Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は内容があいまいで文法ミスや語順の問題が多く、聞き手に伝わりにくいです。まず主語＋述語の基本文を整え、過去形と所有構成（my father's teachings など）を正しく使ってください。また、1〜2文の補足で具体例（例えば父がどんな行動で教えたか）を入れると効果的です。接続語（for example, because, so）を使って論理的につなげましょう。発音や流暢さを上げるために短めの文で練習し、不要な繰り返し（I I）を避けてください。

Example: When I was a child, I learned to be polite from my father’s teaching. For example, he always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and he praised me when I used polite language. Because of his example, I try to be respectful to others now.

Suggestion: 文は意図が分かるものの語順や語彙選択に混乱があり、冗長な繰り返し（provides, provides）があります。まず簡潔な主旨文を作り、その後で理由を2点ほど挙げると良いです。理由を述べるときは具体例（職場での礼儀がどのように役立つか）を加え、接続語（because, so, therefore）で繋げてください。語彙は適切な単語（company → workplace; attitude → behavior）を使い、文法（is essential / it helps）を正しく整えましょう。

Example: Yes, I think being polite is essential. In the workplace, politeness helps build good relationships with colleagues and creates a positive atmosphere. For example, saying ‘thank you’ or listening carefully can prevent misunderstandings and make teamwork smoother.

× So when I was a child, I I run to be polite by running my father's. Teaching and my father is very cold to me by.

✓ So when I was a child, I learned to be polite through my father's teaching, and my father was very strict with me.

誤りの原因: 'run' is incorrect tense/form; 'learned' is the correct past tense/past participle for acquiring a habit. 'running my father's. Teaching' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'through my father's teaching'. 'is very cold to me by' mixes present tense and incorrect preposition/order; context refers to childhood so past tense 'was' and 'strict with me' are appropriate. 改善方法: Use 'learned' for past acquisition, use 'through' to indicate means, correct noun phrase 'my father's teaching', and use 'was very strict with me' to describe past behavior.

× So I think it is essential to be polite in my life, in my company, my provides, provides, attitude, is respectful to my colleagues.

✓ I think it is essential to be polite in my life and at my company; my attitude should be respectful toward my colleagues.

誤りの原因: Sentence has tense and word-choice issues. 'So I think' is acceptable but redundant; 'in my company' needs correct preposition 'at my company'. 'my provides, provides, attitude' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'my attitude should be respectful'. Use present simple for general belief: 'I think' and 'is essential'. Use 'should be' or present simple 'is' for desired state. 改善方法: Remove repetition, use correct prepositions ('in my life', 'at my company'), and rephrase to 'my attitude should be respectful toward my colleagues' to convey expectation.