Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答结构清晰：先直接回答，再举例并说明感受，细节也比较具体。需要注意语法一致性：主语“Making papercraft”是单数，应该说“helps me unwind”；“papercraft”在这里更自然地用复数“papercrafts”或改为“making things with paper”。最后一句中的“that”指代不够明确，可以改成“which made me feel...”。

Example: Yes, I have. I enjoy making paper crafts because they help me unwind after a busy day. For example, I once made a birthday card for a close friend by cutting, folding and decorating colorful paper. It took me about an hour, but I felt calm and satisfied when I finished it.

Suggestion: 回答有直接回答过去的习惯，也提供了时间和原因，但有几处严重的词汇和表达问题，影响理解。“feed them in different color Koreans”应改为“fill them in different colours”或“colour them in different colours”；“experience my reactively”应为“express my creativity”。建议用更简单、准确的句子，并补充一个具体例子。

Example: When I was a child, I liked drawing animals and flowers on paper and colouring them in different colours. I often did this after school because it helped me relax and express my creativity. I especially enjoyed drawing cats and birds because they were easy and fun to design.

Suggestion: 回答的观点明确，也进行了纸质信件和电子邮件的比较，但存在多处明显的词汇和语法错误。“special kitchens”应为“special occasions”，“birthday card”应为“birthday cards”，“Emails is”应为“Email is”或“Emails are”。“had renting cars feel me”应改为“handwritten cards/letters feel more personal and meaningful”。建议保持两到三句，避免错误表达影响流畅度。

Example: I only write physical letters on special occasions, such as birthdays or important events. For example, I sometimes send birthday cards to close friends or write thank-you notes. Although emails are more convenient, handwritten letters feel more personal and meaningful to me.

Suggestion: 回答有明确观点、理由和个人例子，内容较完整。不过题目问的是“people”，而回答主要谈自己，可以先概括现代人的情况，再补充自己的经历。注意语法：“handwriting letters”应为“handwritten letters”或“writing letters”，“letters are”而不是“letters is”，“I open it once a year”比“opened it often a year”自然，“They’ve touched me a lot”比“It’s touched me a lot”更准确。

Example: Yes, I think some people still keep handwritten letters because they feel personal and show a lot of care. I keep letters from my friends in a small box and open it once a year to read them again. They remind me of important moments and make me feel quite emotional.

Suggestion: 回答直接，理由清楚，并且使用了“since”连接原因，整体比较有效。需要修正语法和搭配：“because I always lose them”不能省略主语；“for for”是重复；“a note-taking app”需要加冠词和连字符。还可以把“paper and pens”与手机应用进行更自然的对比，使答案更流畅。

Example: Honestly, I don’t usually carry paper and pens because I often lose them and find them inconvenient. Instead, I use a note-taking app on my phone, since I always have my phone with me. It’s more reliable and makes it easier to organize my notes.

× Making papercraft is really interesting and help me unwind after a busy day.

✓ Making papercraft is really interesting and helps me unwind after a busy day.

主语“Making papercraft”是一个动名词短语，整体看作第三人称单数，所以并列动词“help”要变成“helps”。建议注意：当主语是动名词短语或单数名词时，一般现在时的动词通常要加-s或-es。

× As a child, I used to draw animals and flowers on paper and feed them in different color Koreans.

✓ As a child, I used to draw animals and flowers on paper and feed them in different colors Koreans.

“different”表示不同的多个颜色时，通常要使用复数形式“colors”。不过，“Koreans”本身看起来可能是听写或用词错误；这里只根据指定的语法问题修改了“color”的单复数。

× I only write physical letters on special kitchens like birthday card for close friends or thank you notes for important events.

✓ I only write physical letters on special kitchens like a birthday card for close friends or thank-you notes for important events.

“birthday card”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。当表示一个生日卡片时，应说“a birthday card”。

× Emails is much more convenient because I send messages instantly no matter where I am.

✓ Emails are much more convenient because I send messages instantly no matter where I am.

主语“Emails”是复数，因此系动词要使用复数形式“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。建议先判断主语是单数还是复数，再选择“is”或“are”。

× I think handwriting letters for my friends are a personal gift and show a lot of respect.

✓ I think handwriting letters for my friends is a personal gift and shows a lot of respect.

“handwriting letters for my friends”是动名词短语，整体作单数主语，所以要使用“is”和“shows”。动名词短语作主语时，谓语动词通常使用单数形式。

× I think handwriting letters for my friends are a personal gift and show a lot of respect, so I kept them in a box and opened it often a year to read the letters again.

✓ I think handwriting letters for my friends is a personal gift and shows a lot of respect, so I keep them in a box and open it once a year to read the letters again.

这里描述的是现在仍然保持的习惯，前面的“I think”也使用现在时，因此“kept”和“opened”应改为现在时“keep”和“open”。描述目前的习惯或事实时，应使用一般现在时。

× I think handwriting letters for my friends are a personal gift and show a lot of respect, so I kept them in a box and opened it often a year to read the letters again.

✓ I think handwriting letters for my friends is a personal gift and shows a lot of respect, so I keep them in a box and open it once a year to read the letters again.

“often a year”不能正确表达“一年一次”。表示固定频率时，应使用“once a year”。其他常见表达还有“twice a year”和“three times a year”。

× It's touched me a lot.

✓ It touches me a lot.

这里是在表达这件事现在给说话者带来的感受，所以使用一般现在时“touches”更合适。“It’s touched”容易被理解为“It is touched”的被动结构，不能准确表达“它让我感动”。

× Honestly I don't usually carry paper and pens because always lost them and I find them inconvenient for for important notes.

✓ Honestly, I don't usually carry paper and pens because I always lose them, and I find them inconvenient for important notes.

“because always lost them”缺少主语，句子结构不完整。应补充主语“I”，形成完整的“because I always lose them”。另外，“for for”中介词重复，应删除一个“for”。

× Honestly I don't usually carry paper and pens because always lost them and I find them inconvenient for for important notes.

✓ Honestly, I don't usually carry paper and pens because I always lose them, and I find them inconvenient for important notes.

“I don't usually carry”描述的是现在的习惯，因此原因部分也应使用一般现在时“lose”，而不是过去式“lost”。一般现在时常用于描述习惯、经常发生的行为或普遍情况。

× Honestly I don't usually carry paper and pens because always lost them and I find them inconvenient for for important notes.

✓ Honestly, I don't usually carry paper and pens because I always lose them, and I find them inconvenient for important notes.

“for for”是介词重复使用，正确形式只需要一个“for”。建议检查句子中是否出现重复的介词，尤其是在口语中要注意避免重复。

× I use note taking app on my phone since I always have it with me so it's more reliable and easier to organize.

✓ I use a note-taking app on my phone since I always have it with me, so it's more reliable and easier to organize.

“app”是可数名词单数，第一次提到时需要使用不定冠词“a”。此外，“note-taking”作前置定语时通常加连字符。