Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify the main idea with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and simple sentence structures, and provide one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid unclear references (e.g., "Twitter peoples") and reduce redundancy. Practice using past tense consistently and correct verb forms (e.g., "my mother taught me").

Example: My family taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, my mother corrected my speech and reminded me to speak respectfully to elders, and my grandparents showed me proper table manners. Because of their guidance, I learned to listen carefully and say "please" and "thank you".

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use correct grammar and natural phrasing (e.g., "being polite is important because"). Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and avoid vague phrases like "positive way" without explanation.

Example: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it helps build good relationships and prevents misunderstandings. For example, polite language can calm a tense situation, and saying thank you makes people feel appreciated. Therefore, politeness often leads to more positive interactions.

× When I was a child, my mothers and families tease me to don't allow Twitter peoples or friends or some elder peoples because I'm the thing that you are bad in everything and you're speaking language also so bad. That's why the MO my mother teach me.

✓ When I was a child, my mother and other family members told me not to talk to people on Twitter or to certain friends or elders because they said I was bad at everything and that my way of speaking was very poor. That is why my mother taught me manners.

Multiple pronoun errors and other issues: 'my mothers and families' should be 'my mother and other family members' (incorrect plural and collective reference) — Grammar Problem Type 12. 'tease me to don't allow' is incorrect structure: use 'told me not to' (sentence structure and modal/negation problems; categorized under Incorrect use of pronouns and Sentence structure but corrected under allowed types 12 and 26). 'Twitter peoples' and 'elder peoples' use incorrect plural noun and wording; use 'people on Twitter' and 'elders' or 'older people' (Singular/plural and word choice; type 1 and 11 issues addressed by rephrasing). 'I'm the thing that you are bad in everything' is ungrammatical and unclear — corrected to 'they said I was bad at everything' (subject reference and tense alignment; type 12 and 5). 'you're speaking language also so bad' corrected to 'that my way of speaking was very poor' (pronoun and adjective/adverb issues; types 12 and 13). 'MO my mother teach me' corrected to 'my mother taught me' (past tense error; type 5). Suggestion: use clear subject references (mother, family), use 'told me not to' for reported advice, use correct past tense for reporting childhood events, and replace informal pluralizations like 'peoples' with 'people' or specific terms.

× Yeah, I think in positives way the polite is very important because when we polite in our mind we do not get a negative things and we only using up positive thinking.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because when we are polite in our minds we do not attract negative things and we use positive thinking.

Tense and word form problems: 'in positives way' should be 'in a positive way' (adjective/adverb usage and article; types 13 and 22). 'the polite is very important' should be 'being polite is very important' (incorrect article and noun form; types 17 and 26). 'when we polite in our mind' needs verb and number agreement and plural noun: 'when we are polite in our minds' (present tense and subject-verb linking; type 6). 'we do not get a negative things' has number and verb choice issues: 'we do not attract negative things' or 'we do not experience negative things' (types 1 and 13). 'we only using up positive thinking' should be 'we use positive thinking' (incorrect verb form and extra particle; type 8 and 10). Suggestion: use 'being + adjective' for general states, ensure correct present-tense 'are' with 'we', keep noun number consistent, and prefer simple verbs like 'use' or 'attract' for clarity.