Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は内容が伝わるが、文法ミス、語彙の誤用、不自然な表現（例："create respect free"）や冗長さが見られます。改善点： 1) 主語と時制を一致させる（過去の経験なら過去形を使う）。 2) 不明瞭なフレーズを簡潔で意味のある表現に置き換える（例："create respect free" → "show respect"）。 3) つなぎ言葉を使って情報を整理する（"for example", "also", "because" の使い方を自然に）。 4) 文の長さは3〜4文にまとめ、具体例を一つ明確に述べる。

Example: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents when I was a child. They taught me table manners and how to apologize sincerely, which helped me understand others' feelings. For example, my mother always insisted that I say "thank you" and "excuse me" after meals, so I practiced these phrases every day.

Suggestion: 内容は肯定的で理由を述べようとしているが、文法（主語・動詞の一致、冠詞の欠如）や語順の誤りがあり、論理のつながりが不明瞭です。改善点： 1) 主語と動詞の一致を確認する（"a good mother influences" など）。 2) 理由を明確にし、具体的な例を簡潔に述べる。つなぎ語（"because", "for example", "therefore"）を適切に使う。 3) 冗長な表現を避け、3文以内で完結に答える。

Example: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because polite behaviour helps build trust and good relationships. For example, when parents behave politely, their children often imitate them and learn to treat others respectfully. As a result, polite habits can spread across generations.

× I learned to be polite for my parents because they teach me about the table manners and how to apologize properly.

✓ I learned to be polite from my parents because they taught me about table manners and how to apologize properly.

The speaker is describing past learning, so verbs should be in the past tense. Change 'teach' to 'taught' (past tense). 'For my parents' is unnatural; use 'from my parents' to indicate source. Also remove the article 'the' before 'table manners' because 'table manners' is a general plural noun. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense verbs and natural prepositions (e.g., 'learned from my parents' and 'taught').

× Also, I learned how to create respect free.

✓ Also, I learned how to show respect freely.

The original uses unidiomatic phrasing and incorrect preposition/word order. 'Create respect free' is incorrect. Use the verb 'show' with the noun 'respect' and the adverb 'freely' if intended. If meaning to show respect naturally, another option is 'how to show respect' without 'freely'.

× For example, uh, to say hello.

✓ For example, saying hello is a good way to show respect.

The fragment 'For example, uh, to say hello.' is not a complete sentence (no main verb and subject). Convert the infinitive phrase into a full clause 'saying hello is a good way to show respect' to complete the sentence and clarify meaning. Remove filler 'uh' in formal responses.

× It is a good chance to show respect.

✓ It is a good way to show respect.

'Chance' is not the best collocation here; 'way' is more natural. Tense is present and correct, but word choice should match. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'a good way to show respect.'

× Yes, I think being polite is very important because a good mother's influence other people and set a positive example for children and future generations.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important because a good mother influences other people and sets a positive example for children and future generations.

The subject 'a good mother' is singular, so verbs must be singular: 'influences' and 'sets'. Also remove the possessive apostrophe in 'mother's' which incorrectly turned the subject into possessive. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement by using singular verb forms with singular subjects.

× For instance, when adults are expected for their children can imitate them.

✓ For instance, when adults are good role models, their children can imitate them.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing structure ('when adults are expected for their children' is ungrammatical). Clarify by saying 'when adults are good role models' or 'when adults behave well, their children can imitate them.' This fixes sentence structure and meaning.