Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장 구조와 문법 오류를 고치고, 응답을 더 자연스럽고 구체적으로 만드는 것이 필요합니다. 예: 'respect to all the people' → 'respect all people', 'showed an example' → 'set an example', 그리고 시제 일치(‘remind’ → ‘reminded’)를 수정하세요. 또한 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 연결하고, 간단한 구체적 예시(예: 손님에게 인사하기, 어른에게 자리 양보하기)를 추가하면 답변이 풍부해집니다. 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 유지하세요.

Example: I mainly learned to be polite from my parents. For example, they always told me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they set an example by greeting guests warmly. Because they reminded me consistently, good manners became a habit.

Suggestion: 의미 전달은 되지만 문법과 어휘 선택이 부정확합니다. 'respect to others' → 'respect others', 'receive others constellation'는 의미 불분명하므로 'receive respect from others'로 바꾸세요. 주어-동사 일치('everyone try' → 'everyone tries')도 고치고, 이유를 뒷받침하는 구체적 예시(예: 직장에서의 협력, 일상 대화의 갈등 감소)를 추가하면 설득력이 높아집니다. 연결어(Therefore, For example)를 사용해 논리를 명확히 하세요.

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because if people don't respect others, they are less likely to receive respect in return. For example, polite behaviour can reduce conflicts at work and make conversations more pleasant. Therefore, everyone should try to understand and respect each other.

× They taught me to say thank you and please and to respect to all the people.

✓ They taught me to say 'thank you' and 'please', and to respect all people.

The preposition 'to' should not follow 'respect' when the object is a noun phrase like 'all people'. Use 'respect all people' or 'respect everyone'. Also use commas between items in a list for clarity. Additionally, 'the people' is unnatural here; 'people' or 'everyone' is preferred.

× They also showed an example and remind me consistently.

✓ They also set an example and reminded me consistently.

The verbs are inconsistent in form and tense. 'Showed an example' is not the usual collocation; native phrasing is 'set an example'. Also the sentence describes past habitual actions, so use past tense 'reminded' to match 'taught' and 'set'. 'Remind me consistently' (present) conflicts with the past context.

× Yes, of course it is very important because if people don't respect to others, they also don't receive others constellation.

✓ Yes, of course it is very important because if people don't respect others, they also don't receive others' consideration.

Again, 'respect' should not be followed by 'to' before the object. The noun 'constellation' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'consideration'. Also possessive form 'others' should be 'others'' before 'consideration'.

× So everyone try to understand and respect each other.

✓ So everyone tries to understand and respect each other.

Subject-verb agreement error: the singular subject 'everyone' requires the third-person singular verb form 'tries', not 'try'. Use 'tries' to match the singular indefinite pronoun.