Paper— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify the topic sentence and correct basic grammar and word choice. Start with a clear statement describing what you made, avoid repetition, and use correct nouns and verbs. Add one supporting detail explaining why you like it. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

Example: Yes. I have made many paper crafts, especially paper flamingos. I enjoy making them because they are colorful and relatively simple to fold.

Suggestion: Use natural phrasing and correct comparative/adjective forms. Begin with a direct answer, then give a brief reason using a linking word (because/so). Replace 'more easy' with 'easier' and avoid contractions only if you want a formal tone.

Example: No, I don't. I prefer to use email because it's much easier and faster than writing physical letters.

Suggestion: Make the opinion structure clearer and use correct comparative forms and linking words. Start with 'I don't think so' or 'I think fewer people keep handwritten letters' then give specific reasons and examples. Use 'faster' and 'easier' instead of 'more fast' and 'more easy.'

Example: I don't think so. Fewer people keep handwritten letters today because digital communication is faster and easier, so most people prefer emails or messages for everyday correspondence.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar: use one clear reason and connect ideas with a linking phrase. Replace 'our screen time is more today' with 'we spend more time on screens nowadays.' Say 'it helps me take notes' instead of 'help me for taking notes.'

Example: Yes, I do. I prefer to carry a notebook and a pen because we spend more time on screens nowadays, and writing by hand helps me take quick notes and remember information better.

Suggestion: Provide a clear past-tense topic sentence and a specific supporting detail about how you learned or what you made. Avoid fillers and hesitations. Use past tense consistently (I loved, I learned) and mention a brief example or method of learning.

Example: I loved making origami as a child. I learned many folds from tutorials on the Internet and usually made cranes and frogs to give to my friends.

× I love to making flam Flamingo it's the my favorite.

✓ I love making flamingos; they're my favorite.

The structure 'love to making' is incorrect. After verbs like 'love' you can use the gerund ('making') or the infinitive ('to make'), but not both together. Also 'Flamingo' should be lowercase and plural if referring to the craft type, and 'it's the my favorite' has article and pronoun errors; use 'they're my favorite.' Suggestion: use 'I love making flamingos.'

× I love to use paper for making origami.

✓ I loved using paper to make origami.

The original has 'love to use' plus 'for making' which is awkward. For a past habit (question asked 'What did you like to do as a child?') use past tense 'loved' and combine verbs properly: 'using paper to make origami' or 'use paper to make origami.' Use gerund after preposition 'for' when appropriate, but here 'to make' is clearer.

× I when I was a child I tried to learn do something with paper like origami.

✓ When I was a child, I tried to learn to do things with paper, like origami.

The sentence mixes forms: 'learn do' is incorrect; after 'learn' use the infinitive 'to do.' Also pluralize 'something' to 'things' for general activities. The tense 'tried' is correct past; add commas and reorder for clarity.

× I think no, because it's more difficult than you can use e-mail for everything.

✓ I don't think so, because it's more difficult, and you can use e-mail for everything.

'I think no' is unnatural; use 'I don't think so.' Also the comparative idea needs a clearer connector: 'because it's more difficult, and you can use e-mail for everything.' This fixes sentence structure and makes tense/use consistent.

× No, I don't. I'd prefer to use e-mail because it's more easy for me.

✓ No, I don't. I'd prefer to use e-mail because it's easier for me.

'More easy' is nonstandard; use the comparative adjective 'easier.' Maintain contraction 'I'd' and keep meaning intact.

× It's more fast and easy.

✓ It's faster and easier.

Use comparative adjectives: 'faster' and 'easier' rather than 'more fast' and 'more easy.'

× I prefer to carry paper and pen because our screen time is is more today.

✓ I prefer to carry paper and a pen because our screen time is higher today.

'Our' is acceptable but the phrase 'is is more today' is incorrect/redundant; use 'is higher today.' Also include article 'a' before 'pen.' Alternatively 'screen time is greater today.'

× It can help me for taking notes.

✓ It can help me take notes.

Use the bare infinitive 'take' after 'help' rather than 'for taking.' 'Help me to take notes' is also acceptable, but 'help me take notes' is more natural.

× Yes I I have made a overcome with paper.

✓ Yes, I have made a 'coombe' with paper.

Original is unclear: 'made a overcome' is ungrammatical; likely mispronunciation. If intended craft name is 'origami' or 'paper owl' replace accordingly. I guessed 'coombe' but if intended 'paper crown' correction would be 'Yes, I have made a paper crown.' The main issue is sentence structure and word choice; use a correct noun for the craft and proper article placement.

× I love to making flam Flamingo it's the my favorite.

✓ I love making flamingos; they're my favorite.

Also 'the my favorite' mixes definite article with possessive; remove 'the' before 'my.' Use 'they're my favorite.'

× I TR uh I used the Internet for learning this.

✓ I used the Internet to learn this.

After 'used the Internet' the infinitive 'to learn' is natural; 'for learning' is awkward. Remove filler 'TR uh' in written form.