Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with the present perfect or past simple consistently. Use “worked on origami” rather than “worked in Origami stuff,” and avoid repetition such as “yes” and “so much work.” Also, capitalize “origami” only at the beginning of a sentence. Connect the school experience and the recent project more naturally, and briefly explain what the rover involved.

Example: Yes, I have made quite a few paper crafts. I learned origami at school, and more recently, I designed an origami rover for a minor college project. It was challenging, but I really enjoyed combining creativity with engineering.

Suggestion: Use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: “we usually wrote” and “I used to make.” The phrase “gifting my clothes” is incorrect; say “giving them to my relatives or friends.” Avoid “except for that” and explain your activities in a clear order. Correct “oriami” to “origami,” and use specific details about the cards or figures.

Example: As a child, I loved making handmade greeting cards for my friends and relatives. I also enjoyed origami, especially folding simple birds, fish, and flowers. I liked decorating the cards with coloured paper because each one felt personal and unique.

Suggestion: The answer is direct and well supported, but “closed ones” should be “loved ones” or “close friends and family.” Make the final clause more natural by saying that letters “create a sense of warmth” and “show how much I care.” You could add a brief example to make the response more specific without exceeding three or four sentences.

Example: Yes, I still write physical letters to my loved ones, especially on birthdays and anniversaries. Although digital messages are quicker, a handwritten letter creates a sense of warmth and shows how much I care. I usually add a personal memory or a short message of encouragement.

Suggestion: Use “handwritten letters,” not “handmade letters,” because the question concerns writing rather than making. Improve the grammar and pronoun agreement: “I have kept them to this day” and “reading them again makes me feel.” Avoid repeating “because,” and clearly state your opinion before giving your personal example. Explain why letters are meaningful, such as their emotional or historical value.

Example: Yes, I think many people still keep handwritten letters, particularly when they have emotional value. I have kept several letters from my family because rereading them makes me feel close to the people who wrote them. They also preserve memories in a more personal way than ordinary text messages.

Suggestion: Avoid using both “as” and “so” in the same clause. Replace “important data which is depicted in the class” with the more natural “important information from class” or “notes during lectures.” The contrast is useful, but make it clearer by saying that you carry them to college, not when socialising. Use “a pen and some paper” and avoid the informal or unclear phrase “going out or chilling.”

Example: Yes, I usually carry a pen and some paper when I go to college because I often need to take notes during lectures. However, when I go out socially, I normally leave them at home because I prefer to travel light. I only take them if I expect to need them.

× Yes, during my school days I have worked in Origami stuff very much and recently in my college my minor project was also related to making an Origami Rover.

✓ Yes, during my school days, I worked with origami a lot, and recently, at college, my minor project was also related to making an origami rover.

The phrase during my school days refers to a finished period in the past, so the simple past worked is more appropriate than the present perfect have worked.

× I have worked in Origami stuff very much and recently in my college my minor project was also related to making an Origami Rover.

✓ I worked with origami a lot, and recently, at college, my minor project was also related to making an origami rover.

Use work with when referring to a material or activity. Use at college rather than in my college when referring to the place where you study.

× As a child we usually write on the paper but except for that I used to make very creative greeting cards for gifting my clothes and I used to make the oriami stuff which is like making a bird or making a fish from it.

✓ As a child, I usually wrote on paper, but apart from that, I used to make very creative greeting cards and origami things, such as birds and fish.

The phrase as a child describes a past period, so write should be changed to the simple past wrote. The phrase used to make already correctly expresses a repeated past activity.

× As a child we usually write on the paper.

✓ As a child, I usually wrote on paper.

Paper is used as an uncountable material in this general meaning, so it normally does not need the definite article the.

× I still write physical letters to my closed ones.

✓ I still write physical letters to my close ones.

Close is the correct adjective for people with whom you have a strong personal relationship. Closed means not open.

× I think yes because I have also received handmade letters and I have still kept it till date.

✓ I think so, because I have also received handwritten letters and have kept them to this day.

Letters is plural, so it must be replaced with the plural pronoun them. The phrase to this day is a natural expression for something that remains true until now.

× I think yes because I have also received handmade letters and I have still kept it till date because it reading that paper again feels that the person is still with you and still around you.

✓ I think so, because I have also received handwritten letters and have kept them to this day. Reading those letters again makes me feel that the person is still with me and around me.

The original sentence contains two because clauses and the structure it reading that paper again feels is not grammatically complete. Use reading those letters as the subject and makes me feel as the verb phrase. Also, use me consistently when describing the speaker's personal feeling.

× As I am a college student, so yes I really carry pen and paper with me because I have to make notes and write the important data which is depicted in the class.

✓ As I am a college student, I carry a pen and paper with me because I have to make notes and write down the important information presented in class.

As and so should not be used together to introduce the same result clause. Use either As I am a college student, I carry... or I am a college student, so I carry....

× I really carry pen and paper with me.

✓ I really carry a pen and paper with me.

When referring to one countable writing instrument, use the indefinite article a before pen. Paper is an uncountable noun in this context and does not require an article.

× I don't carry pen and paper because I feel that's a burden to carry.

✓ I do not carry a pen and paper because I feel that carrying them is a burden.

Pen and paper refers to two items, so use the plural pronoun them. The phrase carrying them clearly identifies what is considered a burden and produces a more complete sentence structure.