Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 先直接回答是否做过纸艺，再用一两个具体例子说明。原回答中的“take the top of the photo”“pay the crafts”等表达难以理解；注意使用正确的动词搭配，如“make paper crafts”“draw on paper”。避免重复使用“sometimes”和“always”，并说明做纸艺的原因。

Example: Yes, I have. I sometimes make simple paper crafts or draw on paper during class. It’s an easy way to be creative, and I find it quite relaxing.

Suggestion: 题目问过去的喜好，统一使用过去时，例如“liked”或“used to”。把“transfer into various animals”改成“cut paper into animal shapes”，并说明你通常做什么图案或为什么喜欢做。删去重复的“when I was a child”和“cut paper”。

Example: When I was a child, I loved cutting paper into different shapes, especially animals and characters from cartoons. I often made them for fun, and sometimes I used them to decorate my room.

Suggestion: 先明确回答现在是否写纸质信；原回答开头的“absolutely”与后文“不写”矛盾。可以说明如今主要用手机或电脑发消息，并补充纸质信不常写的原因。注意使用“write letters”“send messages”等自然搭配，避免“accumulate all the figures”这类不符合语境的表达。

Example: Not very often. I usually send messages on my phone because it’s quicker and more convenient. However, I might write a physical letter for a special occasion, such as a birthday.

Suggestion: 先直接表达观点，再说明人们为什么会保留或不保留手写信。原回答中“Nobody wants to keep...”与“more meaningful”意思冲突；请明确区分“很少有人写信”和“有人会珍藏有纪念意义的信”。使用“handwritten letters”，而不是“the handwriter”，并给出一个具体例子。

Example: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters, especially if they’re from someone important. Although most people communicate online now, a handwritten letter can feel more personal and meaningful.

Suggestion: 用一句话清楚回答是否随身携带纸笔，再解释用途。把“registrate”换成“write down”或“note down”，并用“names”或“things I notice”表达记录内容。可以补充一个具体场景，并说明这些记录如何帮助你保存回忆。

Example: Yes, I sometimes carry a small notebook and a pen with me. They’re useful for writing down names, reminders, or interesting things I notice. I enjoy looking back at those notes because they bring back memories.

× And sometimes I always to want to pay the crafts or draw the picture in paper in my math class or the RT class because I think it's so really aligned myself.

✓ Sometimes I always want to make crafts or draw pictures on paper in my math class or RT class.

“always”后面直接接动词原形，因此应说“always want”，不能说“always to want”。另外，“want to”后应接动词原形；这里将“pay the crafts”改为结构正确的“make crafts”。

× And sometimes I always to want to pay the crafts or draw the picture in paper in my math class or the RT class because I think it's so really aligned myself.

✓ Sometimes I always want to make crafts or draw pictures on paper in my math class or RT class.

表示在纸张表面画画时，通常用介词“on”，所以应说“draw pictures on paper”，而不是“draw pictures in paper”。

× I love to, uh, cut the paper, uh, transfer into various animals and when I was a child, because in that time, I really want to cut paper, to make all the paper cutting characters in the cartoon.

✓ When I was a child, I loved cutting paper into various animal shapes because I really wanted to make paper-cut characters from cartoons.

这句话描述的是童年经历，应使用过去时。“I love”应改为“I loved”，“I really want”应改为“I really wanted”。讲述过去持续或反复进行的爱好时，也可以用“loved cutting”。

× Oh, absolutely. I'm not use the right physical letters now because it's so matter in this time.

✓ Oh, absolutely. I don't write physical letters now because they don't matter as much these days.

一般现在时的否定句需要使用“do not/don't + 动词原形”，不能说“I'm not use”。结合问题中的“write physical letters”，这里用“I don't write”更合适。

× In this time I always use the smartphone or the computer to accumulate all the figures to my cell.

✓ These days, I always use a smartphone or a computer to save information on my phone.

表达“如今”时，通常说“These days”或“Nowadays”，不说“In this time”。此外，表示信息保存在手机上时，用“on my phone”更合适。

× In today, people always use the smartphone or the computer to keep the letters, but I think the handwriter is more meaningful in this day.

✓ Today, people often use smartphones or computers to save letters, but I think handwritten letters are more meaningful these days.

“Today”前面不需要加介词“in”；表达“如今”可直接说“Today”。句末表示“这些日子/如今”时，可说“these days”，不说“in this day”。

× Yeah, but I got an always, uh, carry paper and pens is can, it is useful for me, uh, to registrate some name or some beautiful things in the paper.

✓ Yeah, I always carry paper and pens because they can be useful for writing down names or beautiful things.

原句中“I got an always”和“carry paper and pens is can”都没有形成正确的句子结构。可以用“I always carry...”表达“我总是带着……”，并用“because they can be useful...”说明原因。

× Yeah, but I got an always, uh, carry paper and pens is can, it is useful for me, uh, to registrate some name or some beautiful things in the paper.

✓ Yeah, I always carry paper and pens because they can be useful for writing down names or beautiful things on paper.

表示把内容写在纸张表面时，应使用“on paper”，而不是“in the paper”。