Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 总体回答内容相关、意思明确，但存在语法和表达错误，句子不够自然。建议： 1) 直接开篇回答问题，避免多余疑问词（例如不要用“Why was a child”）。 2) 修正语法错误（如动词时态和主谓一致），把句子分成主题句和1-2个支持句，不超过5句。 3) 使用连接词（e.g. because, so, also）使逻辑更清晰。 4) 增加具体细节（例如父母如何提醒，举个场景），但保持简洁。 示例句型示例在下面提供。

Example: I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you,” and they corrected me if I was rude. For example, my mother used to role-play polite conversations with me before we went out. Because of this constant guidance, politeness became a habit for me.

Suggestion: 回答表达了观点但语言不够准确且不连贯，句子有语法和词汇错误，例子不完整。建议： 1) 开门见山给出立场（e.g. Yes, I do）。 2) 用准确的词汇（e.g. show respect and appreciation），注意名词形式和搭配。 3) 提供一个完整、具体的例子并用连接词（for example, for instance, because）连接理由和例子。 4) 保持句子简短且逻辑清楚，最多3-4句。

Example: Yes, I do think being polite is very important because it shows respect and makes social interactions smoother. For example, when I’m at a restaurant I speak quietly and say “please” and “thank you” to the waiter, which creates a pleasant atmosphere. As a result, people are more willing to help and communicate politely in return.

× Why was a child my parents told me how to be a polite person.

✓ When I was a child, my parents told me how to be a polite person.

此句存在句子结构和时态的问题，应使用表示过去背景的从句引导词“When I was a child”。原句“Why was a child”不合语法且意义不明。建议将句首改为“When I was a child”以表达“在我小时候”，并把谓语放在主句“My parents told me...”以构成完整句子。

× They always reminded me to say please and thank you for others.

✓ They always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” to others.

原句中介词短语使用不当：“say ... for others”不符合英语习惯，应使用“to others”表示向他人说。主谓一致无误，但介词错误属于主谓关系影响表达，按题单要求修正为规范表达。建议多记常用搭配：say something to someone。

× It's a great way to show respect for everyone and it's also my family value and it became second nature to me.

✓ It's a great way to show respect for everyone; it's also a family value, and it became second nature to me.

原句中有连接词和冠词使用不当。“my family value”更自然为“a family value”或“my family's value”。另外句子过长且缺少标点，影响可读性。建议使用分号或逗号分隔并修改为“a family value”或“my family's value”。同时确认时态一致，使用“became”表示过去习得，符合语境。

× Sure, I think being polite is very important because it's a great way to show your respect and appreciate for everyone.

✓ Sure, I think being polite is very important because it's a great way to show your respect and appreciation for everyone.

这里“appreciate”被错误地用作名词，正确名词为“appreciation”。应区分动词（appreciate）与名词（appreciation）。建议记住常见名词形式以免混淆。

× If you applied present, for example in restaurant, you can talk with the waiter in a low voice.

✓ If you apply it in the present, for example in a restaurant, you can speak to the waiter in a low voice.

原句时态与词形混用：“applied present”不合语法，应该用现在时“apply”或短语“in the present”。此外缺少冠词“a restaurant”，介词“talk with”可改为更自然的“speak to”。建议使用正确动词时态和常用搭配：apply (something) in a situation; speak to someone; 在可数名词前加冠词。

× They may.

✓ They may appreciate it.

原句“They may.”不完整，缺少宾语或补语，导致句子不完整。应扩展为完整从句，例如“They may appreciate it.”以表明礼貌可能得到对方的欣赏。建议陈述时确保句子包含主语和谓语及必要的宾语，避免不完整短句。