Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答基本涉及了“尝试做纸艺”和“妹妹擅长纸艺”两个内容，但语法和词汇问题较多，影响理解。应直接说明自己是否做过纸艺，再补充时间、作品和原因。将“it doesn't frequent mind to make some graphics”改为“It's not something I often do”，将“in the two years ago”改为“two years ago”，将“don't have talents”改为“I'm not very good at it”。“well-read”表示“博学的”，这里应使用“good at paper crafts”；“Chinese Asian characters”表达不清，可以具体说“Chinese paper-cutting or calligraphy characters”。

Example: Not really. I tried making some paper crafts about two years ago, but I found them quite difficult because I’m not very good at delicate work. My sister, however, is excellent at paper crafts, especially Chinese paper-cutting.

Suggestion: 回答方向正确，提到了小时候折纸，但表达不够准确且细节不足。应直接使用过去习惯“used to fold paper”，并列举具体动物，例如青蛙、鸟或小船。“fold them”中的代词指代不清，应说“fold paper”；“occuped animals”不是正确表达，可以改为“origami animals”或“animals made from paper”。避免“a small shape”这种不自然且重复的表达。

Example: When I was a child, I used to fold paper into simple origami shapes. I particularly liked making frogs, birds, and little boats. It was a fun way to pass the time, although my creations were usually quite basic.

Suggestion: 回答内容较完整，有明确观点、原因和具体例子，符合Part 1的基本结构。不过需要改进冠词、介词和动名词形式：“I'm big fan”应为“I'm a big fan”，“fan for writing”应为“fan of writing”，“love collect”应为“love collecting”。“a symbol for some memories”不自然，可改为“a reminder of special memories”。结尾“I really love it”指代不清，应明确说明喜欢这封信或这种传统。

Example: Yes, I do. I’m a big fan of writing and keeping physical letters because they remind me of special memories. For example, my mother gave me a handwritten letter for my birthday last month, and I still treasure it.

Suggestion: 回答没有清楚回答“人们是否仍然保存手写信件”，而且后半部分有明显的识别或用词错误。“I don't know others they think about it”应改为“I’m not sure what other people think”。“I really love the eight”和“all kinds of piano”语义不清，可能想表达“这种做法”和“各种各样的信件”，应使用“this tradition”和“all kinds of letters”。还应加入对他人的概括性看法，例如年轻人较少保存，但有些人仍因纪念意义而保留。

Example: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters, although it is less common than before. Many younger people prefer text messages, but handwritten letters feel more personal and memorable. I keep letters from my friends, parents, and other relatives because they are meaningful to me.

Suggestion: 回答似乎想表达“不经常携带，因为现在有手机应用”，但句子结构混乱，导致意思不清。应先直接回答“No, I don’t”，再给出一个清晰原因。“it's not a frequent choice of mine”可改为“I don’t usually carry them”，“the fonts has a lot of application”应改为“my phone has many useful apps”。可以具体说明手机能记录便签、日程和待办事项。注意主谓一致：应说“apps have”或“my phone has”。

Example: No, I don’t usually carry paper and pens when I go out. My phone has useful apps for taking notes, making shopping lists, and recording appointments. I only bring them when I expect to attend a meeting or need to write something down.

× To be honest it doesn't frequent mind to make some graphics.

✓ To be honest, I don't frequently make crafts.

“frequent”是形容词，不能直接修饰动词“make”。这里需要使用副词“frequently”修饰“make”。同时，原句的动词结构不完整，使用“I don't frequently make...”更符合英语表达。

× Maybe in the two years ago I tried it.

✓ Maybe two years ago, I tried it.

表示“几年前”时，直接说“two years ago”，前面不能加介词“in”。

× I think I don't have talents for it.

✓ I don't think I have a talent for it.

“talent”在这里表示一种个人才能，是可数名词单数，因此需要使用不定冠词“a”。另外，“I don't think...”的语序更自然。

× I think I maybe used to fold them into different simple shapes.

✓ I think I maybe used to fold it into different simple shapes.

“paper”通常是不可数名词，应该用单数代词“it”指代，而不是复数代词“them”。

× I think I maybe used to fold it into different simple shapes.

✓ I think I used to maybe fold it into different simple shapes.

副词“maybe”放在“I think”后面会使句子不够自然。把它放在“used to”后面，可以更清楚地修饰后面的动作。

× I'm big fan for writing some physical letters.

✓ I'm a big fan of writing physical letters.

“fan”是可数名词单数，前面需要加冠词“a”。固定搭配是“a fan of”，不能说“a fan for”。

× I'm big fan for writing some physical letters.

✓ I'm a big fan of writing physical letters.

表示“喜欢或热衷于某事”时，使用固定搭配“be a fan of”，因此应将“for”改为“of”。

× I really love collect them.

✓ I really love collecting them.

动词“love”后面可以接动名词。表达“喜欢做某事”时，应使用“love doing”，所以“collect”要改为“collecting”。

× I think it's a symbol for some memories.

✓ I think they are symbols of some memories.

前文的“them”指代多封信，因此这里应使用复数代词“they”和复数动词“are”。“symbol of memories”比“symbol for memories”更符合语法和搭配。

× I think it's a symbol for some memories.

✓ I think they are symbols of some memories.

因为谈论的是多封信，所以“symbol”也应使用复数形式“symbols”，并与复数主语“they”保持一致。

× I don't know others they think about it.

✓ I don't know what other people think about it.

“I don't know”后面需要接完整的宾语从句。表示“其他人怎么想”时，应使用“what other people think”，不能直接把“others”与“they”并列连接。

× I collect all kinds of piano from my friends, my friends, my parents and other family members.

✓ I collect all kinds of handwritten letters from my friends, my parents, and other family members.

“all kinds of”后面通常接复数可数名词。根据上下文，这里应使用“handwritten letters”；“letter”需要使用复数形式“letters”。同时删除重复的“my friends”可以使表达更清楚。

× I think it's not a frequent choice of mine to go out with.

✓ I don't often choose to go out with them.

介词“with”后面需要有宾语。这里用“them”指代纸和笔。此外，“I don't often choose...”比原来的结构更自然。

× Nowadays the fonts has a lot of application.

✓ Nowadays, phones have a lot of applications.

复数主语“phones”应搭配复数动词“have”，不能使用“has”。同时，“a lot of”后面接可数名词时，名词应使用复数形式“applications”。

× Nowadays the fonts has a lot of application.

✓ Nowadays, phones have a lot of applications.

“application”是可数名词，“a lot of”后面需要使用复数形式“applications”。

× Nowadays the fonts has a lot of application for reads on records and some schedule innate.

✓ Nowadays, phones have a lot of applications for reading records and some schedules.

介词“for”后面通常接名词或动名词，因此“reads”应改为“reading”。“for reading...”表示“用于阅读……”。

× Nowadays the fonts has a lot of application for reads on records and some schedule innate.

✓ Nowadays, phones have a lot of applications for reading records and some schedules.

“some”后面通常接复数可数名词，因此“schedule”应改为“schedules”。“application”也应改为复数“applications”。