Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be careful with word choice and sentence fluency. Replace incorrect words ("pepper" → "paper") and combine short fragments into one or two clear sentences. Use a topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Pronunciation and hesitation should be minimized.

Example: Yes. I made many crafts with paper when I was a child, such as paper airplanes and greeting cards. I also made simple wedding invitations for relatives, which I enjoyed because it let me be creative.

Suggestion: This answer is relevant and coherent but could be expanded with a brief reason or specific example using a linking word. Combine ideas into one fluent sentence and avoid vague phrasing.

Example: I used to fold paper into shapes and send them by post to my family, because I wanted to surprise them with a small handmade gift.

Suggestion: Grammar and word choice need attention ("letters has" → "letters have"). Make sentences concise and natural; use a linking word to explain purpose and effect. Avoid repeating similar ideas twice.

Example: Yes, I still write physical letters to my husband and children to check on them and hear about school; these letters help me feel closer to them.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural by using full expressions and a linking word. Provide a brief specific example or contrast with modern alternatives to enrich the response.

Example: Yes, many people still write handwritten notes for invitations or wedding cards, and some prefer them for personal messages instead of emails.

Suggestion: Correct the word error ("pepper" → "paper") and make the sentence more natural: explain when and why you carry them with a concrete example. Avoid vague phrases like "write details."

Example: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out so I can jot down important details, directions, or memorable moments, such as a place I want to visit again.

× Yes, I've made some crafts with pepper.

✓ Yes, I've made some crafts with paper.

Wrong word choice (not in list) but treated as sentence correction: 'pepper' is incorrect noun; 'paper' fits context. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary to match topic.

× In my early childhood.

✓ When I was a child.

Sentence fragment (sentence structure error). 'In my early childhood.' is not a complete sentence in this context. Use a full clause 'When I was a child' to connect to previous statement.

× I used to make airplanes.

✓ I used to make airplanes.

No grammatical error: correct past habit construction 'used to' with plural noun 'airplanes' matches subject.

× Uh, greeting cards and also invitation cards for the wedding.

✓ I also made greeting cards and invitation cards for weddings.

Sentence fragment/structure error. Make it a complete clause and pluralize 'wedding' to 'weddings' for general statements. Use parallel structure 'greeting cards and invitation cards'.

× I used to fold the paper and send them via mailbox to my family members.

✓ I used to fold the paper and send it through the mail to my family members.

Incorrect use of prepositions and pronoun agreement. 'Via mailbox' is unnatural; use 'through the mail' or 'by mail'. 'Paper' is uncountable/singular so pronoun should be 'it' rather than 'them'.

× Yes, I do write physical letters to my husband, my kids, just to check on them and to know how they're doing in school.

✓ Yes, I write physical letters to my husband and my kids to check on them and find out how they're doing in school.

Article errors and wordiness. 'Do' is unnecessary for simple present; remove for natural style. Use 'and' instead of comma, and 'find out' is more natural than 'to know' here.

× Physical letters has helped me to bond with my family and also to create love.

✓ Physical letters have helped me bond with my family and create closeness.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'Physical letters' (plural) requires 'have' not 'has'. Also improve word choice: 'create love' is awkward; 'create closeness' or 'strengthen our bond' is clearer. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helped'.

× Yes, people still do handwritten letters today to invite, to do wedding cards and also to pass some messages.

✓ Yes, people still write handwritten letters today to send invitations, make wedding cards, and pass on messages.

Sentence structure and verb choice. Use 'write handwritten letters' not 'do handwritten letters'. Use parallel verb forms 'send, make, and pass on'. 'Pass some messages' is vague; 'pass on messages' is idiomatic.

× Yes, I do carry pepper and pens when I'm going out because it helps me to write details and for memories.

✓ Yes, I do carry paper and pens when I go out because they help me write details and keep memories.

Incorrect use of prepositions/pronouns and wrong noun. 'Pepper' is wrong word; should be 'paper'. Use present simple 'I go out' rather than 'I'm going out' for habitual action. Pronoun agreement: 'they help me' matches plural 'paper and pens'. Use 'keep memories' or 'record memories' instead of 'for memories'.'