Politeness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Améliorez la clarté et la structure de votre réponse : commencez par une phrase claire indiquant qui vous a appris à être poli, puis ajoutez une ou deux phrases courtes de détails concrets (par exemple : habitudes, actions spécifiques, ou exemples). Évitez les répétitions et corrigez l’ordre des mots. Utilisez des mots de liaison simples (par exemple « ensuite », « par exemple ») pour rendre le discours plus logique.

Example: My parents and primary school teachers taught me to be polite. For example, my parents always encouraged me to say “please” and “thank you,” and my teacher praised students who helped others. As a result, I learned to be respectful and helpful in everyday situations.

Suggestion: Clarifiez votre opinion avec une phrase-thèse suivie d’une raison claire et d’un exemple concret. Évitez les répétitions inutiles et nommez clairement ce que vous voulez dire (par exemple « polite people » plutôt que « the man, the man »). Utilisez une conjonction pour lier l’idée et l’exemple (par exemple « parce que » → « because / as a result »).

Example: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it helps people get along and shows respect. For instance, a polite neighbour is more likely to receive help when they need it, and polite behaviour can make public places, like shops or buses, more pleasant for everyone.

× When I tried my parents and my teachers in primary learn to me to become to to become a polite child.

✓ When I was young, my parents and my primary school teachers taught me how to be a polite child.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: wrong verb choices, incorrect word order, and missing auxiliary verbs. Use the past tense passive/active structure 'I was young' or 'When I was in primary school' and the correct verb 'taught' for teaching in the past. Replace 'learn to me' with 'taught me' and 'to become to to become' with 'how to be'. Suggestion: simplify the clause to a clear subject-verb-object order and use 'taught' for past teaching actions.

× You should be respectful and you should help others and in old in old age.

✓ You should be respectful and help others, especially when you are old.

The phrase 'in old in old age' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use the present modal 'should' correctly with base verb 'help'. To refer to later life, use the clause 'when you are old' or 'in old age'. Suggestion: remove repetition and combine ideas with a comma or conjunction for clarity.

× Yes, of course, in my in my point of view, the man, the man, the policeman is, is the best one in the society because because people love the people love pride and love when he.

✓ Yes, of course. In my point of view, policemen are respected members of society because people admire them for their service and integrity.

This sentence has repetition, incorrect article use, singular/plural mismatch, and an incomplete clause at the end. 'The man, the man, the policeman is, is the best one in the society' should be pluralized to 'policemen are respected members of society' or rephrased singularly with correct articles. The final fragment 'people love pride and love when he' is unclear; clarify intention: people admire policemen for their service and integrity. Suggestion: remove repeated words, ensure subject-verb agreement, and complete the reason clause with clear nouns like 'service' and 'integrity'.