Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 在回答中注意时态、主谓一致和单词拼写错误，句子要更简洁自然并直接回应问题。可以先用一句话概括（topic sentence），然后用1-2句具体细节支持，并使用连接词使语意连贯。例如纠正“stay start school”到“started school”、把“learn”改为“learned/was taught”、修正“expect”与“expected”以及复数/单复数形式。

Example: I learned to be polite when I started school because my teachers set clear rules and expected respectful behaviour. For example, they praised students who spoke politely and disciplined those who broke the rules, so I soon understood that good manners mattered.

Suggestion: 注意词汇选择与拼写（如“blind”→“polite”，“Polly”→“politeness”），并纠正语法错误和多余词（例如“work or and”）。回答应先直接表明观点，再用2句具体理由或例子支持，使用连接词（because, so, for example）。表达要更具体（说明哪种场合、如何影响关系）。

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because politeness shows respect and makes people see you as friendly. For example, saying ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ in meetings or daily conversations can make interactions smoother and help you build positive relationships at work and in life.

× When I stay start school, I learn to be polite, meaning because the teacher had clear rules and expect respect.

✓ When I started school, I learned to be polite because the teachers had clear rules and expected respect.

此句包含时态和主谓一致问题。原句中使用了现在时“stay start/learn”但描述的是过去的经历，应使用过去式（started, learned）。此外“teacher”应为复数或与冠词连用（the teachers），且后半句“expect”应该与过去式主语一致改为“expected”。建议：叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时；保持主语与动词时态一致。

× For example, they praise the student who spoke politely and punish those who broke the rules.

✓ For example, they praised the students who spoke politely and punished those who broke the rules.

这里与上句一致要使用过去时（praised, punished）。另外原句中单数“the student”与后文“those”不一致，应改为复数“the students”。建议：保持数的一致性，并与叙述的时态匹配。

× So I quickly understood that good manner were important here.

✓ So I quickly understood that good manners were important here.

“manner”应为复数“manners”表示礼貌的举止，且与动词“were”搭配。原句单复数错误导致主谓不一致。建议：注意可数名词的单复数形式，常用短语为“good manners”。

× Yes, being blind is very important.

✓ Yes, being polite is very important.

原句将“polite”误写为“blind”，造成语义和词性错误。这里需要形容词“polite”来描述“being ...”，即“being polite”。建议：复查拼写，确保用词符合语境。

× Polly Politeness shows good manner and makes people view you as friendly which helps you build good relationship at work or and in daily life.

✓ Politeness shows good manners and makes people view you as friendly, which helps you build good relationships at work and in daily life.

原句问题包括多处：多余或错误的词（“Polly”应去掉）、名词单复数错误（manner→manners；relationship→relationships）、并列连词使用错误（“or and”应为“and”）、以及关系从句前需要逗号。建议：删除多余词，修正单复数，并使用正确的连词和标点使句子通顺。

× For example, same place and thank you can makes conversation smooth and leave a positive impression.

✓ For example, saying "please" and "thank you" can make conversations smooth and leave a positive impression.

原句中“same place”显然错误，应为常用礼貌用语“please”；“can makes”主谓不一致，应为“can make”；“conversation”应为复数或泛指时用复数“conversations”。建议：使用恰当的短语（saying "please"）、确保情态动词后动词为原形，并注意名词单复数。