precious to have a kind heart in our life.

The word 'previous' is incorrect here; the intended adjective is 'precious.' Also 'have kind heart' needs an article: 'a kind heart.' This is an incorrect adjective choice and article omission (adjective error and minor article issue). Suggestion: use 'precious' for value and include 'a' before 'kind heart.'

× Yes I do. In our life we can meet someone new and as life shows umm especially this polite and kind of people have kind heart.

✓ Yes, I do. In life we can meet new people, and as life shows, especially polite and kind people have kind hearts.

Subject-verb agreement and noun-number issues: 'this polite and kind of people have' is incorrect. Use 'polite and kind people have' to match plural subject with plural verb 'have.' Also change 'someone new' to 'new people' for general reference. Suggestion: ensure subjects and verbs agree in number and simplify wording for clarity.