Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes. I often make small paper crafts for friends’ special occasions. For example, at my friend’s graduation I folded a little paper guard and wrote several short notes to congratulate her, which made her feel very appreciated. Seeing her happy reaction made me proud.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and specific, coherent details. Use linking words (for example, and, so) and correct basic grammar. Mention one or two concrete activities and why you liked them.

Example: As a child, I liked drawing and writing on paper. For example, I often sketched natural scenes to remind me of places I had visited, and I coloured the drawings with my favourite bright pens so the memories felt more vivid.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organise examples with linking words. Be specific about occasions and reduce repetition. Correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g. ‘special occasions’).

Example: Yes, I still write physical letters, but only on special occasions. For instance, I write handwritten notes for my parents’ birthdays and my partner’s birthday, and sometimes for important milestones like graduations.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion, then give balanced, specific reasons using linking words. Use correct expressions (e.g. ‘depends on’ and ‘keep them for memories’). Avoid unclear phrases.

Example: I think it depends on the person. Some people keep handwritten letters as treasured memories, while others throw them away because of space or privacy concerns.

Suggestion: Give a direct statement plus one clear reason and a simple example. Fix grammar (use ‘carry’ not ‘am’) and use natural phrases like ‘jot down ideas’ or ‘take notes’. Keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen. I like to jot down ideas or reminders when I’m out, because writing helps me remember things and I can review my notes later.

× Yes, I made it before when my friends graduation day I made a little guard for her and make some notes for her.

✓ Yes, I made something before for my friend's graduation day: I made a small card for her and wrote some notes for her.

The sentence mixes past and present verbs and has tense and word-choice errors. Use past tense consistently (made, wrote). Also correct possessive form 'friend's' and 'card' instead of 'guard', and change 'make' to 'wrote' to match past time reference.

× She feels very appreciated for my work and I'm very happy to see her face when she receives it.

✓ She felt very appreciative of my work and I was very happy to see her face when she received it.

The original uses incorrect verb forms and adjective choice. 'Feel appreciative' is correct, but because the event is past, use past tense ('felt', 'was', 'received'). Also use 'appreciative of' rather than 'appreciated for'.

× I usually wrote something on my paper such as sketching the view the nature to remind me which pedi go away I go there.

✓ I usually wrote on paper, sketching views of nature to remind me of places I had been and wanted to visit again.

The sentence mixes tenses and has unclear phrasing. Keep past tense 'wrote' and use gerund phrases correctly ('sketching views of nature'). Use 'remind me of' for correct preposition and clarify 'places I had been' instead of 'which pedi go away'.

× Yeah, I also met them with many color that I like.

✓ Yes, I also decorated them with many colors that I liked.

Verb 'met' is incorrect; 'decorated' or 'colored' fits the context. Use plural 'colors' and past tense 'liked' to match the time frame.

× Yes, I do, but only special time Sad my parents' birthday, my boyfriend's birthday and my special day with someone who has learned, I usually write, I usually write a physical letter to send to them.

✓ Yes, I do, but only on special occasions such as my parents' birthdays, my boyfriend's birthday, and other important days; I usually write a physical letter to send to them.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words ('Sad', 'someone who has learned'). Reorganize into a clear compound sentence, use 'on special occasions', correct plural 'birthdays', and remove redundancy.

× I think it's depend on personal perspectives.

✓ I think it depends on personal preferences.

Use third person singular verb 'depends' to agree with 'it' (subject-verb agreement) and 'preferences' is a more natural noun than 'perspectives'.

× Some people like to keep anything on copy for their memory but on the other hand, many people always throw it away because it's risk of their carport.

✓ Some people like to keep copies of letters for their memories, but other people throw them away because of the risk of damage or lack of storage space.

'Anything' and 'on copy' are incorrect; use 'copies of letters'. 'Always' is too strong; 'other people' contrasts better. 'Risk of their carport' is unclear — replace with 'risk of damage or lack of storage space' to convey likely reasons.

× Yes, I am. I like to remind something on paper and rose some idea I have to think about them in not book or hand brightened because it can remind me and I like to see the capital in the paper sometime.

✓ Yes, I do. I like to note things on paper and write down ideas so I can think about them later; a notebook or scrap of paper helps me remember and I like seeing my notes on paper sometimes.

Original has many incorrect words and tense inconsistencies. Use 'do' for short affirmative answer. 'Note' or 'write down ideas' is appropriate. Clarify purpose ('so I can think about them later') and use nouns 'notebook' or 'scrap of paper'. Make verbs consistent and correct word choice ('sometimes').