Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答基本回应了问题，但表达非常不自然。应使用“make paper crafts”或“make crafts with paper”，而不是“craft any paper”。“requires me a lot of times”应改为“takes a lot of time”，并且“to create of itself”语义不清。建议先直接回答，再给出一个简短、具体的原因；避免使用过于抽象的表达。

Example: No, I haven’t made many paper crafts. I’m not very good at making things by hand, and it usually takes a lot of time and patience. I prefer simpler hobbies, such as reading or watching films.

Suggestion: 答案中有明显的词汇和语法问题，影响理解。“would like”应改为过去习惯“used to like”或“would make”；“air print”可能想表达“paper airplane”，而“pray it”应为“play with it”。“the easiest way of toys to in my child”不符合英语表达。建议明确说明童年喜欢制作什么、为什么喜欢，以及和谁一起玩。

Example: When I was a child, I used to make paper airplanes. They were easy to make, and I enjoyed flying them with my friends in the playground. We sometimes had competitions to see whose airplane could fly the farthest.

Suggestion: 答案直接表达了否定观点，也给出了原因，但语法和搭配需要改进。“smart phones”通常写作“smartphones”，“handwriting letter”应改为“writing handwritten letters”，“in nowadays”应改为“nowadays”。建议补充现代通信方式，例如短信或电子邮件，使回答更完整、更具体。

Example: No, I rarely write physical letters nowadays. Because of smartphones and email, it’s much faster to send a message electronically. I usually use instant messaging apps to keep in touch with my friends.

Suggestion: 答案有明确观点和原因，但“especially in elderly”错误，应改为“especially among elderly people”或“especially older people”。“So yes”不够自然，可以直接说“Yes, some people do”。此外，不应把所有老年人都概括为不熟悉科技；可以提到手写信具有纪念意义，内容会被保存下来，从而让回答更具体、更有深度。

Example: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters, especially older people. They may value them because the letters are personal and often bring back meaningful memories. Some people also keep old letters from family members as souvenirs.

Suggestion: 回答的核心意思可以理解，但“carry out my pants”是严重的词汇错误，应该是“carry a pen and some paper”或“keep them in my bag”。“the next moment whether I should sign the documents”表达不自然，可以改为“in case I need to sign something”。建议先明确说明携带什么，再说明用途，并使用“in case”连接原因。

Example: Yes, I usually carry a pen and a small notebook when I go out. I keep them in my bag in case I need to write something down or sign a document. They are also useful for making quick notes.

× No, I don't craft any paper because crafting is an art which requires me a lot of times to create of itself.

✓ No, I don't craft with paper because crafting is an art that requires a lot of time.

“Time”表示抽象的时间，通常不可数，因此不能说“a lot of times”。这里应使用不可数名词“a lot of time”。另外，“requires me a lot of time”结构不自然，应改为“requires a lot of time”。

× No, I don't craft any paper because crafting is an art which requires me a lot of times to create of itself.

✓ No, I don't craft with paper because crafting is an art that requires a lot of time to create something.

“requires me a lot of times to create of itself”句子结构错误。“create of itself”不能表达“创作某物”，应使用“create something”。同时，“craft with paper”比“craft paper”更符合“用纸做手工”的表达。

× I would like to make a simple air print with a paper because it is the easiest way of toys to in my child. Besides I would like to pray it with my friends

✓ As a child, I liked making simple paper airplanes because they were easy toys to make. Besides, I liked playing with them with my friends.

问题询问童年时喜欢做什么，因此应使用过去时“liked”。“would like”通常表示现在的愿望，不适合这里描述童年习惯。

× I would like to make a simple air print with a paper because it is the easiest way of toys to in my child. Besides I would like to pray it with my friends

✓ As a child, I liked making simple paper airplanes because they were easy toys to make. Besides, I liked playing with them with my friends.

“in my child”介词使用错误。表示“在我小时候”应说“as a child”或“when I was a child”，不能使用“in”。

× I would like to make a simple air print with a paper because it is the easiest way of toys to in my child. Besides I would like to pray it with my friends

✓ As a child, I liked making simple paper airplanes because they were easy toys to make. Besides, I liked playing with them with my friends.

前文指的是复数名词“toys”或“paper airplanes”，所以不能用单数代词“it”，应使用复数代词“them”。

× I would like to make a simple air print with a paper because it is the easiest way of toys to in my child. Besides I would like to pray it with my friends

✓ As a child, I liked making simple paper airplanes because they were easy toys to make. Besides, I liked playing with them with my friends.

“the easiest way of toys to in my child”结构不完整且搭配错误。表达“容易制作的玩具”可以使用“easy toys to make”。此外，“Besides”连接新句子时后面应加逗号。

× No, due to the rapid development of smart phones handwriting letter is not common in nowadays

✓ No, due to the rapid development of smartphones, handwritten letters are not common nowadays.

“handwriting letter”不能正确修饰“letters”。这里需要使用过去分词“handwritten”，表示“手写的”，而不是现在分词“handwriting”。

× No, due to the rapid development of smart phones handwriting letter is not common in nowadays

✓ No, due to the rapid development of smartphones, handwritten letters are not common nowadays.

“letter”是可数名词，而且这里泛指手写信件，所以应使用复数形式“letters”。“smartphone”在这里也表示一类事物，通常使用复数“smartphones”。

× No, due to the rapid development of smart phones handwriting letter is not common in nowadays

✓ No, due to the rapid development of smartphones, handwritten letters are not common nowadays.

主语“handwritten letters”是复数，因此谓语不能使用单数形式“is”，应改为复数形式“are”。

× No, due to the rapid development of smart phones handwriting letter is not common in nowadays

✓ No, due to the rapid development of smartphones, handwritten letters are not common nowadays.

“nowadays”本身就是副词，表示“如今”，前面不需要介词“in”。因此应直接说“common nowadays”，不能说“common in nowadays”。

× So yes, especially in elderly because they are not familiar with the latest technology.

✓ Yes, especially among the elderly, because they are not familiar with the latest technology.

“elderly”表示一类人时，应使用“the elderly”，意思是“老年人”。不能直接说“in elderly”。

× So yes, especially in elderly because they are not familiar with the latest technology.

✓ Yes, especially among the elderly, because they are not familiar with the latest technology.

表示“在老年人当中”应使用介词“among”，所以应说“among the elderly”，而不是“in elderly”。

× Yes, when I go out I will carry out my pants because I don't know the next moment whether I should sign the documents

✓ Yes, when I go out, I will carry paper and pens with me because I don't know whether I might need to sign documents.

“carry out”表示“执行或完成”，不表示“随身携带”。表达随身携带某物时，应使用“carry ... with me”。此外，“the next moment”不符合这里的语境，直接使用“whether I might need to...”更自然。

× Yes, when I go out I will carry out my pants because I don't know the next moment whether I should sign the documents

✓ Yes, when I go out, I will carry paper and pens with me because I don't know whether I might need to sign documents.

原句中的“carry out my pants”结构和语义都不正确。根据问题内容，应明确回答携带“paper and pens”，并使用“carry ... with me”构成完整、自然的句子。