Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 在回答中要更直接回应问题，句子要简洁连贯，避免重复并使用连词组织细节。可以先给出主题句说明学习礼貌的方式，然后补充具体例子（比如父母示范、纠正或奖励），并用 because、for example 等连接词使逻辑清晰。注意时态和动词形式（例如 “told me”, “could”），以及避免多余填充词（uh, um）。

Example: My parents taught me to be polite mainly by example and correction. For instance, they always told me what behaviours were acceptable and corrected me when I was rude, explaining why my actions were inappropriate. Because they consistently modeled polite language and manners, I learned to greet people respectfully and say “please” and “thank you.”

Suggestion: 回答要直接、具体并避免重复。先给出明确立场（Yes/No + brief reason），然后用一到两句具体支持细节并用连接词（for example, because, therefore）。注意用词准确（e.g., “make friends easily” 而不是 “make friends yearly”），并控制句子数量在五句以内。去除口头禅如 “uh” 或 “mmm”。

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps build good relationships with others. For example, polite behaviour makes it easier to make friends at school or work and can prevent conflicts. Therefore, politeness contributes to a more pleasant and cooperative society.

× When I was a child, my parents always tell me which things that I could do and which other things I cannot do.

✓ When I was a child, my parents always told me which things I could do and which things I could not do.

这是主谓一致及时态错误：句子以“When I was a child”（过去时间）开头，谓语应使用过去时。原句中用了现在时“tell”和混合的情态动词时态“could/ cannot”，应统一为过去时“told”和“could / could not”。建议在叙述过去事情时，整体动词都使用过去时态，避免时态混用。

× Sometimes they will give me, give me some, give me some examples for warning me if I did something I cannot to do what I will be.

✓ Sometimes they would give me some examples to warn me what would happen if I did something I should not do.

这是句子结构错误，原句冗余重复并且从句时态与表达混乱。把“give me, give me some”合并为“give me some examples”；“for warning me if I did something I cannot to do what I will be”结构不通，应改为不定式目的结构“to warn me”并用虚拟/过去将来结构表达结果“what would happen if I did something I should not do”。建议理清主句与从句的关系，避免重复词并用恰当时态和从句连接词。

× MMM, I think it's very important because, uh, you'll be polite.

✓ I think it's very important because you'll be polite.

这是现在时与将来时使用上的冗余问题。说话者表达一般看法时通常用一般现在时："I think it's very important" 足够，后面可接“you'll be polite”表示结果。去掉拖音“MMM”和多余停顿，句子更流畅。

× That means you can, uh, play with others friendly and can make friends yearly.

✓ That means you can get along with others and make friends easily.

这是形容词/副词使用不当。原句用“play with others friendly”中“friendly”应为副词修饰动词，且短语不自然，改为“get along with others”（与人相处）；“make friends yearly”不合上下文，应该是“easily”（容易地）。建议用习惯搭配（get along with, make friends easily）并用正确的副词形式。

× Uh, that is so important for you living in the so society and.

✓ That is very important for living in society.

这是句子结构与词序错误。原句“for you living in the so society and”不符合英语表达，重复“so/and”并且人称不必要。简化为“important for living in society”更自然；如果想保留“you”，可以说“important for you to live in society”。建议去掉多余词，使用正确的固定短语（live in society / live in the society 时加定冠词取决于上下文）。