Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 答えは基本的な意味は伝わりますが、文法と語彙の誤り、冗長さ、つながりの弱さが目立ちます。まず、主語と動詞の一致や冠詞（a/the）の使い方を直してください。『table manners』や『taught me』などの正しい語を使い、同じ語を繰り返さないように言い換えを練習しましょう。また、トピック文の後に具体的な例（どんなマナーを教わったか）を1～2文で付けて、接続詞（for example, such as, especially）を使ってつなげると自然になります。発音で分かち書きされやすい語（table manners, taught）を明確に発音することも意識してください。

Example: My father taught me to be polite when I was a child. For example, he showed me proper table manners, such as saying ‘please’ and ‘thank you’ and not speaking with my mouth full. Because of his guidance, I still follow these habits today.

Suggestion: 内容は伝わりますが、論理のつながりや表現の正確さを改善する必要があります。まず主張の後に理由を明確に述べ、接続語（because, so, therefore）を適切に使って文をつなげてください。主語の省略や不自然なフレーズ（"being that makes other person being polite"）を避け、より自然な構文に置き換えましょう。具体例や文化的背景（日本では礼儀が重視される等）を一文で補足すると説得力が増します。最後に文をまとめる短い結論文を入れると完成度が高まります。

Example: Yes, I do, because politeness helps to maintain good relationships and mutual respect. For example, when people are polite in public, others are more likely to respond politely in return. In Japan, politeness is especially important because it preserves harmony, so we should teach it to the next generation.

× I learned from my father because my father is very polite person and especially table mana it's very necessary for Japanese people.

✓ I learned from my father because he is a very polite person, and especially table manners are very important for Japanese people.

The sentence has incorrect or missing prepositions and related noun forms. 'Polite person' needs the article 'a'. 'Table mana' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'table manners'. Use 'are' with the plural noun 'manners'. Also 'necessary for' is grammatical, but 'important for' sounds more natural here. Suggestion: add articles where needed, use the correct noun form 'table manners', and ensure verb agreement with the plural noun.

× So my father told me table mana many.

✓ So my father taught me table manners often.

The verb and object are incorrect. 'Told me table mana many' is ungrammatical. Use 'taught me' to indicate teaching behavior, use the correct noun 'table manners', and place the frequency adverb 'often' after the verb. This fixes subject-verb and word-order issues.

× Yes I do, because being polite is not only for myself.

✓ Yes, I do, because being polite is not only for me.

Using 'myself' is incorrect here; 'myself' is a reflexive pronoun and should be used when the subject and object are the same (I hurt myself). The correct object pronoun is 'me'. Keep present tense 'is' as is. Suggestion: replace 'myself' with 'me'.

× So being that makes other person being polite.

✓ Being polite encourages other people to be polite.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect articles and verb forms. 'Being that' is unnatural; use 'Being polite'. 'Other person' should be plural 'other people'. Use 'encourages ... to be polite' for clear meaning. Suggestion: restructure the sentence to subject + verb + object + infinitive for clarity.

× We have to be polite for next generations, especially in Japan.

✓ We have to be polite for the next generation, especially in Japan.

Use 'the next generation' (singular) or 'future generations' (plural); the article 'the' is required with 'next generation'. 'For' is acceptable, but 'to' could also work in some contexts. Suggestion: use 'the next generation' or 'future generations' to sound natural.