Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 语音与表达需要更清晰、用词要准确，避免不相关或错误的词汇（例如 “pilot/ police/ appellate/ Genuity” 用得不当）。回答应直接回应问题并给出具体例子：简短主题句说明谁教你的、如何教的，然后用一两个具体细节支持（比如父母的具体话、行为或规则）。注意句子连贯，可使用连接词如 "because", "so", "for example"。保持不超过五句，避免重复。

Example: My mother taught me to be polite when I was a child. She often reminded me to say "please" and "thank you" and to greet adults respectfully. For example, she insisted that I always knock before entering a room and apologise if I bumped into someone. Because of her guidance, politeness became a habit for me.

Suggestion: 意思表达基本明确，但语言不够准确且有重复与犹豫（如 "played", "umm"）。回答应先给出直接观点，然后用1–2个清晰具体的理由或例子支持，并用连接词衔接（如 "because", "for example", "so"）。避免泛泛而谈，具体说明如何帮助人际交往或职业发展。控制在五句内。

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important, especially in modern society. Being polite helps build trust and makes communication smoother because people feel respected. For example, polite behaviour can prevent conflicts in public or at work and often leads to better cooperation. Therefore, I always try to be courteous to others.

× Well, when I was a child, my mother always told me that you have to be a pilot people because you are a pilot, the police will just take you out in the officer.

✓ Well, when I was a child, my mother always told me that you have to be a polite person because if you are impolite, the police will take you away.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用不当（13）。原句中用词混乱，'pilot people' 应为 'polite person'（礼貌的人），且逻辑上前后句不通。将 'pilot' 更正为 'polite'，将复数 'people' 改为单数 'person' 以匹配不特定单一身份，并调整从句使句意连贯：如果你不礼貌，警方可能会把你带走。建议：注意形容词与名词的搭配，确认拼写（polite vs pilot），并保持句子逻辑清晰。

× So I was shocked by my mother's words at the time when I was a child.

✓ So I was shocked by my mother's words when I was a child.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句有多余的时间状语 'at the time when I was a child' 冗长且重复。简化为 'when I was a child' 更自然。建议：避免重复时间短语，使用简洁明确的从句。

× So I think we have to be appellate people with some Genuity that is very important for everyone.

✓ So I think we have to be polite people with some genuineness; that is very important for everyone.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用不当（13）。原句中 'appellate' 与语境不符，应为 'polite'（有礼貌的）；'Genuity' 拼写错误，应为 'genuineness'（真诚）。将句子分为两部分并加分号使结构更清晰。建议：检查词汇拼写与语义，选用合适的名词或形容词表达“真诚”。

× Of course, being played is very important, especially in this modern society because you don't know people will do what to you every time.

✓ Of course, being polite is very important, especially in this modern society, because you never know what people will do to you at any time.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用不当（13）。原句 'being played' 错误，应为 'being polite'。此外，时间和语序不当，调整为 'you never know what people will do to you at any time' 更通顺。建议：注意 'polite' 与 'played' 的拼写及词性，重组从句以符合英语习惯语序。

× Uh, so with this uncertainty, we have to make sure that we are polite to others because sometimes they will just say something which are very umm.

✓ Uh, so with this uncertainty, we have to make sure that we are polite to others because sometimes they will just say something that is very hurtful.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句中 'which are very umm' 句法不完整，'which' 指代不明且谓语数不一致。改为 'something that is very hurtful' 明确指代并保持主谓一致。建议：使用明确的关系代词（that）和一致的谓语形式，补全句子使意思完整。