Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use past tense when talking about childhood and include linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) to connect ideas. Also correct basic grammar: e.g., use “taught” not “teach,” and use singular/plural correctly.

Example: I learned politeness from my parents when I was a child. For example, they taught me to say “please” and “thank you” and to show respect to adults, so I grew up understanding how to behave politely in different situations.

Suggestion: Work on producing a concise, coherent opinion with clear reasons and correct vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence expressing your view, then give one or two specific reasons linked with connectors (because, therefore, for example). Avoid unclear words (“Robbies”, “cancer answer”) and repetition. Use correct sentence structure and simpler accurate words if unsure of complex ones.

Example: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps build good relationships and shows respect for others. For example, being polite at work can make colleagues more willing to cooperate, which often leads to better results.

× My parents teach me that we should, we should, we should be polite, we should, we should be very genuine person so that we can be we can be a good person and we can get success in life.

✓ My parents taught me that we should be polite and genuine so that we can be good people and succeed in life.

The original uses present verb 'teach' with a past context—use past tense 'taught' (Past tense issue, ID 5). Also 'person' should be plural 'people' to match 'we' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Redundant repetitions and awkward structure were simplified. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for upbringing descriptions and match plural nouns with plural subjects.

× My parents parents kiss me.

✓ My parents kissed me.

The sentence repeats 'parents' and uses present tense 'kiss' where past 'kissed' fits the context of childhood (Past tense issue, ID 5). This is not a reflexive pronoun error strictly, but the main issues are repetition and wrong tense. Suggestion: remove duplication and use past tense to describe past actions.

× We should be polite in very polite in very polite in.

✓ We should be very polite.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical—extra phrases 'in' and repetition create a broken structure (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Suggestion: keep a simple, clear sentence: 'We should be very polite.'

× And yes, officer there it's very important we should be polite because without without politeness, we can get success being being Robbies or that makes a very, very different serious mistakes which can, which can, which cannot give us best cancer answer.

✓ Yes, it is very important to be polite because without politeness we may make serious mistakes that can prevent us from succeeding.

Many errors: unnecessary filler words, incorrect phrase 'we can get success being being Robbies' and 'best cancer answer' which are unintelligible. Tense and modal usage should be consistent—use 'may' for possibility (Modal verb usage, ID 4). Remove repetition and unclear words (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Suggestion: express the idea clearly and concisely using correct modal and vocabulary: 'without politeness we may make serious mistakes that can prevent us from succeeding.'